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Hmm. Time to rant.

Half-Blood Prince. This book frustrates me to the hair-ripping point because:

1. LENGTH. Jo- we LIKE to read what you write! It was too rushed!

2. HARRY AND HERMIONE. Yes, I'm a shipper, but she just blatantly seemed to rip them apart- I think she got tired of people guessing "Harry or Ron" and just comepletely destroyed their relationship. I don't know about everyone else, but the eye-rolling-scathing-Lavander-gut-hating-typical-horrible-NOT Hermione was not present in the first five books.

3. KING'S CROSS. It's a little thing, but it bugged me that she just cut it off at Dumbledore's funeral.

4. HARRY. Does anyone know what he was thinking? Besides having totally-random-out-of-no-where-I-love-her Ginny daydreams? Can we say, "huh?"

more later.

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Rated:88 Reviews
Summary: This story sets right after the end of Harry's seventh year at Hogwarts. A final battle seems to have put an end to the conflict with Voldemort. But the future is uncertain, choices must be made, and they prove more difficult than expected... Harry's world is about to change dramatically, and he must deal with a rising threat on top of sorting his personal relationships.
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/04/06 Title: Chapter 15: Draco's redemption


Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Undisclosed secrets

The "Ginny" line is pure, dead-on genius. Just had to tell you that.

Graduation Trip by nuttyniffler99

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 380 Reviews
Summary: So, what do you get when you mix together Hawaii, the graduating year of Hogwarts, teenagers with raging hormones, and a little romance? Craziness of course, with Harry and Hermione stuck in the middle. They'll just have to get each other through it! Please R/R!!! =)

♥ umm...yeah, it's finals week here at this high school of mine... so i'm pretty sure i'll be studying my ass off all week long. don't expect another update for another two or three weeks or so. sorry. ♥

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 02/20/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Many Dances of Dumbledore

*wipes tears from eyes* freaking hilarious.

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 02/20/06 Title: Chapter 4: An Afternoon at the Beach

i'm usually one for the more sappy-angsty hhr fics, but this one is just great. they seem like normal kids, but they still have their same personalities... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Odd Couple by Raven_Stag

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 151 Reviews
Summary: Rather suddenly Hermione found herself single and out on her own. Luckily for her, Harry has a spare bedroom. But when the fit hits the shan, will they be able to come out the other end sane? That remains to be seen ... Chapter EIGHT is HERE! YAY! Please enjoy. Warning: mild to severe language.
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 08/21/07 Title: Chapter 8: Aftermath

*thunderous applause* Excellent. Loveditloveditlovedit.

From the Notebooks of Hermione by SpellBound05

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 330 Reviews
Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/21/06 Title: Chapter 20: Sugar and Spice

Awwwww... this story is so cute! Please update soon! Pleasepleaseplease!!!

Just Thinking by harry4hermy

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 26 Reviews
Summary: Its hard to love sombody at the same time as breaking sombody else's heart. Just one week after leaving her two best friends Hermione finds herself in love with one and about to break the others heart. Who ever said life was easy? OK i am no longer updating on this site, for more info see my bio
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Confusion

ooh! very interesting... but work on the spelling, caps, etc. but it's very good, keep it up!

Author's Response: spelling is always my main problem for this kind of stuff, my currnet story under a diiferent account name is in the queue and once it has been accepted i will definentally work some more on this chapter and the ones following it.


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Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/18/06 Title: None

I've read Avenged Sevenfold- it's under my favorites, by the way- so I read this story, too. And it's great- if you ever get the time to work on it, change it, continue in a different path than you had imagined, I would love to see what you had in mind... Jesus, you can write...

Just Like Him by SecretKeeper

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 36 Reviews
Summary: ONE-SHOT. Minor fluff warning. There was just no way around it. Whether it was necessary or not, heroic or not, there was simply no escaping the fact of his actions. He had killed. And he made me just like him… Harry thought miserably.
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Just Like Him

you are a brilliant writer. i aspire to be like you. excuse me while i make you the *1st* favorite author on my list. all of your stories are great. i feel cheesy- you go, girl. or guy..? i doubt it.

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 12/30/05 Title: Chapter 1: Just Like Him

OH. MY. GOOD. LORD. GOD. This... this is brilliance. True brilliance. Wow. I have read and re-read this about 100 times, and it still touches me. I cried. It's Amazing (note the "A") how you can capture that- and what Hermione did- brilliant. Total shock. Beautiful.

