Hi, I'm Evie. I'm fourteen and I live in Suffolk, England. I have loads of plot bunnies bouncing round my head, so I doubt I'll ever stop doing this! :D Have a read of my stories - go on, you know you want to! :p
I have many more original stories over at the-red-chair under the name apollo13 (which I also use on the forums) so please go and check them out.
I am available to beta, so just email me if you want something done - no slash or student/teacher pairings, please.
[Thank you to Abbi, Nikki and Amy!]
[Thank you Suzie/Crazy-purple-hp-freak!]
[Thank you Abbi/babekitty92!]
[Thank you Claire!]
[Thank you Colores!]
Teddy - have a read, go on!
ah, cute. :) i could just imagine james getting all stuttery and mumbly. :)
Okay, I have either got the strangest sense of deja vu, or I have read this before . . .
Author's Response: You probably read it on Fanfiction.net I posted it there first, but I may take it down as this version is a lot better (I think anyway). Did you at least like it?
Yes, I liked - sorry I didn't say earlier, I was just very confused!! >.< It was very good, I think you brought out the emotion very well. I loved the line "Not Harry too", because it was just filled with dread and fear, and it was just perfect. :)
Author's Response: Thank you Evie. I'm glad to hear you liked it. Thanks for the awesome review.
Beautiful, Leah!! So sweet! You could really feel the raw emotions there!
wonderful chapter, as per usual, alyssa! :D
Aw, I love a bit of fluff. :D
Author's Response: thank you! :-)
wow, Rhi, this is so intriguing! Really excellant start, it's very mysterious,a nd I love the style and vocabulary. I already love Dandelion, and hopefully I should have time to come back for more. :)
Author's Response: Evie! *huggles* Thanks so much for stopping by, and I'm glad you liked it!!! <333
When there is an Americanism in the summary ('Mom' should ALWAYS be Mum), it is not very encouraging. Originally, I actually clicked ont he story just to give that little snippet of advice. However, I am very glad I clicked on this story, because it was so sweet and well written, and, unusually, very original. You did a very good job. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for that 'Mum' thing. Fixed it!.(: My beta told me about that. Slipped my mind. It's a good thing you thought of giving me an advice. And I'm glad too that you even gave my story a chance despite the discouraging summary.xD Thanks for the review!(: