I'll Pick You Up by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 360]
Summary:
“Guilt brings people together. It’s a takes one to know one type thing.”
James Potter has always been a spoiled, arrogant, lazy show-off. When he enters his final year at Hogwarts School, he’s Head Boy . . . and he’s still a spoiled, arrogant, lazy, show-off. But because of that terrible summer, he’s also guilt-ridden.
Lily Evans has always been a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. When she begins her last year at Hogwarts, she’s Head Girl . . . and still a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. But the first night back — and the murder that takes the entire school by surprise — leave her guilt-ridden as well.
With the darkness that’s surrounding the Wizarding world slowly seeping, at long last, onto the grounds of Hogwarts and into the lives of James Potter and Lily Evans, what comes next?
*Completed*
A great chapter, you really likes to create a lot of angst when it comes to Lily. But I think it's an interesting beginning you have written. James and Lily bonding when they looking after the killer...
I hope you update soon!
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Author's Response: I am a big fan of the angst, I'll admit. I'm glad you think the beginning interesting and I'll try and update as quickly as I can! Thanks for the review.
Interesting start, I'm looking forward for you next chapter /Osced
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad.
Great chapter, I really liked their talk in the three broomsticks. It was funny how hard James tried to get information from Tate without getting anyway..
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Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing their talk in the Three Broomsticks, so its good to know you liked it, too :) And poor James, trying and failing. Thanks for the review!
A really great story! I loved the epilogue!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! :)
Wow great ending with the possibility that Grace is the killer, looking forward for the next chapter
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Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
And Every Day is a Start by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 19]
Summary: "My marriage is falling apart for no apparent reason," she declares.
Ginny Potter loves her husband, loves her children, and loves her life. At least, she used to. But things are changing, and she's not sure why. *one-shot*
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
All My Life by Secret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 27]
Summary: When Lily and James are both awarded the Head Boy and Head Girl position, they are forced to get along for the sake of their school. Unfortunately, neither Lily nor James are willing to let their guard down. What results is a story that is so passionately tumultuous, neither one of them ever realizes that they have not only crossed the thin line between love and hate...but they are now dancing in its depths.
As the entire magical world battles the oncoming threat of He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named, Lily and James will have to learn that the only way to defeat the darkness is to find the light...in themselves.
Interesting start, I'm looking forward to read more!
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Tales of the Battle by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 272]
Summary:
Over fifty people died at the Battle of Hogwarts. There are dozens of stories of loss, betrayal, heroism and sacrifice. These are some of those stories.
Nominated for: Best General (Chaptered) story – Quicksilver Quills 2011
Oh loved this chapter...interesting to read through Buckbeak's point of view
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Author's Response: Thanks
This was my first attempt at a second person poit of view. I've recently tried it again in Owl Post. -N-
Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 430]
Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)
-E. E. Cummings
September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D
Great chapter, I loved the Lily/Petunia moment, they ought to have some relationship left...looking forward for the next chapter
Great chapter, I loved the part when James asked Sirius if he had hexed those girls! keep up the great work!
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Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it, chapter four is on the way!
I loved how Peter complained about them calling him a mouse....great chapter
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The Phoenix Or The Flame by GinnyRULES
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 118]
Summary: Several years after the final battle, Dudley Dursley is struggling to come to terms with his past and the things he has done wrong. His life is turned upside down when he meets a charming young witch and is drawn into a path that leads him back into his cousin's world.
Great chapter, I loved Dudley reaction to everything magic in this chapter and his musing about war in the wizarding world was hilarious..looking forward to read the next chapter.//Osced
World Enough by Willow Rosenberg
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The Marauders have left school behind them just as war has fallen across the Wizarding World at last--quiet and invisible, but war nonetheless. And on the front lines is this small group of young Hogwarts graduates who have moved from pranking battles to something far more serious.
In this third and final installment to the James and Lily story begun in “Trickster” and “Stars Apart,” the Marauders join their friends in the Order as a part of what feels more and more like a fight they have no chance of winning. In the middle of it all, love grows and friendships break, trust forms and wavers, and warriors who are barely more than children must learn not only how to fight but what they are fighting for.
I really enjoyed the broomstick discussion between James & Lily, it was perfect James being obsessed with the broomstick and Lily complaining about the cold. But I'm not sure what I thought about the Will part, he's really portrayed as not so nice person. Had the feeling that he felt something more than attraction to Lily, but their conversion made wondering if it really was so.
Keep up the great work!
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Author's Response: Lily does sort of attract assholes, doesn't she ;)
I love the opening with Sirius as a dog. And I liked the chapter overall but I puzzle about the description of The Prewets, they're Molly's brothers, thus should be red haired. Or did I miss something?
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Author's Response: thanks!! and haha aren't they? I guess I consider strawberry blondes redheads, but it's totally possible that i just have no grasp of what names of hair colors actually mean