I'm just here to review. Unfortunately I have no time to write, half the time I'm running around like a shell shocked cat covered in potato peelings.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! *Does a jig*
Oh my. This is something new for Harry, he has seen so much death but never anything like this, I can't wait to see how you write his reaction! Keep up the good work! Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!
Author's Response: It is very much in his face now isn\'t it? This time, however, he has heard the final wishes of the departed and had a chance to at least say goodbye! But as for his reaction...me oh my...we are on a slippery slope here! Happy Holidays dear Ms. Hestia Jones!
I just caught onto your story a week or so a go and really got hooked. Great parallels with incorporating the many countries of the world, I really like the logic of it. Also, thank goodness Lupin is back in action! This is by far one of the most original stories I've read on mugglenet. Is Dean the half blood prince?
Author's Response: Hestia I\'m so glad you caught on! *Grins* The countries of the world will play a big role in the future, but we needed to get a taste of the history so that the future makes sense! Oh and as for Lupin, he is definately an action character though he may not seem to be doing much right now. Dean is definately the HBP! Glad you caught that!
This is a SB/GW story. I know it's a major age difference, but if written right, this pairing is beautiful.
AU for SB/GW relationship. - R rating in later chapters.
You're right, they are a good match! Well written, I love the idea of the flame necklace, it sounds amazing.
Beautiful story! ! ! !
Another awesome chapter!! The time you spent working on the moment Ron really payed off! I was half laughing half shocked it was really great! Keep up the sweet work and keeping it original! (which you've done an outstanding job on already)
Perfect chapter! This stories so well organized and all the characters are flawless! Keep up the good work.
Ugh you updated and now they wont validate it......blah
Keep up the good work! You've got Ron's personality down to perfection.
Excellent chapter!! I'm just waiting for the next big break on the Horcrux hunt, you can really sense the frustration. Also, you perfected Lupin's reaction, well done!!
*wow guys...i'm so sorry i havent updated in a while. im not going to make excuses other than say that my computer with the story on it broke--so i'm rewriting the last few chapters. SORRY FOR THE DELAY AND THANK YOU TO ALL MY LOYAL READERS!*
Very nice, I love how Ginny accepted and how you portrayed the thoughts racing through her mind. The only thing that annoyed me was that they had a centaur there to shoot an arrow? That really doesnt seem likely as they are so biased against humans. Besides that teeny little thing excellent job!!
Excellent job! This really pulled the story together nicely, I liked the last comment at the end a lot too. Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. The last chapter will help alot too.
Splendid job! You pulled everything together beauuuuutifully!! The details were really great too. I agree with the other reviewers, a sequel would be AWESOME, but if not good ending..but it kept me wanting more.
Author's Response: Thanks. a review that makes one almost obligated to write a sequel!!!!
I almost cried at the last sentence-almost. I like your story a lot, I just read all of it through today. One thing that would enrich the story a lot would be to add some more magical elements-everything about Fred and George is awesome-but you could add some more things such as spells with the actual incantation verbalized and describe magical objects etc. Just flipping through the books should give you tons of ideas. Keep up the good work! I'll add you to my favorites list and make sure to always review-Scouts Honor!
Author's Response: thankyou, I\'ll try to work more magical elements in.
GREAT JOB. The way you had Harry remember the locket was really believable. Amazing! I cant wait for the next chap.
Author's Response: Thank you once more for your kind words, Hestia. I do appreciate them. And I\'m also glad you liked this chapter, as things get pretty dark between this one and chapter 14 (Christmas!). Keep reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks again!
Ha! I was just about to ask about the apparating but you've answered it and maintained the suspense, great job! I really liked Dumbledore's letter, you captured his mood and vocabulary perfectly. I think you mispelled the pheonix as faukes and it should be fawkes. This chapter had great intensity, keep it up!!!!
Author's Response: Once more, thank you for your flattering review. I\'m so glad you liked Dumbledore\'s letter. That has been my favorite part to write thus far. You are correct in your spelling correction, and it is duly noted. Thanks! And thanks again for the review. Chapter 11 is on the way!
"I donít even know what happened inside that castle, but Iíll be finding out shortly. "hmmmmmm. Great chapter once again. You did Wormtail really well. Will we see more of student life/classes before the next horcrux hunt?
Author's Response: Thanks for another review, Hestia! I\'m glad you liked this chapter. It has been the most difficult yet for me to write. Wormtail was a concern, but I\'m glad you liked him. To answer your question, yes, you will see more of a school atmosphere in the next few chapters. The third Horcrux happens in chapter 13, I believe, so there will be plenty of stuff to keep you busy with. I\'m glad you like my story, and please keep reading! Thanks, also, for taking the time to review. You made my day!
The ending of the chapter was sooo good! It was to the point and poignant. Nice job!
Author's Response: Thank you again for the kind words. It\'s nice to have a fan who reads every chapter. I\'ll be updating soon. Though most of the final chapters are not on here, they are written, so hopefully you\'ll continue to read. The end is upon us! I hope you like the ending.
Another good chapter-it was busy and got a lot accomplished. I really like Garrison, he's talented and seems like more of a lover than a fighter. Cheers.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like Garrison. He\'s been a difficult character to write, as there\'s so much about him that is unknown, and I\'m so tempted to just write it all down. That happens later, though. He does prefer to settle things in a more civilized manner, though, you are right. Thanks for the kind words and I hope you continue reading.