Well, about me... I used to be an obsessed James/Lily shipper, but the cliches got to me. I used to be a Draco/Hermione shipper, but I my own image of how they got together and it just feels wrong to read about them meeting any other way. Nowadays, I read anything except Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione. Those are so last year...
I currently have two submissions to Mugglenet at the moment, a poem and a onefic. Poetry isn't an easy thing for me, and even I can see my submission's faults when I read over it. However, practise makes perfect, and if you could read and review it, it would be great! It won't take long!
Anyway... besides that blatant advertising... I have about ten stories that I'm writing at the moment, I just write a bit for each whenever I feel like it.
Outside of Mugglenet and Harry Potter, I enjoy reading classics, listening to classical music and ignoring enourmous piles of homework. :D
Hi I love your story, I've been reading for ages but I couldn't be bothered to review (*blushes*) but I just wanted to say that you're an excellent author, and I would really look forward to having a place to get updates and such on your fictions. Goof luck with the second semester of your senior year!
Oh and also... TG Hermy broke up with Won-Won. Ron is one of my least favourite characters in the entire series, and Hermione totally deserves better! Thanks for finally getting her to realise it :-)
That was very funny, I don'y usually read many stories in the Humor category, but that was just hilarious! Will this stay a one-shot, or can we hope for a sequel? *hint**hint*
Author's Response: Thank you very much ... I don't have any immediate plans for a sequel, but I don't rule it out entirely if inspiration strikes again ...
Overall very good job but I would like to make some suggestions. ~ “Alright, alright. I’ll give you something to eat.” Hermione cut up some apples, that were placed beside her bed, and placed them in a bowl for him to eat. Pigwidgeon immediately flew over to it and started eating. ~ You've used the word 'eat' or a form of that word three times in three sentences. It sounds alright the way it is but it might be better if you use some synonyms such as dine, consume, scoff, wolf down etc. The second point is that you used 21:00 in the invitations as opposed to 9 pm. I think it would have been better if you used 9 pm as that is more commonly accepted, and 21:00 is more battle/navy talk. Other than that it was good job, cute storyline and overall great use of the mind.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for the comments...i'll try and change the "eat" parts...reading it now...the sentence does seem a bit heavy! Oh and I used the 21:00 bcuz i thought it sounded more...formal!
Hey, over the next weeks/months/years you'll come to loathe me because I only ever review if there's something that was bothering me about it, or on a very rare occasion that I think the chapter is just pristing perfect. Today, I must say that the chapter was very good, but Jessie was a little in-your-face. I know she's supposed to be stuck up and all, but I hardly think that anyone could be that egotistic. Other than that, I really like this story. This is a really original idea. Draco/Hermione on a cruise ship: I've never seen that before, and it could be a good basis for some hilarity. Good job, update soon!
I liked this chapter, but I don't think it was your best. I liked the scuba-diving idea and Draco's 'ladies first' remark was just too funny but Hermione sqeeled a lot, and acted like a girly-girl. Violet seems like a Mary-Sue so far, but that would be really easy to correct in later chapters and Jessie is too evil. No one can be that horrible, I'm sure that you can tone her down a bit and keep her as plausible enemy. Can't wait 'til the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked some parts. As for Jessie, anyone can be as horrible and plus it wouldn\'t be all that interesting with a normal, mean person :D Thanks for reviewing!
The chapter in general was a drastic improvement from the last one and I congratulate you on that. The ending was a little weak, I didn't realise it had ended at all until I saw the links to reviews, etc. I would have liked to see a bit more happening that Hermione meeting some new people, but as I said before, it was much better than your last one (not that your last one was that bad, it was quite good actually). Overall a very good job, I have to say that not many people bother with putting too much description into their stories and you do so that does make your story an enjoyable read. Update soon, this story is a really cute and original idea.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am extremely glad that you've enjoyed this chapter! My next chapter is in queue and I hope you enjoy it like you have this one!
Well, it started badly, tailed off a bit in the middle and the less said about the end the better, but other than that, excellent! Just joking :), this was very good, there was only one tiny point that didn't please me, was that Draco fell on top of Hermione, and that is a little cliche, it's been used in more stories than you can count. I liked the internal battle in Malfoy's mind when he was asking for help though, that was very well written. Good job, I have to say that you've amazed me at how fast you've improved since the first chapter. Write soon, I'm getting more and more enthralled in this story with every chapter.
Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you! (My BETA helped me loads too) I know that part was a bit cliche but i put it in anyway lol. Glad you\'re enjoying it so far!
That was beautiful! The characters were very in-character and all of that mumbo-jumbo, but it was so sweet! 10/10, I loved it to bits!
That was beautiful. I'm afraid I can't see Minerva kissing anyone, let alone someone as evil as Tom, but everyone must have been young once eh? 10/10
Absolutely splediferouslyriffic! I like the idea of the present, it really stood out; it wasn't what you'd call the overly-used-romantic gift and that made it perfect.
Author's Response: Now that's a neat word! And an excellent discreet non-spoiling way to refer to the "overly-used-romantic gift" too -- you were probably expecting exactly what you were supposed to. Thanks for reviewing!
In the beginning you used the name Rorack a lot, it would have been better if you changed some of those to a 'he' or a 'him' etc. Other than that, this has potential to become a highly amusing story.
Author's Response: Oh, ok, thanks!
Good job, I can't wait to read more, but I think you might have put little too much emphasis on Marmara's relationship with Serena, unless their dependence on each other is going to be significant later in the story of course. I want to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Marmara and Serena are the very best friends, like we are in reall life. I will try to update as fast as i can.
That was the single sweetest thing I've read all week, and I've been on a fluff-hike recently. Excellent job, I loved the reminiscences at the beginning, and I have to know, is it the pizza guy at the door? Probably not, but this was still really good! If the old rating system was still in place I'd give you a ten/ten, however... well, see ya around!
wow this story is amazing, I can't wait to find out what happens next
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review - job\'s keeping me busy, but I haven\'t abondoned this!
I loved that, it was sooooo good. And Ron is such a prat :-) but this story is definitely one of my favourites, please update soon!
Author's Response: glad you\'re hooked and Ron\'s just being --- well Ron. :-) Chapter 10 is already in queue, hopefully you won\'t have to wait too long.
I loved that, it was so funny and sweet at the same time! It was truly high-larious!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you got the sweet thing too ... I presume you mean the tiny hint of L/J, there? Only, of course, at the minute they\'re only friends ... at the minute.
This was hilarious, cute and just plain sweet. Please don't make us wait for the next installment for that long again!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks very much. I hope I\'ll never take that long again...
to be honest, at first I was a touch disappointed by the masquerade ball, but you ended it on a spectacular note, and I really want to know what happens next so update soon!
Author's Response: Ah well, I\'m glad I could redeem myself. Thanks for sticking with the story!!
Aw that was both funny and sweet! Well done =D
Author's Response: Thank you! What a great review. :)
rofl that "cliffhanger" was hilarious! You really made my day, great story, keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks...I couldn\'t give it away that the cliffhanger had no significance, but hey, it made you read this chapter, right? :)