Hi, I'm Evelyn! I'm a sophomore that loves reading, writing, playing the viola, studying, and learning about God. Fanfiction is something I do in my free time (so, not very often) but I do have a few stories up and I would recommend anything in my Favorites. God bless!
E- Very Good kisser
V- You are not judgemental
E- Very Good kisser
L- You live to have fun
Y- One of the best bfs/gfs anyone could ask for
N- You are absolutely beautiful
Summary: Two friends owl each other anonymously, and begin to fall in love. When they meet at the dance and discover each other's true identities, will it ruin all, or will everything they've ever wished for come true?
yay!!!! i luv this story! i think i read it before i became a member, but it just really touches my heart how they get together! you're an excellent writer!
Gosh, I love this story to death! Too bad there's already a book six, Jo would've liked this one! Beautiful and so romantic!
Summary: James and Lily-their seventh year. We all know what happens in the end, but what about the beginning? In their last year at Hogwarts, mysteries unravel, friends are betrayed, and, of course, couples destined to be fall in love.
Wow, very interesting! Wish it didn't stop there, but I'm still enjoying it!
Author's Response: thank you!
Ok, now I'll review. (Sorry, those chapters were just so good!) It's gotta be Bellatrix. Period. And I laughed so hard at the S.M.S.O.B.! Excellent name!
Author's Response: I\'m so glad everyone likes the SMSOB so much. As I\'ve said before, the idea came to me while I was showering. Wierd isn\'t it? lol
Yes, very confusing but very gripping! I'm really scared about what's gonna happen. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re enjoying shattering dreams! Some people don\'t like the shift in tone and mood!
Very nice, very nice, I'm ready for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Yes, I get that a lot. But I swear I know what I\'m doing!
Very interesting chapter. I have a feeling Remus isn't going to feel very good about this. And is the meeting something special or just something to get Edymion away?...Don't answer that, just please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! You\'ll find out more about Enydmion very soon!
Summary: James is passionately in love with Lily, but she despises him. Each year things seem to get worse for the love sick boy. When he finally finds the courage to tell her the truth about how he feels, how will Lily react? Will her heart finally make a change?
Follow the two through each year at Hogwarts as hearts are wrenched, twisted, and finally touched as the two struggle to find the love they were destined for…
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wow! pretty short, but very fun! i luv your beginning! it's off to chapter 2...
this is pretty good! lily surprised me a bit with that blow-up, but i'm glad that she's knocked some sense into james's head! good work!
i loved this chapter! and i've played that game before, we had to do it in class when we were meeting everybody. i didn't quite get which one was lily's lie...i'm guessing it's the go-to-bed part, but i'm not sure...oh well, this story rocks!
i really liked this chapter! i liked how the two of them joined up to help sirius and kate. it made me wish that they were in love...keep on writing, this story rocks!
i am just in love with this story! but for once in my life i'm mad at lily. she won't give him a chance at all, i just wanted to punch her and say "lily! wake up!" yeah, but i liked it! way to go!
wow...i don't know what to say! this chapter was excellent but terrible! you know, written wonderfully, but the characters are acting stupid, you know what i mean? nothing against you, they're supposed to be like that. you're an excellent writer, keep it up!
i'm still here! i've actually just begun reading today, because i was totally obsessed with harry/ginny stories after HBP came out. then i got bored and switched to lily/james. and it's ok that you lost it! my new year's resolution was to do all my chores and practicing before fanfiction *cough cough* so it's amazing my parents haven't deleted my story. amazing how they think i'm an aspiring writer...well, enough of that. your story is totally coolio! i luv it! and that last chapter...omg, it was so sad! i feel really sorry for lily right now. aww...
yay! they're friendly again! i just wanna say go james for being nice to her after awhile, and go lily for admitting to herself that she likes him! i'm really happy now, your story is just so good!
omg! that was the sweetest chapter ever! my heart's fluttering and i just need to laugh! as k and emilea would say: "it's an eva moment!" i loved this story like a lot! it's perfect! you rock!
Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...
wow. this is a new and interesting outlook on lily. i guess i never imagined her as the "horrible-girl-who-doesn't-care-about-anybody" type. it's an excellent start, though. keep it up!
this is really good so far! if you're wondering about my review style, i'm gonna review every other chapter cuz there are so many, but i just want you to know that it's fabulous! keep it up!
then again...this chapter rocks! very interesting, i like the exchange between lily and sirius. wonderful!