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Hi, I'm Evelyn! I'm a sophomore that loves reading, writing, playing the viola, studying, and learning about God. Fanfiction is something I do in my free time (so, not very often) but I do have a few stories up and I would recommend anything in my Favorites. God bless!

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A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)

Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 08/24/06 Title: Chapter 27: This November Day

*laughs hysterically* I love that last part! This is a great chapter, adds some comic relief after the whole Nikeia-in-the-hospital thing. Very nicely done!

Author's Response: Haha. Thanks! I\'m glad you liked it!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 09/03/06 Title: Chapter 28: Hogsmeade

Oh my gosh, this was great! I'm so glad you put in the part about the Dread Pirate Roberts, I absolutely love the Princess Bride. This chapter was put together really well and I can't wait for the ball to happen! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you soo much. I love the Princess Bride too. Hehe.

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

Aww, it's so sad! It makes perfect sense, but I have no clue what James is gonna do. Hmm... God bless!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 20: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

WONDERFUL! FABULOUS! INCREDIBLE! I can't wait to see the next chapter, keep writing!

Author's Response: Hehee. WEll, you see..if you would respond to my emails, you may just know what\'s going to happen. Silly. Hehe. :)=

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 09/07/07 Title: Chapter 48: It's Nearly Over

Amazing, as usual. There are seriously only 2 chapters left? AAAHHHHHHH!!!! What will I do when it's over, Emmi? *laughs* By the way, I got your email, but haven't gotten a chance to respond yet because I basically go home, do homework, eat dinner, and go to bed, and I can't check my email at school. (Stupid Greenville County!) I'll email soon, though. God bless until then!

Author's Response: Yup... two left. *sniffle* hahah. Yeah. I\'m bogged with homework too. *scream* Hope you get through your\'s all right. I\'m praying for you!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 15: Another Detention

Brilliant chappie! I don't see anything wrong with the story, but maybe stop saying 'this might not be good' or 'I don't know how this will turn out'. They're great!
And you know me, I'm Eva, or, if you need me to be, Evan(?) I'd probably be in Hufflepuff, but I'd like to be in Gryffindor.

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/07/06 Title: Chapter 11: More Detentions

who cares if the prank didn't go along with the story? it was AWESOME!!!! i can't imagine what the slytherins are going through! wonderful chapter! please update soon! you and your story rock!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 16: Bad News

Omg, that is SO SAD!!! I almost cried, seriously. Keep it up, sad as it is, it's really good.

Author's Response: Don\'t cry! Thanks very much! You gotta work on emails, girl! Don\'t worry, I love you anyway! ;-)

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Unbelievable Head

don't worry, your story's great! lily and james just rock my socks off, so anything about them is cool. excellent start! do you seriously read anybody's? mine is called "yes, no, sure, whatever." (you might wanna wait til chapter 2's up.) i've gotten 644 reads and nine reviews, so that stinks. this is why i write reviews: why should i expect them if i don't do it for anyone else? anyway, you're story's totally cool, update as much as you can! :) 10/10

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Trainride

ha ha! those kids were really cute! i loved that scene and last line! "and i think she likes him too." that little girl is so sweet! keep on writing, you rock at this!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 3: Back at Hogwarts

yeah, it was sort of confusing, but it makes me with that i could be head girl! i mean, come on, your own bathroom and bedroom that's furnished and totally cool...that sounds like a good perk! keep it up!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 07/21/06 Title: Chapter 24: The Thirteen Inch Scar

WOW! I absolutely loved this! Lily and James have great senses of humor and I loved that, what was it?--oh, "an uncharacteristic, and yet, so characteristic, wave". Hilarious. God bless, Emmi!

Author's Response: Thanks! You\'re the second to like that Line. I like it too. Much love!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Fight and the Punishment

yay, go lily! i was amazed, actually. doesn't seem like the sort of thing lily would do...but whatever, snape deserved it, so go lily! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 5: Beside the Lake

aww, that was really sweet! i liked the long part about frank and alice, a very nice touch. and the end with lily leaning against james even though she doesn't like him...i can't wait til they get together!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 6: The First Detention

wow, that was so cool! that was, like, really unexpected! sounds like their first detention wasn't too bad though. excellent work!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 7: More Cleaning

i hate to say it, but james is such an idiot sometimes! i feel somewhat sorry for him and really sorry for lily. course, i've never had this problem before, and i've never kissed my boyfriend, so, who knows? keep on writing, this story rocks!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 8: Conversations

that is so sweet! my heart started fluttering when i read that! wow! yay! in answer to your question...well, i hope you don't think that i'm a guy because my author name is "violagirl", emphasis on girl, but my real name is evelyn and my nickname is eva, so i hope you think i'm a girl. anyway, the story still rocks!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 9: The American

not offended whatsoever. she sounds totally american, as i am also one. seems alot like some girls i know down here in south carolina. at least she doesn't have a southern accent, it's impossible to understand that. lol.

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 01/02/06 Title: Chapter 10: Could It Be Jealousy?

whoa! interesting response lily came up with! stacey is totally coolio, i think she's a great addition to the group. hurry up and write another chapter! this is so good!

Reviewer: violagirl Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 22: More Bad News

Oh my gosh, what happened to Nikeia?! And Voldemort...this isn't good. I'm still in love with your story, Emmi, but please say that Nikeia doesn't die! Pretty please? Excellent relief with Lily and James kissing, by the way. That took away some of the stress. God bless, and keep it up!

Author's Response: Nikeia does not die! I promise! Didn\'t I mention that? Hmm...I thougth i did. Oh well. Thank you soo much! GBU!

Author's Response: Oh...I mention that I\'m not giong to kill her later. Whoops.