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Sorting Hat Songs by the nutty imp
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 37]

Summary: A collection of Sorting Hat Songs that I wrote.
To writers, feel free to use it for your fics.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1305 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/17/05 Updated: 02/02/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 02/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Sorting Hat Song 1

GREAT POEM! Keep writing, these are wonderful! you can also review my poem, OUT OF THIN AIR, in the first page of the poetry section.

Author's Response: ^_^

 

Summary: Harry gave his life for Ginny. He had saved her from Voldemort but had not saved her from herself. As Ginny spirals into a pit of guilt, depression, lonelyness and lies deep inside her mind we have to wonder isn't there anyone to save her? to fix her? or is Ginny beyond repair? Chapter 2 is in queue! If you read this please review so I can make it better, thanks!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Self Injury, Suicide

Word count: 110 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
12/04/05 Updated: 01/18/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: The night I died inside

EXCELLENT! It really has a lot of emotion and is beautifuly wtitten. TAKE A 10!

Author's Response: Thanks! I promice chapter 2 is in queue and i like it better than this chapter but please tell me what you think!

 

A Different Road by black_ink
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 497]

Summary: [Year 1: Complete] Harry's a Slytherin and friends with Draco Malfoy. How will his years at Hogwarts turn out, now that he's a Slytherin? Will he turn to the Dark Arts and be a follower of Voldemort? Or will he kill Voldemort, or die trying, after he learns of the prophecy? Will Harry's choices lead him down a different road? Follow and you will see...

"The first step, my son, which one makes in the world, is the one on which depends the rest of our days." -Voltaire

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Violence

Word count: 69340 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/05/05 Updated: 10/09/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 6: Answered and Unaswered Questions

DAMN GOOD! YOU GOT IT BANG ON! Another flawless chapter which yet did not fail to impress!!!! COOL!!!!! I would give it 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999/10. P.S ONLY ONE FLAW, 'YOU NEVER FAIL TO IMPRESS'!!!!!!!

Author's Response: oh thank you. you make me blush. hehe.~Sara

 
Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: A New Beginning

WOW! This is WONDERFUL! Are you JK Rowling in disguise? I guess so. I would've given it a 12 if I could!

Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!! and no, i'm not. i just wish i was her. hope you keep reading! ~Sara

 

The Last Marauder by iliveinaworldofcandy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: This will be a collection of poems about Remus Lupin, the last marauder. In the first poem he is remembering Sirius, and though he fears he will forget some things about him, he knows there is one thing that will stay with him forever. The SSP warning is there only as a precaution, names are not mentioned so the poem can be interpreted differently if you wish. The second chapter, I Weep for the Living is up. The SSP warning doesn't apply, it is not connected to the first chapter. Dumbledore is watching Lupin at the funeral of Lily, James and Peter. And he weeps... for the living.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Slash

Word count: 877 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
12/12/05 Updated: 01/13/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: I remember...

GREAT POEM! It is really good and I just LOVED the theme. Take a well deserved 10! P.S- BY THE WAY, I WRITE POEMS TOO, YOU CAN READ ONE, TITLED "OUT OF THIN AIR", WHICH IS THE THIRD ONE FROM TOP. AND IF YOU HAPPEN TO READ IT, DO REVIEW!

 

Seven Years at Hogwarts by HermyRox12
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: A poem about what the books are. It was originally going to have a part for each year, but none of them compared with the first, so I'm going to leave it as it is.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 114 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/21/06 Updated: 03/05/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Intro

This is reall good, but try adding a little more about eac year's adventures. The poem is otherwise good. Take an 8.

Author's Response: Thanks for the Review!

 

Summary: Written for the Inter-House Unity Poetry Challenge

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 268 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/23/06 Updated: 01/23/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Change Takes Place in Hogwarts

THIS IS EXCELLENT! It IS BY FAR, the BEST poem I've read on this site. The rhyming is mind blowing and you have beautifully presented so much about hagwarts history in a SINGLE poem. It;s hard to rate it out of 10. Well, if I had to, I'd give it an 11. -Marvolo P.S- I'M SERIOUS ABOT THE 11/10!

Author's Response: Wow. Honestly, was not expecting a reaction like that at all. Wasn't expecting one at all. Glad you enjoyed it so much. Now I might actually be prompted to write another...

 
Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Change Takes Place in Hogwarts

Well, I'd made a mistake in reviewing your poem last time. I don't seriously think it deserves an 11. IT DESERVES A TWELVE! PLLLLLEAAAAAAAAASSSSEEE update soon and write such beautiful poems.

Author's Response: ;) You made me laugh. Poetry in the HP world is a bit more difficult that one's OWN poetry because you're writing something more personal than prose from another point of view. I will try though. (I do have other fics, you know. Check out 'Another Side of the Story' a WIP about first year through the eyes of Ron.)

 

Summary: This poem is based on Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven. Harry hasn't been feeling his best lately, so what happens when Voldemort shows up for a nightime visit in order to taunt Harry's shattered dispression? Well, I don't think you'll find the answer in the summary... so read away and watch out for the abundant HBP Spoilers throughout the poem.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1208 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/25/06 Updated: 01/25/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Through the Curtain

Really Good! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much marvolo. :)

 

Recollections by black_ink
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: Random and general poems that I put up as I think of them...


Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1190 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
01/25/06 Updated: 04/19/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Walk

Great job! It is a nice poem and has an excellent flow, even though there are no rhyming words. Keep it up! P.S- You can read my poem, Out Of Thin Air, which is just below yours. It shares a similar theme which I hope you enjoy. And if you happen to read it, please review it.

Author's Response: srry, but i don't really like writing poems that rhyme. thank you!! ~Sara

 
Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 02/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Walk

Really cool! I liked your second poem as much as your first one!

Author's Response: thank you!!! i'll try to add another when i gt the chance. ~Sara

 

A Music-Filled Silence by maraudergrrl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: The title is, I believe, self explanatory.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 276 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
01/26/06 Updated: 07/25/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 02/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: the poem

COOL, 10000000000000000000000000/10 TO BE FRANK!

Author's Response: Thanky-poo, and I think I should clarify what this is about, in case pplz dont know, so okay every poem will be about one magical creature. The first one was the pheonix, and as a preview, the second one will be a dragon. Happy Friday, and thanx again for reviewin!:)

 
Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: the poem

To put it in one word, BEAUTIFUL, RHYTHMIC, EXCELLENT, WONDERFUL, MIND-BLOWING, UNBELIEVABLE, BRILLIANT, EXCEPTIONAL, ADMIRABLE, OUTSTANDING! Are you Rowling in disguise? You can reply at sparsh_fo@yahoo.co.in!P.S thats too many words!

Author's Response: Lol. Nice use of adjectives, you should write a poem yourself. Thank you so much for reviewing!

 

Summary: Lucius regards his son.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 131 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
02/02/06 Updated: 02/02/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 02/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Are you frightened?

DAMN GOOD! Well, one things sure, you are a much better poet than I am or will ever be! Well, one things really bad with this site, you can't give a 12!

 

Summary: Another Death Eater poem. It may be a bit hard to understand. I would like it if you could review it as I want to see if anyone understood it.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 103 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
02/08/06 Updated: 02/08/06


Reviewer: marvolo Signed
Date: 02/10/06 Title: Chapter 1: Closing my eyes...

I UNDERSTOOD IT, AND I LOVED IT!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thank you, what was it about in your mind then?

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