My name is Jasmine, I'm fourteen-years-old and I attend a Catholic school by day, turning into the author who dubs herself "dragon" by night. I don't really write or read too much fanfiction anymore, though, although I enjoy slashy goodness (D/H, D/R) or a good D/Hr fic any day! I enjoy Cocoa Cola, sunflower seeds (f**k the orthodontist) chocolate, and a whole lot of Harry Potter.
Summary: But something happened that day...something that I, as a young and innocent 11-year old, could not place at that moment, but now can. That was the day I fell in love. (D/G songfic to Hoobastank - Escape)
"I have no desire for death. No suicide ever had." --Sarah Kane I think you proved that fact wonderfully. It was a great one time fic and it gave all of the hurt and desperation that would be involved if Ginny ever fell in love with Draco Malfoy. I hope you publish more fics--your talent is undeniable!
Summary: Ginny Weasley is smarter than you think. That's why she's tutoring a Slytherin a year ahead of her. Even if she's the smart one, when she wants a boyfriend and falls in love with a certain someone, love can make even a smart person feel stupid.
Great fic! I loved the way you portrayed Ginny as a more goofy, down to earth girl rather than a dark princess. Draco's a bit OOC but it's good and you are going to have to update it ASAP!
Author's Response: Yes, Draco is a bit OOC. I have to admit that myself. I hate the fact about that but then I liek OOC Drakie better than mean old brat. :) Draco'll probably be OOC throughtout. ^^
Summary: Draco pushed away the only girl that he loved, and who would love him back. Through the three dark chapters, Draco's pain, and his lost flame's also, is brought to attention.
It's really good--sad and depressing but good. I liked that song "Whiskey Lullaby." It seems very fitting. I'll have to go and read a happy story now...this one's gotten me all sad. Still a 10/10 story, though!
This chapter was really kind of short and quick, it would probably be better if you added more details. Either way, you caught Draco's essence. Keep going!
Author's Response: So, yall want more 'details'. What next: Do you want more "chapters", would you like it in "hard back", how about I get "JKR" to "write it"!Well everybody's a critics!...LOL I'm just messin' with ya. Good idea,thanks.
What can I say about this fic that won't make me sound stupid? Okay...here it goes: Draco's hot, Harry's hot, I love how you made them both hot badasses, black is hot, I can't wait for a new chapter, please keep going! I think that just about does it.
I love R rated stories--life isn't all PG. I can't wait for an update. I am greatly anticipating the next few chapters, especially when we will start to delve into darker issues. I will also love to see how Draco works his way into this. I just have to hope that you will swerve clear of cliches and write a great story!
Summary: Two people who have hated each other since they met, have suddenly begun to take interest in eac other. Was it meant to be? Or is there some foul play? In the end, there is one fatality, but is it of the heart or of the body of someone who once loved another?
You're story is pretty good but in this review I am mostly going to give you a bit of constructive criticism. First off, at times it seems like you are rambling. Try and slow down a little bit but also try not and seem dull. Second off, you are following some major cliches. I know that it is hard not to bring Hermione and Draco together without them being attracted to each other and since the book has portrayed Hermione as a bookworm and Draco is more pointy brining them together must be a hard thing to do. But to have Hermione to look drop dead gorgeous overnight is kind of unlikely. She is already gorgeous! Yule Ball anyone? For future fics I will advise to try and have them be attracted by (i.e.) intellectual similarities. I will still look forward to future chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review and i am glad you were able to point out some things that i could fix! I really do appreciate it when i get some good consturctive critcism.
Summary: THE LAST CHAPTER IS IN! Read, review and enjoy!
The first battle of the second War- Dementors illegally issuing the Kiss on Death Eaters- A murder in the Weasley family- Voldemort's plans- Dumbledore's and Harry's struggle.
In the midst of this chaos and hardship, Hermione is left feeling slightly disheartened. When Harry and Ron are temporarily unavailable to befriend her, an ironic and seemingly platonic relationship is born. Will it ease the pain of the War's influence, or will it only create further turmoil for a girl that needs anything but?
And in the end, a terrible decision is left to be made; one that no natural person would envy.
So far, this story is badass, pardon my French. Your vocabulary is great--can you do my Literature homework for me? Well, you are going to have to post your next few chapters ASAP so I can see how everyone's favorite evil blonde will worm his way into the story. Of course, you're in my favorites, so I will be watching to make sure!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! This is my first attempt at an actual story, and I couldn't be more pleased with the reviews. It really does entice me to write like mad; which, rest assured, I have been!
Summary: He knew why he could not stop thinking of her. His body pulsated with the urge to see her. She didn't trust herself around humans, so how did she come to trust her greatest challenge? This is their story.
This was a good fic, what little of it is up! Although Leather and Libraries is my ship, you have kind of shed a little bit more light on the idea of Draco and Ginny. It was kind of confusing at first but I am sure that after most readers read the first few paragraphs they will understand why it is that way. Please, post a bit more and I'd like it if you go into more depth with Ginny's mental illness, if you could call it that.
