I, like everyone else here, I love Harry Potter! But after waiting so long for the 6th book I was very dissappionted! I didn't like that Dumbledore had to die and thought the book was too short! Now I'm a H/HR shipper, so it made me mad that Harry all of a sudden likes the new, barbie doll made over, Ginny bloody sodding Weasley. And what really made me mad was that Hermione and Ron are looking to get together! I know Harry and Ginny won't last, but Ron and Hermione *GRR* !!! So Harry better hook up with Hermione NOW before Ron does! I also highly recommend Hutchinson's Luna's Truth or Dare and anything written by livingbreathingdream and my favorite author SecretKeeeper.
I am now offically NON-CANON!!!!!!!!
Got to keep the hope!!!!!
Summary: What caused Lily to loathe James and James to loathe Lily? How did they come to fall in love? What bumps and bruises did they acquire along the way? From hexing to comforting, this is the way it all started. Endure dangers and hardships, perplexity and mind games, and matters of the heart.
Your story was great! It is sad to read the long J/L stories because you know how its going to end. I normally notice when they are about to die because the author says its late October or Halloween. But I think if you hadn't put that they died before you wrote the scene, I would have forget because I was so caught up with the story. The end seemed a little rushed but I guess you can't really lenghten the part where James and Lily die. Once again I loved the story.
Summary: Snow is simply miraculous-- so delicate, and yet indestructible. It can teach lessons, widen eyes, and even open hearts. (One-Shot.)
That was *sniffles* beautiful. The snowball metaphor was brilliant! You are an amazing writer! I LOVE all your stories!
UPDATE: Guys, I'm back!
The innocence Iíve lost
The blood it's cost
Leaves unhealed scars within.
But I will not abate,
I will employ the hate
That has been planted deep inside.
I will not falter
Valor will not tire,
And I will survive
This trial by fire.
Many things are different now. Potions class is the least of the trio's worries. Battling dragons would be a welcome alternative to what it is they're attempting to battle now. The Order of the Phoenix is hallow without its leading member. And when someone close to Harry is stolen, Dumbledore's rhetoric of love, hope, and faith is challenged. Harry's strength and resolve are pushed to their limits. Loyalties are tested and new leaders emerge while Harry and Hermione struggle to balance new emotions and uncharted territory. Yet while this time after sixth year proves to be drastically unlike anything Harry's ever experienced, some truths remain, and some affections stand solid.
A novel-type story that explores the engimas of Snape, Horcruxes, war, and above all, the puzzle of love. HBP compliant. HHr.
That was amazing!! I loved all the emotion in this chapter! You have such a great way of leaving a reader wanting to read more!! You really have a future in writing!! PLease update soon!!! I give it a 10000000000000000000000000000000/10!
Author's Response: Why hello there! Wow, I\'m so glad I didn\'t disappoint! And even more glad you think I have a \"future in writing.\" *BLUSHES* Thank you, truly. I\'m only sorry I can\'t do more to thank you besides the dedication I gave in this chapter. <3!
Secretkeeper, its been 9 months, and I think that you've given up this story. It looks like your not finishing it, and I'm so sad because this was easily my favorite story despite the fact that it wasn't finished. I want you to know that your one of the best authors ever.
A very depressed reviewer
DEMENTORS!!!! That's my guess for the soul suckers!! I LOVED your new chapter!!!! It kind of seems like Ron doesn't like Hermione that much. Which is fine by me!! ^_^ I was soooo nervous when Madam Pomfrey came down! You could really feel the tension!! Once again I LOVE your story!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That might be the only chapter that I will willingly wait months for! It was beautiful! The emotion made you get all chocked up, expecially when mentioning Hagrid and Sirius! once again it was AMAZING!!!!!! I will wait, but I hope you update sooner than last time.
I reread it it and I liked it better the second time! Your writing is just so incredible! Please continue writing and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! :)
I read it again and I still LOVE it!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WON THE QUICKSILVER AWARDS!!! YOU TOTALLY DERSERVE IT!!!!! I KNEW THAT YOU WOULD WIN!!! I EVEN SIGNED UP SO THAT I COULD VOTE FOR YOU!!!!! ONCE AGAIN CONGRATS!!!!
