Ah very nice! The shattered glass was worked in well, and Ginny's boots- fantastic! Nice well written story. Well done :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for another review! I really appreciate the time you take to leave such nice comments.
Ooh, looks interesting. Nicely written :-)
I've been looking foward to this chapter!
Well written again and very sweet. The attention and detail in this story is good...the mention of needing to freeze the photo is something many authors would overlook and it also reminds us that Neville is in the Muggle world. And now we have a little cliffhanger...I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have the 3rd Chapter back from my beta and ready to submit. You won't have to wait too long.
Uh whoops that last review was meant to be for chapter two!
Author's Response: LOL - no problem!
Ooh very cute little chapter. It was Susan! How sweet. Having her working for a Healer is good, I can imagine her working in Healing. Well done, as usual :-)
Author's Response: Well thanks - I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!!
This looks like it will be a great fic, I'm looking foward to reading more. It's great how you explained not only why he was there but also how he found out about it. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I have Chapters 2 & 3 with my beta right now so hopefully I'll have a new chapter up soon.
Written as a Term Challenge: Holidays Abroad submission for Slytherin.
Ooh, what an interesting fic. Great idea, incorporating, well, something that we know happened into this challenge. Having them go to Romania for Martisor is a good idea. I like how you skipped foward and just showed a bit of the wedding at the end of that chapter. I'm eagerly awaiting updates :-)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks. This being my first fic, I know the writing is exactly Jo's, but I try. I'm glad I have one fan...
Very good job :-)
This has a good rhythm and structure, it's clearly written...
I like it :D
Author's Response: I was going to make a terrible pun linking your usage of the word \'clear\' with my repeated \'muddy mud puddle\' line, but, for the sanity of all will not. Thank you for your review, and I am glad you liked it. Ever so!