This I Promise You by OuchKibble

Rated:16 Reviews
Summary: Written post-Last Battle.

Hermione Granger knows that it will never end; the nightmares, the visions of death, the agony of it all. She begins to piece together the shattered remains of her former life, only to find that one piece is missing. The piece that will eventually cause her to find the light among the dark. This is the story of two tortured souls longing to be loved; longing to belong. . .

Note: This is an extended Song-Fic to the tune of 'This I Promise You' by NSYNC.
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 12/31/05 Title: Chapter 4: Leaving

haha! i'm first! very good- i'm just taking a point off for length. more, more, more! very good.

Just a Kiss by Croyez

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 12 Reviews
Summary: “It’s only a matter of time before the reasons run out not to, Harry,” After an encounter he has with Hermione, Harry is left wondering what to do about his feelings for her. One-Shot, Post-HBP
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 05/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Kiss

AWWWW!!!!!!!!!! so SO sweet. aww. GREAT! Please give us some more one-shots like this one! awwwwwww

The Wisdom of Snow by SecretKeeper

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 20 Reviews
Summary: Snow is simply miraculous-- so delicate, and yet indestructible. It can teach lessons, widen eyes, and even open hearts. (One-Shot.)
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 01/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Wisdom of Snow

Awwww! that was lip-wobbling-teary-eyes sweet! brilliant metaphor! write more! *wipes tears from eyes*

Harry Potter and the Snares of Fate by Herminia

Rated:2 Reviews
Summary: In the wake of Harry's sixth year, the Wizarding World is in upheaval. Legions of Death Eaters, under the command of Lord Voldemort, are gaining foothold in across the country and wreaking havoc with every move they make. The fate of the entire Wizarding World rests on the shoulders of six imperfect individuals – Severus Snape, Draco Malfoy, Remus Lupin, Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, and Harry Potter, “The Chosen One.” In the course of ten turbulent months, secrets will be uncovered; missions will be thwarted; alliances will be tested; and matters of the heart will be rethought. Are you ready to embark on voyage you won’t soon forget? Combines romance, tragedy, adventure, canon-based Year Seven with sparks of comedy.
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 05/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Creaky Stair

... *lip wobbles* are you gonna post another chapter? PLEEEEEASSSSSE?

Avenged Sevenfold by SecretKeeper

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 362 Reviews
Summary: Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting

UPDATE: Guys, I'm back!

The innocence I’ve lost
The blood it's cost
Leaves unhealed scars within.
But I will not abate,
I will employ the hate
That has been planted deep inside.
I will not falter
Valor will not tire,
And I will survive
This trial by fire.

Many things are different now. Potions class is the least of the trio's worries. Battling dragons would be a welcome alternative to what it is they're attempting to battle now. The Order of the Phoenix is hallow without its leading member. And when someone close to Harry is stolen, Dumbledore's rhetoric of love, hope, and faith is challenged. Harry's strength and resolve are pushed to their limits. Loyalties are tested and new leaders emerge while Harry and Hermione struggle to balance new emotions and uncharted territory. Yet while this time after sixth year proves to be drastically unlike anything Harry's ever experienced, some truths remain, and some affections stand solid.

A novel-type story that explores the engimas of Snape, Horcruxes, war, and above all, the puzzle of love. HBP compliant. HHr.
Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 08/23/06 Title: Chapter 1: Trial by Fire

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (you get the point, right?) I squeak-squeal-screamed all through reading your review. And really. Quit being kind. Except to Harry and Hermione. THANK YOU SO MUCH for taking time to review my little story... when you SHOULD be working on the next chapter! Don't make me (and hundreds of other faithful readers) wait a second longer than we have to! Because that's just taking my 'quit being kind' comment a bit too far.

much love,

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 04/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Trial by Fire

*blushes* Erm… oopsie? It seems that, in an attempt to emphasize a few choice words in my last review, I’ve… um… boldened *has discovered ability to invent words* the rest of the page…


AHH!!!!! *feels honored* YAY! You responded! I was hoping you would! But don’t feel obligated to write back to this one, you just KEEP ON WORKING ON THAT NEXT, UNDOUBTABLY BRILLIANT CHAPPIE!!!!!!

