Hi, I'm Evelyn! I'm a sophomore that loves reading, writing, playing the viola, studying, and learning about God. Fanfiction is something I do in my free time (so, not very often) but I do have a few stories up and I would recommend anything in my Favorites. God bless!
E- Very Good kisser
V- You are not judgemental
E- Very Good kisser
L- You live to have fun
Y- One of the best bfs/gfs anyone could ask for
N- You are absolutely beautiful
Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...
wow, that was totally unexpected! i would never imagine james and sirius hating each other, well really james hating sirius, but i love this chapter and the previous one!
Summary: This story is about Harry's struggle...his struggle to obey his mind when his heart is screaming out in protest .
It's about Ginny's secrets, her aching heart, and where her loyalty lies.
Mainly, this story is about friends, those you can trust and those who can't trust you.
Reviews are fun and easy! So don't shy away from stating your opinion...trust me, it feeds the fire so I'm not left out in the cold! ;)
good idea! i think it's cool how ginny's related to them, but why's mafalda so mean?...oh wait, ginny gave the candy to mafalda to give to dudley? and mafalda really is a muggle? or maybe i'm really off...whatever, excellent story! keep it up!
Author's Response: Mafalda, well she's something else altogether! I wonder how the other reviewers feel about her now? I believe most of them like her? Oh and no! It was Fred who gave the candy to Mafalda! Ginny didn't think of it, though she enjoyed the after effects! Mafalda is definately a witch! Thank you soo much for continuing to review! I love to see the reaction after each chappie!
ha-ha, i like that dialogue between ginny and harry! that makes sense, the whole fred-and-george thing. i should've guessed mafalda was in slytherin...you're doing a fabulous job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Ginny & Harry...they need to have more one-on-one time without Ron & Hermione butting in! So this was the only way I could think to get them some private time! Mafalda...a true Slytherin!
that's a funny chapter! very interesting story, very nice. good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! Still reviewing? I LOVE reviewers like you!!! I myself like it when things start to get hectic so I had to put a little fun for the beginning of this story!
great chapter! i wish tonks had gotten the job in the book! i like it! great job!
Author's Response: I KNOW!!! I wish that had happened too! EWWW SNAPE got it! How unbelievable!!! Of course Harry would never have learned potions if it wasn't for Snape getting off his back but still! Tonks is gonna be an interesting character in this story!
wow, this chapter's really cool! almost sounds like you're the one writing book six instead of jo. very nice, very realistic, i hope we get to see more of mafalda! excellent work!
Author's Response: A NEW REVIEWER! *DOES A JIG* Everybody lets start a congo line! (ok don't be scared this is how I welcome ALL new reviewers!) Cha cha, cha cha, cha CHA!!! As to your review (ahem*settles down*ahem) thank you so much for the compliments!!! Mafalda...oh dear me...you will see her in the future!
Summary: James Potter is an obnoxious, arrogant prat. Lily Evans is stubborn and a bit arrogant herself. James loves Lily. Lily hates James. Will James ever conquer the love of his life when his each and every attempt always fails spectacularly? Humor is guaranteed thanks to the one and only, Sirius Black!
don't worry one bit! this is my second time reading your story, and it's fabulous! sirius is hilarious, great humor, wonderful!
Author's Response: Wow, you liked my story so much you read it more than once?? Wow... thanks!
no complaints whatsoever. in fact... fabulous! wonderful! keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you!
oh. my. gosh. this story is so wonderful it's unbelievable! extremely sad at the end, but, you know, the whole lily/james/harry story is sad. very nice touch, very nice.
Author's Response: why, thank you!
Summary: At the end of the summer before her 5th year, the twins offer Ginny one of their new products: a Forget Me Do Chew, a troublesome little sweet that she's all too tempted to use on Harry...H/G one-shot with some R/H!
omg i loved this! perfect harry/ginny story and so original! keep up the good work!
Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.
THIS IS SO SAD!!! Gosh, I know the two of them will get together soon, but the whole forgetful thing. *sniffle* Excellent touch, but I'm such a hopeless romantic...
OH MY GOSH! Excellent chapter, but that's so sad! What's gonna happen to James and Lily and Sirius? AAHHH!!! Please hurry up and write the next chapter, I hate cliffhangers. ;-)
What's up with Lily all of a sudden? This seems very fast-paced, but intriguing. Good work.
All I can say is: wow. You are an excellent writer, so good that I wish it didn't stop now. Please write a sequel! I love your story!
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For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
omg, what's gonna happen to remus? hurry up and write another chapter, remus could get hurt!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review!! lol, in writing that, You're making it sound as if the longer I stall the more danger Remus is in!! I can actually hurt him as much as i want if i dont kill him. Wouldnt that be confusing, a werewolf transforming in st mungos!! unconscious!hhhhhhheeeeeeeeyyyyyy.......That just might work... lol!! keep reading!
my favorite scene? i'd luv to say that the whole thing is wonderful, but as you don't want me to...i luv the snow scene! like, wow, i can tell that the two like each other! pity they have to grow apart for their relationship. fabulous work!
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review!! I'm glad ya liked that scenem very cool :) yes, curse JK for snapes worst memory. grrrrr things would be so much cuter (and bloody less confusing to write) if they didnt turn against each other! this very second im writing them growing apart in fact, and I keep thinking oh this would be a cute way for them to forgive each other then i remember, that's like not the point lol thanks again!
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! What's gonna happen to James! This isn't cool!...But I absolutely loved your humor in the story. Brilliant.
Author's Response: what would you say if I told you he weas gonna die?? just wondering... I\'m heaps glad you liked it!! :D hheeyy I think it\'s cool :P:P cya!!
i luv that fight between lily and calista! calista is so evil, and i know i would've done the same! luv the characters, great plot, romance rocks! keep it up!
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review!!!! Calistais so evil!! I think she appeals to the mean side of me, she's the best to write when im in a bad mood lol! Thanks for all the compliments!!! :) cya
yay! the update has come! i was, like, so relieved when they saved remus during the aftershock, that was really freaking me out! as to your question...i think they might get together really soon, like in the next few chapters, because she and robert are going out, and robert helped james pull remus out of the pit, so the two of them will probably become good friends, and lily will tag along and eventually befriend him again. though i've noticed that calista wasn't mentioned anywhere...is that a good sign? hurry up and write some more, this story rocks!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! yes, the update has come! I love freaking people out, i should do it professionally one day lol >:) Robert and Lily aren't going out, they're just really good friends. That's a very good guess, whether it's right or not, I shall stay zipped, but it was definately good. Calista wasn't mentioned because she had to report to the Slytherin Common Room, and had no idea anything was up. Thanks for the compliments, and cya!
calista could've learned the imperious curse...though i doubt it. i dunno...she probably sent a bunch of letters about "love me, love me," and finally he gave in. but he'd better find lily fast, cuz it looks like something's about to happen between two other people....awesome story! keep the chapters comin!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review! Umm...yeah, she could have learned the imperious curse, it isnt impossible! It's nice to see you're thinking outside the box! you are right about the letters, whether they had an effect or not, well we'l have to wait and see! I love writing Robert, he is such the dream boy! I based him on someone I know! *sigh* anyway, Thanks again! glad ya liked it!