No offense, but I could tell this was your first story. Just try and put more details into it and you'll be fine. Otherwise, good story!
Hello everyone! This is dragon, the author. I would love reviews, especially any criticism. And everyone, as soon as you review my fic, I will go out and review yours! Damn, I sound really happy here, don't I? That's so OOC for me. Love (your faithful servant) of fanfics, dragon
Summary: “They’re alive, you know,” said Luna. “The stars. You can tell, if you know them well enough. They’re full of emotion. Like that one—” she took an arm from behind her head and pointed at some faraway star, “—is quite unhappy tonight.”
You have captured Luna and Ron very well. You also showed the way they compliment each other. That's what a good author does. Keep up the good work!
Summary: Some things never change. Friendships, romance, classes... for the most part, those things stay the same. But not in this case. What would you do if you suddenly developed feelings for someone you'd hated forever, but after awhile you realized you never actually hated them in the first place? You wouldn't really think this was such a big deal, now, would you? But if you take into consideration who you are and who they are, you will realize that no one will accept your relationship. Not even your closest friends who have been by your side for years and years helping you through thick and thin...
This seems like an interesting story. I will definitely have to read more. I hope you give something from Hermione's perspective, too, and I want to figure out what this tower has to do with everything...You've roped me in! You've got me thinking--that's definitely a good thing, seeing how little thinking I have been doing recently.
Author's Response: Thanks! You won't find out what the tower has to do with everything till later, but that'll make you want to read it more... hehe
Summary: During the final war, Ginny believed she had lost the one she loved most. Pushed to move on, she becomes an advice columnist for The Daily Prophet and recieves a mysterious letter that forces her to examine the past and look for the truth in the lie. DG
Looks like you went over the word limit. Might want to change that. Anyway, this was a pretty good story. Kind of long, though. At first I was kind of confused by the way you went back and forth but it doesn't really take away from the story. Update please!
Summary: Just a fluffy little Draco/Ginny poem that I wrote while in a particularly romantic mood. Sounds dumb, but give it a try...
This was a cute, fluffy little poem. I think it says quite a bit in quite a condensed amount of words. Maybe you should try and write another one from Ginny's perspective, seeing that I can't really tell you to add another chapter. :-)
Author's Response: Hm...that's actually not a bad idea. Maybe I will try a companion piece in Ginny's POV..
A little confusing? That was very confusing. I would say to just post the stories on Mugglenet in the order you want them read thus solving your readers a lot of confusion. As for the story, it is well written. Luna is a very interesting character, as is Ron, and the important thing in this ship is to keep them true to character, which you have done. Just keep going!
Author's Response: about out of order...I'm not going to finish/continue this or Everything's Changing until after Summer Romance and it's sequal is finished...these are just a bit of a teaser/preview! Sorry 'bout the confusion!
Summary: Song fic based on Take That's "Pray". Draco knows that they're over, but he still can't forget the girl who helped him see the light for the first time...
This is a very sweet story. Well, I guess it is more bittersweet. Still good, though.
Author's Response: Thankyou. Glad ya liked it.
Summary: Luna really want to kill whoever came up with the nickname 'Loony Luna' when along comes someone to cheer her up. “I’m glad my father’s in Azkaban. I realized that all these years the reason I was so cold… so cruel… was because I was a coward. I was afraid of him, and it disgusted me. So I took it out on others…” One shot ficlet.
Ha! This means that I am technically the first reviewer! Go me!
Okay, now that I am turning in dragon the reviewer, I must become serious and sound all articulate and s**t.
Great story! I liked the way you portrayed Draco and the way that you kind of lead off leaves room for a sequel. Luna was cool, too, although I'm not really much of a Luna person--well, you know that. So, keep putting stuff up on Mugglenet, it seems to be worth the wait!
Author's Response: It so is worth the wait! Way better than DC, but I still miss IHP... Oh well, they'll come back eventually *fingers crossed* I hope... I added another story of mine and I'm waiting for it to get accepted, cross your fingers!
Summary: After Lucius' imprisonment Draco is set free to mold his own future, his plans involve gaining back the respect the Malfoy name once held in the Wizarding World. Ginny, capitalizes on a chance encounter and is pulled into Draco's quest for power.
This was a good introduction to a story. I see you have a little build up and I am interested to see how you will make Draco and Ginny fall in love. Keep going!
Summary: It has been 10 years since Hermione left Hogwarts. She has not seen or spoken to Ron or Harry since their seventh year. She married Draco Malfoy. It was her relationship with Draco that seemed to have ruined Hermione's friendship with Ron and Harry. Hermione is forced to relive these memories when she recives a letter from Harry telling her Mr. Weasley has died. Will they be able to mend their friendship? or will her love for Draco drive her friends away forever?
It's a very interesting fic, you have started there! Too bad I didn't catch on late. I hate when I do that. Anyway, you have got to continue. Just as I was starting to get intrigued, there are no more chapters left! Come on, keep posting!
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! i just posted the next chapter, i hope you like it!!!