17, female from London
That's so true - I hate those damn claw machines! I've lost many a pound on them. Good job with the funnies, I wouldn't be surprised if it were the real reason for his snarkiness! :D
Very good so far! 'In character' Snape, interesting OC, and an intriguing beginning. I don't normally like Snape fics but you've done well here. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m glad you are enjoying it, especially since you don\'t usually read Snape fics. Thanks for reviewing!
Great to see this up, Anyanka. Dean's one of the more interesting Gryffindors, considering his back story. Good job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement Seventh :)