Oh, and I do believe it’s my civil duty to boost the morale of my favorite author at every given opportunity, Missus SecretKeeper, ma’am. *draws gun from holster* And I dew b’leive it’s YER civil duty ta keep a-crankin’ out them thurr stories, ya hear?

*ditches Western accent* ANYWAY… ooh! You even put suspense in your responses! *… and Malfoy, who’s looking for-- (I can just picture you catching yourself here) someone else…* Now THAT is the evil genius that makes you the superb, cliffy-creating, so-good-you-want-to-hate-them-but-can’t-because-they’re-just-too-freaking-good author that you are.

HALFWAY?!?!?!? Ah, well it's definately a glass-half-full halfway instead of glass-half-empty halfway. Is the word "halfway" starting to sound really weird to you, too, or is it just me?

Oh, and I hope to brighten up your day with another review for your next chapter soon… *nudgenudgewinkwink*

*~*~* LBD *~*~*
(Oh, and thanks for shortening my name! My poor ickle fingers were getting tired of writing... *snort* Yeah, I don't even believe myself there, but I still like it!)

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 04/26/06 Title: Chapter 1: Trial by Fire

*has just noticed she says "Oh" a lot*

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Trial by Fire

i came back and reread it (because it's so freakin' awesome) and i have to say, you do J.K. better than J.K. herself. REALLY YOU DO. you should write a book... you should write book 7. redeem the harry potter name after HBP... *shudders* EXCELLENT. BRILLIANT. LOSS OF WORDS. UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 06/16/06 Title: Chapter 9: End of an Era

NOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!! *curses summer vacation into oblivion* I would trade two weeks of vacation for a single PARAGRAPH of this ANY day!!!!!!!! AGGGGHHHH! *continues primal screaming to get frustration out of system*

*deep breath* Oh dear. Me? *blushes* Oh my... you’ve given me THIS chapter? THE BEST YET? With the... and the... and then... *tears of honor fill eyes* THANK YOOOOOOOUUUUUU! *crushes your lungs in hug*

That. Was. ____________ (insert synonym for brilliant, amazing, etc. here). How do you do it? It flows from start to finish, from the conversation with Lupin (why IS it important what the chains looked like? Hmmm...), and I think you’ve realized Voldemort's weakness better than JK herself ever could’ve hoped to. From that to realizing where another Horcrux was, to the promise and then to what we’ve all been waiting for... *has shipper-based spaz-attack* EEP! *squeals for oh... five minutes* FINALLY! But I don’t think I would’ve had *THE KISS* come a second sooner. Well, okay, maybe I would’ve, but it wouldn’t be half as good as it was when you did it. *goes off to bury thesaurus* Honestly, I think it’s served it’s purpose enough, after reading this chapter.

Oh! And one thing I’ll ask you to do... just one little thing! *cowers in mightiness of Sadie’s might...i...ness* Listen to/ Read the lyrics to “Security” by Joss Stone. I heard it on the radio one day and thought of Harry and Hermione instantly. But! I’m warning you! DO NOT use it as lyrics for one of the chapters. Because it would ruin the whole “Avenged Sevenfold” thing (love them, by the way). Just saying. That thought probably didn’t even cross your mind, did it? Hm. I dunno. Just being careful, in case my mind works in weird ways. Not... that... um... anyone would... ever... you know... assume that... about me... UM... I’d better go now.


Much love,

Reviewer: livingbreathingdream Signed
Date: 03/22/06 Title: Chapter 7: Radiant Eclipse

i'm running out of ways to tell you that THIS STORY COULD BE ON THE BOOKSHELVES RIGHT NOW AND ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT!!!!!!! *bashes head on wall* i cannot figure out what hermione's dream meant! will you please explain it in later chapters (and please, keep 'em coming)? it must be something like... she hates seeing harry so sad and... his soul and his eyes... EXCELLENTNESS. if that's a word. and if it's not it has just been invented to describe your writing. i actually screamed. that's how suspenseful it was. you describe everything- the setting, characters- so well i can SEE IT IN MY HEAD. when harry pushed hermione back (that must've torn her up inside) it was just... perfect. THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU, you just made my day a whole lot happier!!!! KEEP WRITING OR I WILL TRACK YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU TYPE THE REST!!! *kidding...ish* 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 stars. you deserve every one of 'em!!!!