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From the Notebooks of Hermione by SpellBound05

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 330 Reviews
Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.
Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 05/15/06 Title: Chapter 20: Sugar and Spice

You are a great writer I love this story it made me smile the whole way through. I really love how Harry and Hermione got together, I really just want to ignore the first chapter and believe that it all works out happy in the end and they all live happily ever after, but I guess its not like that huh.

The Unseemly Proposal by sparx

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 5429 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 02/13/06 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Hermione’s Decision

I love this story!! I can't wait for you to add more chapters. You have captured the characters soooo well! I could actually see this happening if they had been put in the same situation in the seventh book. You are a really great writer, please keep it up!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I have added chapter 29, so hopefully you like that one as well. I think you being able to imagine this situation up is more than I could ask for! That’s just awesome. Once again, thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 04/08/06 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- The Big Game

Another great chapter!!!!! I can't wait to read what happens!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!! The next one should be out soon!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 10/25/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- More Rumors

Yay It was worth the wait. I'm worried about how Ron is going to act, hope he doesnt do anything stupid. Glad you're back. Keep up the great work :)

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 11/05/07 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

Oh Man!!! What happened!!! I never minded cliffies until now!!! Great chapter by the way. I hope Pansy gets found out. Poor Hermione, Draco is such a sap sometimes.

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 12/24/06 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34- Revelations

YAY!! That was worth the wait! Great Chapter

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 03/29/06 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- Tension

Great Chapter. I loved the whole thing and was dissapointed it finished!! keep them coming!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope your disappointment won't last too long cos the next chapter should be on its way!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 05/23/06 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- Closer

Don't say sorry!! If anyone says anything bad about you making us wait then they should pull their head in and realise that they should be lucky that we have you to write such a cool story! You have a totally excellent story here and who cares if it took so long to come it was worth the wait!! (and rant over lol)

I love how you didn't do the whole, Draco being all lovey dovey and totally out of character and how he is still worried about how he looks to the school. I love your writing style and the way the characters aren’t OCC. I can't wait to see what happens when they have to go backto school.

By the way congrats on the Dramione Awards you really deserve it!! :)

Author's Response: Awww, thank you for that Kiwi_Chick! That was really sweet and I was really, really touched by that. It means a lot to me that you would think it was worth the wait because I know the waits can get ridiculous from time to time. So thank you for that, dear. You made my day, really! =D

Yes, I didn’t think it would be appropriate for Draco to get all lovey-dovey from one such experience. In fact, it is kinda hard to see Draco lovey-dovey at all, isn\'t it? Thank you for liking the way I write and I try to keep my characters as in-character as possible, even though I know they do stray once in a while! I do hope you like the scene when they go back to school…

Thanks for the congrats and for the wonderful review! I won only because you guys are soooo awesome!

Harry Potter and the Legacy of the Founders by VoldemortsPatronus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 636 Reviews
Summary: The war is on and the only person with the power to stop Voldemort's second reign of terror is sulking alone in a cold, dark room. The unexpected arrival of an old school chum in Privet Drive jolts him to action, however, as Harry begins his most exciting year at Hogwarts. Year 6 will include a visit to the ancient village of Godric's Hollow; a first hand account of the 1000 year old quarrel that ripped Hogwarts apart; a Fred and George-style farewell to a certain ex-Minister of Magic; and the discovery of the Half-Blood Prince, a mysterious figure who holds the key to winning the war...

(And, as J.K. says, what's life without a little romance?)
Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 12/16/06 Title: Chapter 37: The Crypt of Hogwarts

That was soooo great! I didnt expect Bella to be there, how did they get in?!? I can't wait to read whats in the next diary!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 12/06/06 Title: Chapter 36: Secretsss

I have just finished reading it right through for the first time and it is sooo good. I love the interaction between Harry and Ginny. I also love how you have showed that Slytherins arnt all like Malfoy. I especially loved that Harry has a home in Godrics Hollow still, and the christmas holidays with Remus was great (I'm a big fan of Lupin!) Anyway enough of my gushing, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 45: The Captive of Slytherin

I think you summed this chapter up for me in the last few lines

"It was too simple. Too preposterous. Too obvious.

It was brilliant."

I totally loved this chapter, making the half blood prince fawkes, Brilliant!!! What a great twist!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 40: eriseD straeH

Yay!! I love how they found the mirror again. I hope the spy isnt anyone that has betrayed Harrys trust.

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 02/28/07 Title: Chapter 41: Fortune's Fool

Great chapter!! I love how you wrote Hermione. I can't wait to see what Ginny says when he tells her.

A Thousand Words by annie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1740 Reviews
Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings – and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.

Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.

Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!
Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 12/15/06 Title: Chapter 26: One Love, One Lifetime

OMG!! I can't believe she said yes! thats horrible! Poor Draco hes going to be heartbroken. I can't wait to see what happens but I'm kinda scared to read it too....

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 12/23/06 Title: Chapter 27: The Prison of His Mind

YAY!!! That chapter was sooooo great!! I'm such a huge fan of this fic!I can't wait till next year to see what happens. I love the cliffy ending!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 01/31/07 Title: Chapter 33: One Final Question

I never saw that coming!!! Its believable that Draco would act that way since he was soo worried that Ron would take Hermione away from him. I don't think Hermione would go back to ron properly as she would feel empty. Great chapter. I can't wait for your next.

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 01/08/07 Title: Chapter 29: The Final Threshold

All I can say is....WOW. That chapter gave me butterflies the whole time. I felt so nervous. I cant wait for the next chapter. This is my fav fic EVER!!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 01/03/07 Title: Chapter 28: Silent Tears

This is my fav chapter. I can't wait to see what shadow writes back after what he found out. Oh and I feel so sorry for Ron, he must be so embarrased and confused. But I'm kinda glad coz I dont want Hermione to marry him.

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 12/06/06 Title: Chapter 25: Savour Each Sensation

This is one of my fav chapters. I can't wait for your next!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 24: Swirling Mist

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read you next. I love the way you write the characters, very true to how the are in jkr's books.