PLEASE SAY THAT YOU DIDN'T STOP WRITING THIS!!!! PLEASE SAY THAT YOUR GOING TO UPDATE AT CHRISTMAS AS A GIFT TO YOUR LOVING FANS!!! PLEASE SAY YOUR LOVE OF WRITING STILL LIVES EVEN THOUGH YOU PROBABLY READ THE AWFULNESS THAT WAS hp7. PLEASE SAY THAT YOU'LL UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
A desperate, begging fan of your story.
OMG! This was one of the best fics I've read! I love how you have portrayed Harry. When I read it I feel like I'm there. I also love how Harry and Hermione are so subtle it's wonderful!! OH PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. Your story is beyond words. I give it infinite/10!!!! You are a great writer!!!!!!!
Once again you amazed me! Your writing is just so beautiful! I like how Harry and Hermione getting together. It's not like other fics where they just fall in love, this one is actually real! I love your story sooooo much! Think about writing professionally! Update soon! I give it an infinate/10!
Hey me again. I thought of more things to say. You honestly should write a book. You are a fantastic writer. When Ron was taken away I was crying! Your just soooooo amazing. I have added you to my favorite fics. Love is not strong enough a word to describe how wonderful your story is. You definatly have a future in writing. I would have totally read a twenty page fic, if it was written by you. Like I said before PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I can't stand not hearing what's going to happen!:)
Yeah H/Hr romance! I love that it wasn't the full " I Love You " thing. They were so innocent. I really hope Ron's alright. Once again your writing has amazed me. I wish sometimes you wrote the real Harry Potter books. Please Update Soon! 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
This chapter is a perfect example of why you won the Quicksilver Awards! I love the way you played Snape's part! The fact that he was under two unbreakable vows! That is so original and make a lot of sense!! If you counldn't tell already i LOVE this chapter!! The intense emotion has you waiting, breathless with what could possibly happen!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Simply amazing. This chapter was so intense. I can't believe how big a cliff hanger that was!! I LOVE your story soooooo much!!!! The word "fine" was ingenious it amazed me! You really get lost in the your story!!! When Harry was deciding what to do I wanted to scream NOOOO HARRY!! DON'T DO IT!!! I can't wait for your next chapter!!! Can't wait to see more with Harry, Hermione, and Ron!! Once again your story is simply AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. I give it the same rating infinite/10!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! What a review! *blushes* Yeah, I have to admit it was quite painful writing Harry's decision... but of course, not near as bad for me, since I know what's going to happen. ;) Thanks again love, next chapter's for you! :)
NOOOOOOOOOOO NOT HAGRID!!!!! WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE!!!!!!! Besides that part I LOVED this chapter. I was holding my breath during the Harry and Hermione encounter! I guessed right it was a dementor!!!!! I can't wait to see how Harry is going to pull that one off!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I got to know how Harry will reaction to this! Once again you write beautifully and just put me in the story!!!!! Please continue writing!!!!
P.S. I loved the poem in the beginning and the end!!!!!!
It's been FIFTEEN months since your last update. This is my fifth review for this chapter, and hopefully my last. Its not fair that something as great as your work goes unfinished, but JKR's crap gets finished and she gets paid for it. I can't really give up hope that you might update, so I'll sit and wait. This probably makes me delusional, but I've been called that before and I will wear that title proudly. I will forever beg for an update. You really have to finish this. Please.
A hopelessly delusional desperate reviewer.
I hope you haven't given up on this story. It's my favorite!! It's been 6 months since you last updated. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
I LOVE how you write!!!!!! That was beautiful!!! You could feel the tension as you read it, like you were there in the room!!! I like how you don't have them getting together right away!! Your story is so real!!! Your writing left me speechless!!! This is by far my favorite story and your my favorite author!!! I really think that if you write a book people will LOVE it!!! You really should have written the HP books!!! You really are very talented!!! PLEASE continue writing and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you so much HPAndHG! What stunning compliments! Also, thank you for being so consistent with your reviews. I always look forward to what you have to say. And I really can\'t tell you how relieved I am that you didn\'t think this chapter was rubbish. Once I realized how long it had been since my previous update, I sort of went into panic mode and forced myself to write it. I\'ve had this story mapped out for a while, so it wasn\'t about figuring it out; it was just about wording everything properly, to spark the emotion and imagery I try to exude. So I really wasn\'t sure about this one. But, I guess one can never accurately judge their own work, right? Which makes me so glad I have a judge as fantastic as you. :)