OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! What a cliff-hanger! I'll bet it was something Snape did! The slimy git...anyways, please post VERY QUICKLY! Rating:11
I wish it were longer so I could read more of your brilliant writing. Please post quickly!
Lol, great Quidditch match! I wish you had gone into a little more detail with it, but other than that it was great! You write Sirius so good! Update quickly!
Oh my goodness, this was such a sweet chapter! i loved it when James kissed her even when she was sick, he's just such a sweetie! I wonder if it was Snape...? Update quickly please! Rating:12
"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
I just wanted to let you know, I read your other story, Potter's Charm, and I love this one too. You're a sensational writer!!!!! Rating:10
Wow, I havent laughed out loud at a fic in a very long time. I nearly fell out of my chair when the lights went out a James screamed. You've got talent!
Summary: My very first fanfiction I've come to create after pining away the days to the coming sixth book...sigh...
Author's Response: Thanks!
Wow, super cool! What did James mean? Does he know something she dosnt???? DUNDUNDUN!!! Lol, anywho please post quickly. Great job.
AWWWWWWWWW...etc. I love how sweet James is! I love him so much, and I love the way you write him, a little bit of a idiot, but he's got his heart in the right place. Lol. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! Shame Lily only sees him as a bit of an idiot...next chapter should be up (well, sent it) on Monday
AWWWWWW...That was so sweet! I love Sirius, he's so adorable! That was such a great chapter. I really like how you add in the side-romances with Remus and Sirius. It really adds interest. Amazing job, as usual. Happy Holidays!
Author's Response: Aw, thankyou! Tiff and Sirius is my favourite couple to write about, they're just so fun! LOL, thanks for reviewing!
Geez, that was so so so sad! I can't beleive that! I HATE VOLDEMORT!!! Lol, wow, all I can say is that you better update quickly!
Author's Response: Aw, thankyou! :-) Update is coming soon
YAY! Wonderful!!! I LOVE ARWENS DRESS IN LOTR 3!!! Of course I love all of her dresses that she wears, not just that one! Lol, yes I'm a LOTR freak=) Please post quickly!!
Author's Response: Lol! Arwen has gorgeous dresses. Apart from the green one that she wears when Aragorn's crowned King -she has so many lovely dresses and that one is horrible! What was she thinking when she picked it?! Thanks for reviewing! I'll submit the chapter at the start of next week - which would be tomorrow or the day after - but I'm not sure how long after that it'll take before it's up. Hopefully not too long!
Wonderful!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thankyou! :-)
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.
Amazing...what a cliff-hanger! Please post your next chapter soon!
Very sweet. I really like it. And I am usually not prone to reviewing, but in your case, I thank I can handle it. PLEASE HURRY with the next chapter, and keep up the good work!
Summary: Many new things will be learned this year, but the one thing Harry Potter knows not, is the one thing he wishes to know; What happens when one touches the forbidden grounds behind the veil? Set in Harry's sixth year. Please Read and Review!
Summary: This tale of the teacher whom everyone loathes,
Accounts for his anger and elegant clothes.
It dripped through my mind when, too scantily cloaked,
I got caught in a rainstorm and throughly soaked.
WARNING: Despite the glints of humour, you will need a handkerchief.
Oh my gosh. This was one of the best written peices of fan fiction I have ever had the honor to read. I intended only to take a quick look at your story, but after the first few sentences, I couldn't stop. Before I knew it, and much too soon, it was over! I actually felt bad for Snape which is rare, belive me). You are an amzing writer, sorry for babbling on like this, but I am in shock. I won't be surprised when you come out with your own work, and have it published.
Summary: Sirius is on his way to Hogwarts. What awaits him there - friends? laughter? romance? How about D) all of the above? Join the Marauders and their female equivalent in this unique story of friendship and love.
Well, I agree that the characters are a little off, but it still seems like a wonderful story! I'm confused though, are you going to pair Sirius up with Lily?
Author's Response: No, I'm not. Believe me, it'll all become clearer eventually.
Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
I know, I'm just catching up, but that was a helluva chapter. Very powerful. Nothing like that has happened to me, but my freinds mom was raped, and that's how my freind came about. She has never gotten over that, and her daughter is 15. I can sympithise with James, on not knowing the right things to say, or how to deal with it. Your story blows me away. Rating:11
This one's a little brighter! it kind of scared me when I got up to get a drink, I felt as if when I got up, the story would follow me, like I wasn't reading it, but it was actually happening around me, and I could just watch it while I got a drink. Ok. that sounds completely insane, but it's true! Your characters put me inside the story.
Author's Response: I'm glad it hits you like this, a lot of my readers say that I do a fairly good job describing my story. So thank you.