I am a sixteen year old whose in WAY over her head what with friends and homework....
I have already written a review and am about ready to start... for lack of a better word (well not lack but you get the point) yelling at you to update for christs sake!!! I mean cmon how long does it take!!!! Just update soon so I dont have to be evil okay...
Author's Response: I apologise for the long wait, but family matters have been getting in the way recently, and I'm afraid to say that the death of my grandmother is a little more important than my fan-fiction. Like I have said before, I do try to keep on top of my story, but I do not currently have access to a computer that will allow me to sit down and type up chapter eight (I'm using my grandfather's at the moment to reply but he's on cable so it's costing). I am sorry that it's taking a little longer than I anticipated, but my family (myself included) are still grieving over the loss of one of the most amazing people I have ever known. If I tried to write like this, I wouldn't be being true to the story. It would be sloppy and empty, and I don't want to spoil something that I've worked so hard on. Please give me a chance to sort my life out, I will update as soon as I can. Apologies...
BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!! I loved it and the writing was beautiful. Did I detect a hint of fore shadow at the end the though?
Author's Response: Ooh...you'll just have to wait and see... Thank you!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I'll try to update quickly, but I'm back on with GCSEs now. Unfortunately. I'm really pleased, now! You liked it! Yay!!!!!!
I just read the story and oh my god. thats all I have to say. oh my god.
(thats a good thing btw)The whole story so far has been AMAZING! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Yay, you enjoyed it. I'm so very pleased about that!! Update coming in the New Year, just as soon as I've got the whole family-reunion-party-every-night-of-the-holidays thing out of the way. Thanks for reviewing and Happy New Year!!!!
You updated! wow really great job on this chapter.your style hasnt changed to awful much btw. Again Great Job!
Author's Response: Oh thanks. That is a relief, I was pretty worried about that. I'm sorry for the long wait, though. And I will try to keep ahead, but that isn't to say my posts will always be quick. Thank you!
applause... good job
very good its a fave now... thanks alot, post again quick cause my little american ass can get swotty
Author's Response: Hehehe. Thanks much. Aren't Americans just awesome!?!?!?!
It was a good addition to the story however it's rather choppy in places, for example the quidditch scene. It's a fast chapter and I felt rushed. Just call me slowsky!
Author's Response: Very well, Slowsky. I\'m sorry it\'s a bit choppy. I didn\'t really like writing the Quidditch scene. It\'s not one of my favorites.
Neville reflects on what has come to be, and what could have been.
"It's kind of fun to do the impossible." -- Walt Disney
Interesting twist on an old tale. Neville hits the what could have beens right on the nose. I really enjoyed it, but it didn't really sound like Neville. It semed to elegant to be Neville.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought Neville would change as a person if his life took such a dramatic twist. Thanks for the review!
Wow, that was touching. You really showed that every person will have to hold on or give up at one time or another. That was amazing.
One nitpicky thing though, if you space your paragraghs better, it'll look neater and won't look like on big block of text.
Author's Response: Ah. Paragraphs. Mugglenet coding and I don\'t get along, you see. I gave up on trying to get it to look right. :-\\ Sorry if it annoyed you.
Author's Response: on another note though, thanks! I\'m glad you liked the fic. ;)
That was a wonderfully sweet tale, if a little ooc. Other than that, it would've been extremely believable.
Your imagery was amazing. I could picture the dark room with flickering candles... Oh! Just the pictures make me warm inside!
And the ironic tendacies were good as well.
Wow, you have a beta that loves you that much?
Anyways, sweet story, but I couldn't quite figure out who she was spilling her beans to. I knew she had a friend there at the beginning but then there was no reaction from them towards the end; it seemed like she was talking to herself. *Must stop rambling*
Other than that it was a good fluffy fic that didn't fall into the cliche track.
That was excellent, and beautifully written. It was an excellent display of Luna's character and very intriguing. I haven't seen many fics with Luna portrayed as a child, but then I so rarely step outside my own little box.
P.S. 99 red baloons is about the end of the world, destruction of all man kind. I personally think it's the angstyest part of the whole story...
Lily Evans has never particularily liked James Potter, but when she decides to look at him in a different light, she may change her mind... One shot song-fic, based on the song Everywhere by Michelle Branch.
I was about to yell at you about that particular fic but luckily you answered very well to that last response so i will bite my lip on this one... I t was really good though I liked it alot!
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review, and theres no need to yell hehe *sniff* there goes my 5 star streak though... it was good while it lasted, I can tell you that :) Im glad that you liked the story alright!
That was good. A bit long but good all the same. I thouroughly enjoyed your story, and while you did have sentences that didn't make sense, the sentence fluency was pretty good overal.
You hit Ron's reactions right on target. I could just see Rupert Grint going, You're lucky it didn't.
While it was OOC it was well written. The flow was good, and even if it was a little soapy I must say it was a success.
So you like ink heart?
Author's Response: Yes. i do. It is an original plotline, and i allways enjoy those. You?
OOOOOH! That was really really juicy! I was enthralled til the end. Amazing descriptions! I loved it!
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really good job! I liked the plot a lot. You should totally do a sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you. I think I'm going to do a sequal. But I don't think it's going to come out in a while. At least, exoect it after March. I need to come up with a plot and all that yak. Thanks for the reveiw!
That was very well written. The story was well thought out and creatively designed. You summed up your theme in the very last sentence, and I thought that it was clever. I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
It's a cold, rainy day, and Hermione thinks about the Last Battle, and the effects of it on others.
Runner up in the Spring Challenge #2
Wow that was touching... Your symbolism was extravagant and your sentence fluency was on the dot. You may not have recognized it but the part about Ginny seemed very like Anne Frank. (Anne was described as knowing what would happen to her before she left the annex) I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I appreciate your kind words. I have read the diary of Anne Frank, but I have never thought of it like that. Interesting. Thanks again. I'm flattered.;)
Okay, this is probably one of the most original fics I have come across in my three years here on the site. And that is truly saying something. I find myself asking why the best works tend to be incomplete. I will be waiting in the wings for the next chapter. My heart practically broke when I saw I had reached the end of my reading.