I am abandoning Peacemaker, I can't help it, my writing style is just too different now. If anyone would like to adopt the plot, just send me a pm and I'll send you the whole plot like thingy. Thank you.
Umm Leeper..Person. I'll give you the plot, but I need an email address to send it to as the one it came from didn't work.
Yay! you updated! I love your story, It's so imagainative, if a bit sad, poor Lily, Everything seemes to happen to her!
Author's Response: Yes. Lily never seems to have it easy does she. I should spread the bad luck out more. ;)
Thanks for the review!
yea, I thought it sounded familiar, but I liked that book, so its okay, Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, that was one of myfavorite books and I thought it would work well as a fan fic. So far so good!
For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
I soooo think she slipped him a love potion, like that darn romilda vane, it soundes like it fits, like whenever he compairs something to her, and says her name, he suddenly remembers he needs to go see her :)
Author's Response: hhhmmm yeah, well youre definately right! the love potion thing happened! Good guessing! keep reviewing, thanks again!
I love this, its creepy and good at the same time, I like how he seems to like her withought even realising it, but they both want to manipulate eachother. How dose Harry hope to find out what's going on? will he just look at the marader's map and find out she's a total insomniak? Please update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: I just so pleased you guys are so absorbed in my story!
Author's Response: just wanted to ask do you think if Harry looks att he map he might see Ginny's name and Tom's!?! Let me know!
Wow, I really like how this is going. When I first heard about the broom closet, I was worried, but I was relieved that you showed it being about the silent, I hope you update soon, because you have a refreshing perspective that gives hope to marauder fics! Much love, update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I wonder what worried you about the broom closet though. What did you think it was going to be about? Anyways, thank you so much=)
Well...Broom closet (in most fics)=snooging...=she just met a creepy guy, who she had a mini crush on...=he seems to like taking advantage of girls...=in broom closets... you know.
Author's Response: Oh, haha, nope no snogging in broom closets for this story! Lol=)
Wow, I really like your story. I like how it puts the maraders into perspective, and I especialy like how you worked out the whole new student thing. I know that is a hard one to work with, and you handeled it beautifuly.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad to finally see some interest in my story, and I hope you'll stick with it=)
Wow, this is a really good spin, and a refreshing start. I'll admit this is the first time I've ventured into the mysterie section, and yours is the first story that caught my eye. I really like it. I was wondering why their last name was evans, and who her parents were. It's really kinda sad that they have to steel for extra. g2g, 10/10
Wow, this is realy interesting, and kinda suspencefull! @_^ hope you update soon!
Wow, that was really good. I feel that it is beleavable, that she would feel drawn to the wizarding world, she probibly has magic in her blood. I really like how you portraid her experiance, and the afterward affect that meeting had on her life. I think that often happens when you meet someone like that, and you carry around the feeling years aftarward. Like how she carried around the lemon drops. This made my day! thank you!!!
Author's Response: I appreciate your kind words. It's interesting how people, even fictional characters, can have such an impact on us.
Hey you have a preety interesting story going, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Why thank you! I've just finished chapter three and shipped it off to my beta so I'll post chapter two once it's OK'd by the mods. Thank you for reading!
Ooh, this is good, I really like how you made it so she was curious, bud didn't start out saying "oh, we should be nice to muggles, la de da." She really is curious, and I can see how that would force her to open her eyes to the world a little more.
Author's Response: Hallo Fraulein, I'm glad you liked that. I decided to ease into her rebellion, because you don't really want another Sirius Black running about. Thanks for the review:)
Wow, I like this! I like how the flash backs give you just enough info to go on withought you having to invent a whole story line. I thought the begining went on a bit long thogh, but that was probibly because I had forgotten which of the 5 pop up browsers I was in, and wanted to know which story I was in, but was to lazy to go back and look at the summarry...well, I like you're story Its good!
This is sooo depressing! why cant she just do cool muggle things? her parents are retarded I think. luv luv, update soon!
Author's Response: Aw, I\'m sorry, I didn\'t originally intend to be so depressing but as you can see it\'s getting that way. And I\'m afraid to say that while her parents are suckish, muggle things would be worse for her than just being a squib. Glad you like it- chapter eight is with a beta and chapter nine is in the works!
YAY! She is moving on! I don't see why she should have to be a care taker, it would make so much more sence if hogwarts had magical caretakers, those idiots! I really like her although she is a bit dence...
Author's Response: lol, I think dense would be an excellent word to describe her at times. Chapter nine is giving me trouble, but I\'ll try to finish it as soon as I can. thanks for the review!
OOOO! how nerve wracking! It makes me nervous just think about their situation. But I really do like the story, and the wrighting style is fantabulous!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. Keep reading and reviewing! :0)
Please update soon! I sarted reading this story befor and then you deleted it, and I was sad. :( but now it's up again, and I'm happy :) so please update really soon!
awww, thats soooo sad! I wish I could go in there and knock some sence into those blighters! dang! Poor Ginny :(
Yay! Patrick loves Medea! Buahahahhahaha! I love your story, update soon!
I had ponderd the meaning of 'aproching' also, I like your interpretation. I also like that you used a boy, as very few people have oc boys as the main charictors anymore (yes I under stand he isn't *really* the main charicter...) It would be cool if you could continue with this train of thought . You know like at hogwarts and stuff... Anyway, you did an awesome job.