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Hmm, let's see...
My favorite books are (of course) the Harry Potter series, A Series of Unfortunate Events, anything by Agatha Christie(big fan of murder mysteries =D), the Clique series, all of Lois Duncan's books, the series by Diane Duane, The Giver, The Messenger, The City of Ember, The People of Sparks, Holes, Inkheart, The Da Vinci Code,... and more that I can't think of right now.

Want to read list:
Hmm, can't think of anything at the moment...

I love all kinds of music... the only thing I really hate is fusion... well some kinds.

My favorite movies would be:
Pirates of the Caribbean
National Treasure
A whole bunch of Disney movies... yes, Disney
Remember The Titans
A Walk to Remember
Parent Trap
The Truman Show

TV shows:

Gilmore Girls -- funny AND witty. =D

Supenatural -- Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki... honestly, need I say more?

Hello, everybody. I will update again after the queue reopens. I'm sure everyone of you will have plenty to read, seeing as Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows is coming out this weekend. Anyway, as always, happy reading to all. =D

Deathly Hallows was AMAZING!!

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A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)

Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 3: Back at Hogwarts

Yay! This chapter is longer! And once again, I am reviewing. What can I say? I am addicted to this story! =) I like how you described the Head's rooms but I just don't like the idea of having a Head's room. But whatever. I'm sure that there will be many... interesting... scenes because of those rooms! =P I'd say update soon but the next chapter has already been written...

Author's Response: *cough* Sorry...no interesting scenes of a .....interesting...nature. Haha. There are funny scenes..but no *cough* scenes. haha. I think the Head Dorms are just a way to get Lily angrier. Muahaha! Power to the Author!

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Fight and the Punishment

Yay for Lily and James! Snape got what was coming to him, don't you think? Poor Lily, though! Six detentions? That stinks. But whatever, at least she got a chance to knock Snape out! =)

Author's Response: OH yeah....Snape\'s out cold. Muahahah.

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 5: Beside the Lake

Awwwww, so much coupleishnessosity going on here! =) Very, very cute chapter. But so short!! I love the whole Lily/James, Sirius/Nikeia, Remus/Josey, Alice/Frank, and Peter/Peter ness going on! =P Well, I'm off to read more chapters now...

Author's Response: \'Coupleishnessosity\" THere\'s a word you don\'t hear every day. Haha. Thanks for the review....I\'m glad you like them!

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 6: The First Detention

w00t! Go James!! *Sigh* Whatever are we going to do with Lily? She likes him, she doesn't like him, she likes him... I think? =P. I think it was stupid of her to slap him! What is she going to do if she really likes the kiss? Knock him out? =P. Anyway, I'm going to read some more because, really, I just can't stop.

Author's Response: She slapped him becuase she slapped him! He got stupid, kissed her, and everyone needs a slap every once in a while, right? yeah. They do. Haha.

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

As much as I hate Snape (and Stacey), I feel bad for both of them. =( No wonder Snape is always angry... I liked the scene with Lily and Petunia. It seemed like something that I could actually imagine happening.

Author's Response: YAY! Another person who feels sorry for Snape and Stacey. I\'m glad. The poor things. I\'m very happy you liked the scene between Petunia and Lily. I felt that they didn\'t part in complete hatred. After all, Petunia took in Harry...maybe I\'ll make Lily send her a letter..hey, that\'s not a bad idea.

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 7: More Cleaning

Well, I'm going to review, anyhow! =)
Urg, Lily is starting to get one my nerves! She needs to admit her feelings sooner or later... sooner being preferred. How can James be so CALM about all of this? He acts so nice and sweet and like somebody that Lily doesn't deserve! =P. Great chapter..

Author's Response: Yeah, I\'m afraid I\'ve made Lily a bit annoying in this. I\'ll have to think of a chapter of a few that make James the annoying one...muahahah!

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

Aww, that was sad with Snape... so very depressing. Whatever James is going to do, I hope it won't make Lily feel even worse. That would just be stupid of him. But I doubt you would make a character like James do something like that. Well, I'm going to go find out what he does.

Author's Response: Muahahaa...It kinda makes Lily feel better, but she thanks him in the end. i hope you like it....

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 20: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

Hehe, that was a very interesting and funny way for James to get Lily to get back to normal again. =P. Rather strange, but still very funny. =)

Author's Response: It was strange, but hey- they\'re in a magical world. What CAN\'T happen? :-)

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 08/08/06 Title: Chapter 23: The Duel

I loved it! Especially when you were describing what each of the Death Eaters were thinking as they were dueling. Gosh, I knew Bellatrix was a hateful person but hating snow because it is white? That's just a little too weird... but that's okay, because everyone knows she is totally insane. :-) Oh no, everyone seems to be getting hurt! I hope Nikeia gets better soon...

