Summary: This story starts during the summer between Harry's fifth and sixth year. It follows his journey from the skinny, guilt-ridden Boy Who Lived to the Man Who Would Defeat Voldemort. Some H/G and R/Hr romance. Chapter 50 is up!!!! STORY COMPLETE!!! Written pre-HBP. This story no longer follows cannon.
Excellent story. Very well thought out and equally well written. I have to wonder how the sequel will progress with Harry being so massively powerful at the beginning of it. I like your explanation for how Dunbledore always seemed to know more than possible about the happenings in Hogwarts. Well done and I look forward to the sequel.
Interesting. When he calls on the green fire to cast the Patronus it comes out as a phoenix? Could this affect his animagus transformation? I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out. Excellent story so far.
Excellent beginning. Now it's time to binge on the rest of it.
Strong emotion is hard to write well. You did it wonderfully.
My hat's off to you (or it would be if I wore a hat) for another fine chapter. I was especially empressed with the sorting hat song. Very well done.
Summary: (Hi, I wrote this when I was 16, please keep that in mind. I'm keeping it up because people still like it.)
So, you want to be an evil villain? In this handbook that a certain Hogwarts student purchases, all of the rules, techniques, and frequently asked questions about evil villainy are explained. Do you have what it takes? And what will happen to the student who purchases the book? Another story from the strange, twisted, and slightly unfortunate Hermione's Revenge.
I like it so far. I've read three of your other stories, and in author's notes in each of them you mention your story "Hogwart's Overturned", but when I click on your author page, the story is not there. Has it been removed? I'm interested to read everything you have. Where can I find it?
Neville's nemesis? At first I was thinking Professor Snape, but then I remembered that horrible stuffed vulture on his Gran's hat. Wouldn't that be funny? Of course, I can't see Neville being evil in the first place, but I'm colorblind. I can't see a lot of things ; )
I think Neville will use this handbook of evil villainy to become a master jokester like Fred and George. After all, don't you sometimes refer to someone as evil after you have become the subject of one of their pranks?
Your list of pointless evil is missing the most evil act of all.
Talking at the theater.
Summary: 7th Yr Sequel to Ancient Magic. It is now known the power of immortality resides inside Harry and Ginny. Will their combined powers be enough to protect them from the Dark Lord?
I just finished reading everything up to and including chapter 35 over the past two months and had to tell you that this is one of the best pieces of fiction I have ever read. Definitely THE best on Mugglenet. You have seemingly captured every character not of your own creation, flawlessly. You should be published, if you're not already. I am very interested to know what you could do with a world and characters all your own. Both BLOOD OF THE HEART and ANCIENT MAGIC were creative, consistent, and very well written. Excellent Job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm not sure about that "flawlessly" bit, but it makes me smile to think you think so! No, I'm not published, but who knows? Maybe one day :)
Summary: It's a rescue, really. At least, that's what Fred and George Weasley manage to convince him of. After all, Hermione is sure to be a target for revenge seeking Purebloods - what could any right-minded Wizard do but step in to help?
But with the shadow of Voldemort still hanging over a frightened community, Oliver is about to find out that the consequences of doing the right thing can get very out of hand!
An Oliver Wood/Hermione Granger Romance
It's just a coincidence that Draco's Patronus is a creature with a bushy tail...right? Because Hermione has bushy hair, and Draco's Patronus having at least some bushy hair might indicate...something.
I am eagerly, yet patiently waiting for the next chapter of this excellent story.
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I expected a bit more interaction between Tonks and the Dursleys, but you have a solid beginning here anyway.
I thought I recognized that last bit about the ring.
I only have a couple criticisms.
First, the bedroom scene: It bordered on cheesy, plotless, cliched, and unrealistic romance novels. The only thing that kept it from crossing that line was the fact that you ended it when you did.
Second, the Harry/Ginny reconciliation: Like most fanfics of this kind, you did it a bit too quickly. They meet and he apologises by way of a kiss. I came out of nowhere as if Bullwinkle pulled it out of his hat. There needs to be SOME interaction between them to lead up to it.
In spite of those nitpicks, I think you have a good story on your hands. Over-all, it is well written. If you pay attention to the authors on this site (as well as over on the forums), the best writers are the ones who read a lot. I am surprised that you have written something of this quality without being an avid reader. (your profile mentions that you had not read anything until you picked up HP after seeing the movie). Reading more and a wide variety of stuff can only make you a better writer.
Now I'll shut up and go read the rest of your story.
Summary: “Imperius… Werewolves…You-Know-Who…” The last words of a dying man force Remus Lupin into a dangerous investigation at the infamous Feral Institute. Sequel to Oblivious; pre-reading would be useful but it isn’t vital.
This is shaping up to be just as good as 'Oblivious'. I wish I had read it immediately afterward. I just wasn't in the mood for it at the time. Your writing is superb, as always.
I want to address the dementor's kiss on a werewolf. If a feral being kissed leaves behind the human mind and the wolf mind is gone for good, then wouldn't the opposite also be true? If a non-feral were to be kissed, the human mind would be gone and the wolf mind would be left behind. That much seems obvious, but what about a transformed werewolf who is not on wolfsbane? Could this be a cure for the danger? They would still be a werewolf, but not lose their mind when transformed. Sort of a permanent wolfsbane? But who would volunteer to test this? Hmmm.....
Summary: After the fall of Voldemort, an ancient nemesis rears his head against the magical world. This time Harry is not the center of any prophecy, but can he prevent it anyway? Can a battle weary Harry Potter stand up to someone who even Voldemort feared?
Excellent beginning. I assume the lollipop and bald head was supposed to have been inspired by Kojak? Most of your readers will never get that reference, even though you mentioned that the twins got it from a television program. I like little things like that. It makes me feel superior to know that I got the reference when others won't.
I like the story. After reading the first two chapters, I decided to review and add it to my favorites. I look forward to the rest of it.
Amazing! Short, but Amazing!
Another unbelievably good chapter. Wow!! You have done a fantastic job of creating something that even Voldemort would be terrified of.
A worm animagus? Interesting idea. That alone would be reason enough not to register. Could you imagine how people would mock you if they knew?
I also liked that Ron, being Harry's best friend, would get the prototype of the Lightning Bolt. Nice touch.
That's what I don't like about Quidditch. Ron stopped every shot, and the whole match still came down to which seeker got the snitch.
Just a guess, but Ron's going to Diagon Alley to buy something 'special' for Hermione. That's why he didn't want her to go along.
This Daktyloi is frightening. And he's only the minion?!
I noticed that Ron's special purchase (for Hermione?) is small enough to fit in a pocket. Could it be a ring?
Author's Response: lol...you\'re making my night man....giving me your impression chapter by chapter. Thanks a LOT for reading :)