Let's see, I'm seventeen, come from a country named Belgium, and I like to eat pizza around midnight.
I'm currently writing two chaptered fics, one named The Modern Marauders, which is my seventh year fic, and another named The Pendle Witches, which is set at the end of the sixteenth century and the beginning of the seventeenth century. I've written a prologue and a first chapter so far, and know I should write more, but for the moment I can't find the right mood to do so.
I've also written a one-shot, Gone for Good, which probably is a bit experimental to many of you, or just plainly bizarre, but it's narration with a poetical undertone, even if there isn't a line of poetry in it.
Other than that, I've got quite a few ideas that I should execute one day, but like many, I don't have the time, nor the courage to write x stories at the same time. It'll only confuse me.
Now, a sneak preview to the fourth chapter. I'm not sure when it'll be up though.
“Is the oath ready?” James asked.
“I finished it a couple hours ago,” Peter answered.
“Well, where is it?” Sirius asked.
“Oh. It’s in my trunk, I’ll go and get it,” Peter said. He went to the trunk aside of the left bed. He grabbed a piece of parchment and returned.
“All right. Moony, you know what we must do?” James asked.
Wonderful job, made me a bit jealous of Harry/Draco!
I enjoyed reading it, but it was gone this fast... It would have been better if you'd gave a more complete evolution of Harry and Draco. You've only had three "highlights": meeting each other, the first kiss and the coming out. I'm really wondering about the time in between, it'd be nice if more canon disputes between Slytherin and Gryffindor were featured. I'm also a bit lost in Harry and Draco smoking, it doesn't really has a prelude, you know? It's kind of pointless to put it in your story, I never read about a Hogwarts student smoking.
Wonderful story, really. Nice job on handling with the Marauders!
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me that, Konrad! It means a lot.
Lovely story, except that uhm...you've made a mistake. I quote from the HBP, UK Hardback first edition p.596: "Harry rose early to pack the next day; the Hogwarts Express would be leaving an hour after the funeral."
This makes your story a bit impossible, too bad, though, I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Well that is why it is fanfiction. So we can have our fun (and who knows trains have been known to have problems). Thanks for reading and thanks so much for your comments!
Marvelous, really. I enjoyed reading this, it's quite refreshing in comparition with other fics. I'm afraid I can't be too constructive, the only thing I noticed is that you've entered too much at a certain point.
“Your heart is still going very fast. If I put my ear on your chest I can hear it thumping. It sounds like someone’s after
“I’m sure that someone is. You never know who might want my heart on a silver platter.”
Just so you'd know :-) Furthermore I'd just have to admit that I'm jealous that I didn't wrote this...
Thanks for pointing that out; I\'ll fix it right now.
I\'m almost entirely sure I\'ve never been so flattered in my life...