Penname: dumbledorefluertwins [Contact]
Real name: Evie - no I am not a Pokemon!
Member Since: 12/17/05
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Hi, I'm Evie. I'm fourteen and I live in Suffolk, England. I have loads of plot bunnies bouncing round my head, so I doubt I'll ever stop doing this! :D Have a read of my stories - go on, you know you want to! :p

I have many more original stories over at the-red-chair under the name apollo13 (which I also use on the forums) so please go and check them out.

I am available to beta, so just email me if you want something done - no slash or student/teacher pairings, please.

~Evie
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He Wasn't All Bad by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: COMPLETE. When trying to decide who might be worse - the Weasley twins or James and Sirius - the Fat Lady retells a story about overhearing James' confession to Lily. One-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3433 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/16/08 Updated: 06/23/08


Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 06/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: He Wasn't All Bad

ah, cute. :) i could just imagine james getting all stuttery and mumbly. :)

 

A Mother's Lament by kalae_zoe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: She placed her head on his chest to see if she could hear a heartbeat. She waited expectantly to hear the gentle thud of his heart beat against her ear. A few seconds turned into several minutes, still no heartbeat. The only heartbeat she could feel was her own as it thumped faster and louder in her chest at each passing second of silence. Why wasn’t his heart beating, unless he really was gone?

“F-Fred, p-please wake up,” she sobbed, not moving her head from her son’s chest.

A look at the Battle of Hogwarts from Molly Weasley’s POV from the death of Fred to her final confrontation with Bellatrix Lestrange.



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 3075 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/21/08 Updated: 07/22/08


Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 07/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Lament

Okay, I have either got the strangest sense of deja vu, or I have read this before . . .

Author's Response: You probably read it on Fanfiction.net I posted it there first, but I may take it down as this version is a lot better (I think anyway). Did you at least like it?

 
Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 07/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Lament

Yes, I liked - sorry I didn't say earlier, I was just very confused!! >.< It was very good, I think you brought out the emotion very well. I loved the line "Not Harry too", because it was just filled with dread and fear, and it was just perfect. :)

~Evie

Author's Response: Thank you Evie. I'm glad to hear you liked it. Thanks for the awesome review.

 

Not So Fragile by leahsm2
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary:
Summary: James Potter fights his first battle and welcomes his first son on the same night.

Challenger: Horsesbella219 The Challenge: “I challenge thee to write about James holding baby Harry for the first time, and his reactions to having a new son, especially during a war.”

I am leahsm2 of Slytherin and this is my entry for the Adoption Center/“I Challenge Thee Challenge”


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1380 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/07/08 Updated: 09/28/08


Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 09/28/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

**Cries**

Beautiful, Leah!! So sweet! You could really feel the raw emotions there!

~Evie

 

After the War by harry4lif
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: The war is over. How will everyone react? Will Harry and Ginny get back together? Or will their love be lost? And most importantly, can everyone learn to live with the choices they made?

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 5936 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
10/20/08 Updated: 06/04/09


Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

wonderful chapter, as per usual, alyssa! :D

~Evie

 

Full Circle by JustLikeHermione77
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Nineteen years after the Battle of Hogwarts, Harry Potter returns to the Headmaster's office at Hogwarts to have a talk with a long-deceased mentor-and finally understands the true strength of love.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1587 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/27/08 Updated: 11/05/08


Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Full Circle

Aw, I love a bit of fluff. :D

Good work!

~Evie

Author's Response: thank you! :-)

 

Dandelion by Rhi for HP
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Dilys Derwent forever reigns in the annals of wizarding history for her reknown as a revolutionary Healer and her distinguished tenure as a Headmistress of Hogwarts. But who was Dilys, called Dandelion in her youth? This story follows her path to legend.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Mild Profanity, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 5051 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
11/16/08 Updated: 11/20/08


Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 11/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: 1. The Sorcerer's Apprentice

wow, Rhi, this is so intriguing! Really excellant start, it's very mysterious,a nd I love the style and vocabulary. I already love Dandelion, and hopefully I should have time to come back for more. :)

~Evie

Author's Response: Evie! *huggles* Thanks so much for stopping by, and I'm glad you liked it!!! <333

 

Albus Severus by ray_16
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Al doesn't like his name. Or being named after two oddballs. He asks Uncle Ron, “Why couldn’t Mum have named me instead?” so then maybe he could have had a better name.

Well, this is why...



Big thanks to Azhure for beta-ing this!

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1223 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/16/09 Updated: 03/26/09


Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins Signed
Date: 03/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Albus Severus

When there is an Americanism in the summary ('Mom' should ALWAYS be Mum), it is not very encouraging. Originally, I actually clicked ont he story just to give that little snippet of advice. However, I am very glad I clicked on this story, because it was so sweet and well written, and, unusually, very original. You did a very good job. :D

~Evie

Author's Response: Thanks for that 'Mum' thing. Fixed it!.(: My beta told me about that. Slipped my mind. It's a good thing you thought of giving me an advice. And I'm glad too that you even gave my story a chance despite the discouraging summary.xD Thanks for the review!(:

 
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