Penname: BerthaJorkins [Contact]
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Member Since: 12/12/05
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Average high school senior trying to deal with the stress of three AP's, endless amounts of college mail, and two jobs.

Average Harry Potter fan that is trying to keep Jo's vision alive for generations to come.

Average writer just saving the world one fic at a time.
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Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 78521 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/17/05 Updated: 07/21/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 06/22/06 Title: Chapter 24: From You Have I Been Absent in the Spring

I have been reading this story for a while now, and now I will finally write you a review.
You are a fabulous writer, and this story blows my mind. It's great, fabulous, amazing. If I could, I'd give it a 782978901/10.
But now, the dreaded truth. Is it over? Are there sequels planned? Because I don't want it to end.

 
Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 06/22/06 Title: Chapter 24: From You Have I Been Absent in the Spring

I have been reading this story for a while now, and now I will finally write you a review.
You are a fabulous writer, and this story blows my mind. It's great, fabulous, amazing. If I could, I'd give it a 782978901/10.
But now, the dreaded truth. Is it over? Are there sequels planned? Because I don't want it to end.

 

One Last Time by hpforlife
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary:


One-shot. James decides to try to get Lily one last time.







Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2153 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/05 Updated: 11/07/05


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 03/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Great job. You had great dialogue, great description, and you are a great writer. This story was adorable, and very clever. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm planning on writing a few more one shots, so hopefully they will be to your liking!

 

3 A. M. Confessions by msbigbad
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 137]

Summary: Over 3500 reads and counting!!! _____Okay so I had said this was to become my version of book seven but I just don't like that they are already together I want to develop that over a series if I'm going to write one, not smack dab at the beggining so I will post the sequel to this story and that will be it. I will write a book seven but I want it to be better than what this story allows!! So look for Harry Potter and the Final Riddle later!! The sequel to this story (5 A.M. Revelations) has been validated sp please go read!
Summary:
It's late at the Burrow the night after Bill and Fleur's wedding and Hermione has alot of things on her mind that she needs to get out. Will a certain redhead be able to help her or will he be as cluless as ever? Please Review!! this is my first HP fic!



Please look at the banner I made for this story!! it's on my author profile!!


Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1706 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/10/06 Updated: 02/22/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 02/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: 3 A. M. Confessions

Great job! Your writing style is fabulous and I really hope that you write a sequel, as I am a huge H/G shipper! Keep up the good work!

 

If I Ask You To by Aoide
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 54]

Summary: After a traumatic event in her life, Lily Evans has thrown away the key to the door to her past and all those who were part of it, including James Potter. Trying to forget everything, Lily has also forgotten who she is. She won't let anyone help her, especially James Potter. Could she find herself again? And if so, would she like what she sees?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 11385 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/26/06 Updated: 03/23/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Parts I & II

Amazing. I love your writing style, I love everything about this story. It's so real, and you made the reader feel as if they were part of the story, part of the plot. I absolutely loved it, you are a fantastic writer.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I'm happy you're enjoying this. That was exactly my intent: to make Lily's fears come alive for the reader, since she's very much living in a world conquered by her fears. Again, thank you!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 02/05/06 Title: None

I absolutely love this story, very well written. Keep it up!

 
Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 02/28/06 Title: None

Once again, an amazing story. Very well written, and, I'm not going to lie, just Harry being with Dumbledore brought tears to my eyes... Oh... I certainly do miss him... I can't wait for the epilogue. Also, I find your theories to be amazing. Very well thought out, very well explained, and very plausible. I can't wait to see how it all turns out, and how many of your theories were correct, but we won't know that for a while...

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 02/02/06 Title: None

Haha... great story. Definately one of the better ones I've read. I burst out laughing at the end, my parents think I'm insane, well, they know, but anyway... Great job!

Author's Response: I do that on this site a lot too, don't worry! And also, since my HP obsession is a SECRET, my brother usually thinks I'm laughing loads at my own homework, which is possibly even more strange. Thankyou for the compliments! Seriah x

 

Oread, Walking by Seren
Rated: [Reviews - 27]

Summary: Feature Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione

Categories: Hermione/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1593 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/08/06 Updated: 02/08/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 02/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Oread, Walking

I absolutely love this story. It's so deep and meaningful, and is one of the better I have read on this site. You have quite a talent, and even your prose writing almost carries a poetic attribute. Very good!

 

Goodbye My Lover by Ely_Baby
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: [One-Shot] [Songfic] Lily stepped towards him, and Remus climbed down from the branch. When they found themselves a couple of feet away, Remus seemed to find his voice. “You are beautiful,” he murmured.

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2215 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/17/06 Updated: 02/17/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 03/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye My Lover

Fabulous. Simply fabulous. Even though I'm a big J/L shipper, this story was so sweet. Great job with picking out the song, too. It really fit the story well. Keep writing, I hope I can read more of your work later. Again, great job.

Author's Response: Oh, hey, thanks a lot! It was my first songfic and my first MWPP story (but I think I've already said that), so I wasn't completely sure about it. Again, thanks a lot for your nice review!

 

Eve of Tomorrow by caithream
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 29]

Summary: The Quidditch field after nightfall is the perfect place to share a talk... among other things.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1362 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/22/06 Updated: 05/01/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 05/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Eve of Tomorrow

Amazing. You have a truly beautiful writing style, I could almost feel the scene. So real. So amazing. So beautiful. I would give it a ten.

 

Moondance by Ziggy_stardust
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: Entering his sixth year at Hogwarts, Remus realizes that he has to face quite a conundrum. Should he follow his lustful heart, and find comfort in the arms of a beautiful young woman, or not dishonor James, and stay away from her entirely? Caught in between the heat of the moment and what is right, Remus finds himself in a situation that he cannot control.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 6023 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/19/06 Updated: 07/08/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 07/08/06 Title: Chapter 4: Kissing a Fool

This story was fabulous to read! I'm not really a fan of Remus/Lily, but you made the story fabulous!
You are a lovely writer! I'll be sure to read your next story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I\'m glad to know that you will be around for the next one.

 

Infinite by Slightly Sarcastic
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: He was the sly, rambunctious troublemaker. She was the smart, fiery redhead. Their choices were either black or white and not a shade of gray. Their devotion couldn't be swayed, their bravery always prevailed, and there was no halfway in love. They were the best book on teenage tragedy with many simply regrets. But like shooting stars, Lily and James Potter shined and then faded.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 11605 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
07/20/06 Updated: 08/08/06


Reviewer: BerthaJorkins Signed
Date: 07/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Walking with a Wolf

I love it already! The dialogue is fantastic, and I'm already liking Lily and Rhia's friendship. Awesome job!
And I love the reference to The Perks of Being a Wallflower! It's one of my all time favorite books!

Author's Response: Oh, I\'m glad you like it. I love Lily and Rhia\'s friendship as well, sort of reminds me of my friendship with my best friend. We act as wacky as them. Perks is my second favorite book of all time. The first being \"The Time Traveller\'s Wife\". I highly suggest you to read that. The story is so breathtaking. The first time I read it, I immediately went to the beginning and started again. Anyhoo, glad to know you like the story.

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