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked that chapter. Very glad. I\'m rather surprised I was able to come up with that idea. Haha. Hey, Bella is Bella. She\'s weird. Everyone gets hurt, but everyone... Not gonna say. Sorry. I have promised that Nikeia does not die. I acutally have an idea for her in a future story.

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 08/08/06 Title: Chapter 24: The Thirteen Inch Scar

Yeah, I liked the scene with Nikeia. It was kind of creepy though... is she in a coma? Haha, I love this part:
Lily marveled at the way they seemed to be able to understand what the other was saying without speaking. She figured that seven years in each otherís company must have something to do with it.

Haha, yeah must have SOMETHING to do with it, right? =) Hehe. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Must have SOMETHING to do with it. haha. I and my mom have this type of connection. I think. But we can look at each toher, and it\'s like we know what we\'re thinking. Think of Danny Ocean and Rusty in Ocean\'s Eleven and Twelve...that\'s what i was going for. HAha. I\'m glad you like it. Nikeia is in a sort of magical coma.

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 8: Conversations

Aww, this was a really cute chapter too! Lily and James! Need I say more? =P. So short though...

Author's Response: I\'m sorry... They are short. Forgive? Yay! :-)

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 8: Conversations

Aww, this was a really cute chapter too! Lily and James! Need I say more? =P. So short though...

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 9: The American

Ahh, Staceykfast. The most important meal of the day, right? =P
I knew that it couldn't be THAT easy for Lily and James to get together. Oh well, hopefully, James won't be stupid enough to get together with Brooke, Brea, or Stacey. =P

Author's Response: Brooke, Brea, of Staceykfest. Haha. I needed somethign to get Lily to where I wanted her. Muahaha.

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 08/08/06 Title: Chapter 25: The Passing Days

Ooh, I like the idea of that type of ball; it sounds nice. Poor Nikeia, she's hardly ever conscious and she has to stay in a hospital wing while all of her friends go to the ball without her. That must stink.
Oh gosh, poor Snape! I hope he doesn't read the Daily Prophet... Hehe, leave it to Sam to make everything so much lighter though! And now, since I have caught up, can proudly say: update soon! Haha. Well, I know the chapter is up but you can't really read it, you know? Anyway, great chapter! =)

Author's Response: Hahah. I will update soon- wait, I already have. haha. I hope you like it when it gets up. You\'ve caught up! Woot! I\'m glad you like it. Don\'t worry, Nikeia understands. ANd you will too after you read it. Muahah. Hehe.

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 08/02/06 Title: Chapter 21: A New Day

Aww, Sam and Monica remind me of James and Lily when in their first year... not that I would know about that but you know what I mean. =P. I loved the spontaneous Quidditch match. Hehe, Nikeia and Sirius are so funny. =D =)

Author's Response: Haha. I\'m not sure if I know what you mean exactly, but I like the idea. Haha. :-) I\'m glad you liked the Quidditch match too. Yay!

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/31/06 Title: Chapter 16: Bad News

Oh my gosh. How terrible! Poor Lily and James!! Argh, now I hate Stacey even more than I did before. Bleck. Such a depressing chapter... but very well written. =P.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry. I did need to do it though. I\'m sorry, again. Thank you very much! I enjoyed knowing that my chapters are well written. YAY!

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/28/06 Title: Chapter 10: Could It Be Jealousy?

So that's it with Stacey? I mean, she isn't going after James anymore? Already? Wow, that was fast. Thank goodness for Lily, then I guess..... =/.
Poor Lily. She must be so confused.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry... I didn\'t reallly think about making Stacey get with James all that much, because I had another idea for her..which you shall soon find out....

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 11: More Detentions

I liked the prank; it's originall. =) I wonder how long it will REALLY take for the Slytherins to get rid of their pink coloring... Hehe. Anyway, it was a good chapter.

Author's Response: Haha. I\'m glad. I\'m afraid I\'m really not that good at following up on that bit of the story. I\'m sorry. thanks!

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 12: Secrets, Questions, Answers, and Doubt

Yay! Lily and James kiss... again! =P. Hehe, I love the way that Lily found out 'the truth' about the Marauders. And, of course, I love the ending... I feel so stupid; I don't know who the couple at the end of the hallway is. I want to guess Stacey and someone but I think you said that she had brown or blonde hair... Hmmmmmm.

Author's Response: i said she had reddish brown- and you\'ve already figured it out. Haha. I\'m glad you liked it! I liked it too. :-)

Reviewer: jamesnlilyforever Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 13: Betrayal

I don't mind it is late... probably because I didn't actually have to wait, but whatever. =P. Bleck, I hate Stacey and Snape. That is just a really sick -for lack of a better word- couple. Ewwwwww. Poor Lily and James; their 'moment' got ruined!

Author's Response: They broke apart before they realized that Stacey and Snape were in the hallway. so their moment wasn\'t completely ruined. Haha. It is kinda gross, but everyone has feelings.