That was very different! I suspect Joanne is magical.. is she? Please tell me if that's right.. xD. I liked this quote: "No, I don’t have any siblings myself. Why do you ask? Oh, of course. Just making friendly conversation. I didn’t mean to snap, sorry. I guess I do miss my husband Vernon, makes me quite emotional sometimes, sorry." That's quite characteristic of Petunia. Good job
That was lovely. We all love stories like that - of how some things came to be - in this case, Charlie's fascination. Good job!
That was wonderful. I think it was very well written, very emotional. Aside from the few points Masked One pointed out, it's excellent. Ginny's evolution to the strong character she is now was very well portrayed. Great job!
Great story! I really love it! It's a reallydifferent scene. I think you've got them all in character.. especially Narcissa. I adored this quote:"We were always the daughters of Black. You forgot that. I didn’t.” That is SO like her.. Adding this to my favourites.. But isn't ZOnko's a joke shop? Why's it a sweet shop in this fic?
Awesome, awesome. I really really like it. I am at a loss to see how you can make such simple feelings, thoughts and actions into masterpieces. That was very short, but that's what made it such a good read. Lovely job. D'you write original fiction?
Your portrayal of Sirius is perfect. I love the mood created in the story. Excellent work. **10/10**
That was really good.. I love it. *sigh* perfect characterization of Hermione and Luna.. great job!
This is the first mystery fanfic I read, and I immensely enjoyed it. The prologue was fantastic! It drew me in to read further. I adored your portrayal of Amos. Like Dory said, the Obliviate bit was a bit confusing, but it left us to guess what had happened, and I liked that. My guess: Macnair casted it on Amos, and that's why he forgot what had happened to the letter. Right?! Anyhow, I have to say that I'm adding it to my favourites. 10/10!! - bL
That was very beautiful. I really liked it. The descriptions of spring sounded really,really good. I particularly liked Severus's proposal. I thought that was unique and very different. Great job.
That was wonderful.. I've read 'The Gift of the Magi' by O.Henry, and yes, that was awesome. This story was equally powerful.. I think Lupin deserves something like that, and what each one of them wrote was true word for word. Great job, this fic definitely deserves 10/10.
That was good! It makes sense that Snape was so fascinated by knowledge.. he speaks about the Dark arts exactly as he does in JKR's books.. but different. I think you've done a great job. 10/10.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you :-)... That one was my very first fanfic; I'm glad it still works, even if in some details HBP has quite overtaken it. -S
Its really really good!! Please update soon!
*gasp* *falls off chair laughing*
Good gracious, this is beyond words!
Author's Response: As soon as I find the right soliloquy to utterly destroy *lol*
Oh.. I really loved this. It's not your usual Draco/OC. I loved the fact that Draco was perfectly in character. His thoughts are extremely well-written and the few lines he speaks are very like him..the way he demands the necklace from Deirdre, for example, and the way she snubbed him. I loved those bits a lot. Great job!
Author's Response: Well thank you!! =) Glad you liked it, if only I could get over my block...haha.
I'd always doubted Regulus's being RAB, you know, but you seem to convince me here. I can't get over his characterization. Simply amazing. There are absolutely no words to describe this. I love the way you portray Regulus, and it would be a crime to characterize him in any other way. I adore every single line. 10/10!
Go kiki!! Great story.. lol! I know I've already reviewed this on BTV.. but so what? It deserves another. Way to go!!! Write more!
That was great! Very different.. I love your characterization of Lorraine; it seems natural a character like that is so jealous of Lily.. it's all because she's hankering after James, isn't it? Um, I do have a suggestion though.. I think you should spell-check your document, because there were many errors in the second part. The first part was fine. Hope you don't mind, I just thought I'd point that out. A lovely job on the whole. I'm adding it to my favourites.. Is it going to be a very long one?
This is an excellent missing moment - well-woven in between the two canon scenes. I liked it a lot. :) It makes sense that Harry would not be too ready and willing to let Ron and Hermione into the story, especially considering what he 'did to Ginny' in the end of HBP...
It was clever the way you had specific people help Harry figure his dilemma out - as Cheshlin pointed out. I particularly love that part! The dream was interesting - the way we all dream a confusing mixture of things that happened to us that day. I adore the way you made his subconscious think of dancing with Ginny. (Big H/G shipper! :D).
On the whole, this was a very refreshing one-shot because it wasn't too angsty and wasn't too fluffy. I enjoyed reading the beginning, particularly. Good job, Roxy!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad you thought there was a good balance with not too much angst or fluff. I\'m a huge H/G shipper too (obviously :D). I\'m a firm believer in making the audience relate to what you write and dream sequences are obvious ways of doing this as everyone dreams whether they know it or not and in dreams you can do things that you wouldn\'t do in real life. I\'m sure everyone has dreamed about dancing with someone they really like at least once in their life. I\'m glad you liked my story, thanks for the review. ~ Roxy
Wow, that was really, really good. It's very creative. You have such an easy writing style. I can see how Snape's personality reflects a monkey's. You're such a great writer, I'll check out your other stories when I have more time.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I didn't want a cat or a raven, for once :D. I'm really glad you enjoyed it! -S
Oh wow, that was very good, very different. I liked it a lot. The flow of words was very good, and I thought the message was wonderful.