How The Other Half Lives (Prologue) by Jase
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione accidentally end up in an alternate dimension.
Very interesting. Can't wait for more.
Summary: What if there were more to Remus Lupin's bite than a badly timed stroll in the woods? The arrival of a feral invokes secrets of the past and terror for the present...
Must--find--out--who--Kane--is!
Good start, but I want to know everything. I liked the way you showed the memory in Remus's dream.
This keeps getting more and more complicated. I feel bad for Remus, his father, and his father's family.
Ooooh, a mystery. Very well written chapter.
Ooooh, creepy. I like Remus's philosophy about The Howling. Everyone pretends, they're all just pretending together. Very true.
Just reading this gives me the shivers. A feral targeting Harry? This could be bad. Great writing style, though, and good idea behind it.
That conversation Remus overheard is very interesting. The part about his mother and father was very touching.
So Molly changed Remus's diaper, eh? What a subject to bring up at dinner, especially in the presence of Fred and George. And why do I get the feeling that a prank will happen in the near future?
Oh, that comeback Lupin gave to Malfoy's accusations was priceless! And that prank-- I don't have words to describe how funny, touching, and perfect it was.
Oooh, ferals. Not something you'd want to see on a dark night, whether the moon was full or not. I found the lesson as interesting as the students did.
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!! Don't let Lupin die!!!! He still needs to find out who Kane is and the secrets his dad was keeping from him! So do I!
Moonshadow by Elysia_Snape
Rated: [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Remus struggles coming to terms with Sirius' death. A missing moment. Not Slash.
Wow. This sums up everything that I think someone would feel at the loss of a loved one. We always see Lupin in control, and you showed that he's human after all, just like the rest of us.
Determination by Seren
Rated: [Reviews - 49]
Summary: Back and forth. Back and forth. I rock myself as hard as I can, bashing my body against the sturdy oak doors of my prison. It hurts badly; every time I slam my body against the doors, splinters break off into my already bruised and scratched skin. But back and forth, back and forth, I will rock. Every time I smash into the doors, they weaken slightly. And every weak crack spiderwebbing against the doors is one step closer to freedom. Four girls are held hostage by Death Eater. But they have a plan.
I loved this. I loved how you got into each girl's head and portrayed each aspect of each of the houses. This was one of the first fanfics I ever read, and it really sets the bar high for the rest.
Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night
Trust Sirius to bust his way out of limbo. Even though James and Lily (was it them?) were waiting for him in the afterlife, he chose to go back to Harry. Good for him!
Yay Sirius is back!!!!!!!!!!!:)
Wow! That was a really funny chapter, and i was guffawing throughout it. But I noticed one little spelling mistake. Sorry, but it's in my nature to spot things like that. Here it is: "Dumbledore sat down in his chair, a full day’s exhaustion kicking in. 'Sirius, medaling with the very fabric of time in space is something I discourage anyone from doing.'" "medaling" should be "meddling" in that paragraph. Just thought I'd let you know!
What happened to Sirius???!!! Why is there a body and a man???!! AAAHHHHHHHH!!!
I'm a tiny bit confused, but that didn't stop me from feeling really sad for Harry. He doesn't deserve the life he's living. And how can there be a dead Sirius and a live Sirius????!!!
Sweet chapter. A lot of tears, but I'm glad that Harry smiled at the end.
