Hi, I'm Evelyn! I'm a sophomore that loves reading, writing, playing the viola, studying, and learning about God. Fanfiction is something I do in my free time (so, not very often) but I do have a few stories up and I would recommend anything in my Favorites. God bless!
E- Very Good kisser
V- You are not judgemental
E- Very Good kisser
L- You live to have fun
Y- One of the best bfs/gfs anyone could ask for
N- You are absolutely beautiful
A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1701]
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.
Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!
Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)
Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Excellent work, I love the different POVs. I figured out Nikeia's just a minute ago (before I read Claire's comment) but I'm not quite sure...oh, by Snape. Nevermind. Christmas presents, though. I need time to think about those and now is not the time because there's a line for the Internet. But I'll talk to you later! God bless!
Author's Response: I\'m glad. Many people have said that, and I feel happy! :-) Nikeia\'s not in this chapter...She was hit by Snape and other Slytherins though. Hehe. Yes! I NEEED Christmas Presents. My brain is dead in that area. Haha. TTYL XOX
Gosh, why can't we go to the Masquerade now?!? *laughs* I loved this chapter, I'm soooo glad that Nikeia's getting better! May I venture to guess that she shows up during the ball? Or is that way too cliche? God bless!
Author's Response: I know, I\'m sorry. But an idea popped into my mind, and I couldn\'t get rid of it. Sorry. Um...not saying. *zips lips*
Gosh, why can't we go to the Masquerade now?!? *laughs* I loved this chapter, I'm soooo glad that Nikeia's getting better! May I venture to guess that she shows up during the ball? Or is that way too cliche? God bless!
Holy crap! Emily, that is so cool! That whole part where he transforms, and then he and Lily kiss...wow. My heart started fluttering probably the same way hers did! God bless, and see ya around!
Author's Response: Jeez...I am really glad you liked it...Wow. Hehehe. *flutter*
Learning to Love by There you are Peter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 167]
Summary: Set in James and Lily's fifth year - this is their story. I promise you it isn't the whole 'James has changed - let's get married' but it does stick to getting together in the 7th year.
We begin just after OWLs and James' pathetic attempts to charm Lily go from bad to worse and not without the help of a certain friend...whose name sounds like furious...but with an i instead of a u...and no o...
very nice beginning! lily's got a great reaction, and sirius is as funny (and horrible) as ever. nice touch! keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah I had to make Sirius a bit mean...even though I love him!
omg, my heart was beating furiously the whole time, probably cuz i recognized it from one of my stories that's coming up. that was so freaky! i liked that description of remus, very real, excellent work!
Author's Response: Coolness - great minds think alike and all that. Yeah I didn't want to go over the top with Remus so I'm glad that worked.
Why Potter? by JaneA
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 66]
Summary: As the Marauders enter their seventh year, James has one goal: to get Lily Evans. Lily is just trying to stay away from him. Remus and Sirius are coming out with a plan. Will they all get what they want, or will they get back something completely unexpected?
Chapter seven is up!
this is a pretty good start! i'll be glad to review, i know what it feels like when no one leaves any. great beginning! can't wait for chapter two!
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot to me! It's been a while since I've had any reviews, so this is very good news, it means that someone is still reading my fic. Thanks once again!
Yes, No, Sure, Whatever by violagirl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 175]
Summary: Alright everyone, the end is here! *dramatic gasp* I really hope you all enjoy it, and don't forget to look out for my new story, Prologue: The Beginning. Thanks!
What's happening: It's their seventh year. James is desperate to get Lily, and, at the Hogwarts Express, promises to never ask her out again, and offers that the two become friends. When Lily accepts, James's spirits soar, but since she doesn't like him that way, and he can't ask her out, how will he ever have her for his own?
A special thanks to my sister Kitty and my best friend Emilea for listening to my ideas and reading the story in its entirety! Couldn't have done it without them!
And thanks to my new beta, Emily/LaneTechFreshie! You've been great!
Happy reading! :)
Hey, look at me, I'm leaving myself a review! Thanks to all of you for your support!
Always and Forever by jamesnlilyforever
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 173]
Summary: As Lily and James enter their last year at Hogwarts, many hidden feelings emerge. But when tragedy strikes, will Lily ever be able to tell James her true feelings? Or will it be too late?
Reviews are greatly appreciated. There's an e-cookie in it for you. ;D
Wow! I couldn't stop to review until now b/c this story is SOOOO GOOD! Keep updating this one, it's amazing! I'll bake you some virtual sugar cookies for the great work. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks so much! =)
A Tale of Two Matchmakers by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1385]
Summary: Romance for three couples when Blaise and Luna use Shakespearean styled matchmaking to hook up Ginny and Draco. There's Much Ado about...something!
Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill for Best Romance-Non Canon 2007, 2008, and 2009. In 2010 mods changed the rules (they got tired of the same fics being nominated ^_~) so no more QQ hopes, but that's okay. No proof is needed that Draco/Ginny = love.
* Written before the HBP, this tale presents an alternate sixth year in which Dumbledore lives, Draco is more than a foil to Harry, and Blaise Zabini is a girl. I hope readers who ship Draco/Ginny will enjoy the story which includes dancing with faeries, Celtic and Norse mythology, school holidays in London and Spain, and loads of fantasy and romance. "Is this a kissing book?" (to quote the Princess Bride) Yes, it is. *
(Warnings were added for safety, due to brief allusions in later chapters, not graphic content.)
Wow...I normally hate Draco/Ginny stories, but this one is just perfect! I'm so glad this one is on the net!
Author's Response: Thank you! How did a Draco/Ginny non-shipper come across a D/G story? A friend? Magic? I\'m grateful either way, and hope to have an update soon, so you can continue to enjoy the story! ^_^
Wow, I felt as enchanted as Terry and Blaise in this chapter! I felt like I was floating.
Author's Response: Thank you....now I\'m floating on air too, with happy thoughts! ^_^
Lily by Secret Lily
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 479]
Summary:
Lily Evans is not the sort of girl who would normally be found writing in a diary. Yet, when she starts, she finds that the easiest way to overcome all the obstacles in life is to let her emotions out onto paper.
Very interesting so far
Ooh, James is so mean! Serves him right, telling such a horrible lie!
This is good, but Lily seems to be flipping out a little too much...
Author's Response: Haha, get used to it. It\'s just my characterization of her. She overexaggerates frequently and is a tad bit dramatic ;)
Wow, James is actually showing signs of liking her. Pretty funny, actually, and I love Lily's thing, "Potter looks like a baboon, etc." Hilarious
I think Lily might have some issues...
*laughs* What an interesting finish to the chapter!
What a turnabout! Remus and Lily. Right now that's kind of cute. Not forever, but right now he sounds way better than James! Yay, romance!
Serves Lily right. You're very good at making things believable.
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This story is excellent! Very real, very touching!
Author's Response: Thank You!! I hope you like it!!
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