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Was once a passionate writer...I have had writers block for two years.

I have deleted all of my stories and am going to start fresh.

Hufflepuff anyone? =]

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Harry Potter and the Legacy of the Founders by VoldemortsPatronus

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The war is on and the only person with the power to stop Voldemort's second reign of terror is sulking alone in a cold, dark room. The unexpected arrival of an old school chum in Privet Drive jolts him to action, however, as Harry begins his most exciting year at Hogwarts. Year 6 will include a visit to the ancient village of Godric's Hollow; a first hand account of the 1000 year old quarrel that ripped Hogwarts apart; a Fred and George-style farewell to a certain ex-Minister of Magic; and the discovery of the Half-Blood Prince, a mysterious figure who holds the key to winning the war...

(And, as J.K. says, what's life without a little romance?)
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Flight From Privet Drive

Wow, I can tell this is going to be a good story. Draco! What is he doing there? Grr, Dudley, I despise the boy. I really liked this chapter. I didn't see any mistakes but thatís probably because I was taken into your stories world or you have a really good beta =). Well done, I am off to read the next chapter! 10/10!!

The Necromancer's Curse by Garden Gnome

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: For the first time in centuries, a necromancer - a practician death magic - has applied for and been accepted to Hogwarts. His decision is not popular and bad things begin happening... Some Chapters rated 'R' for nudity and sexual content FINAL CHAPTER SUBMITTED

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 14: The Descent

=), i loved it, it was worth waiting for =), cant wait to go read the sequal if its written, going to check, great writing, keep up the work, Seamus.

Harry Potter and the Eye of the Storm by jane99

Summary: My take on sixth year. More drama than anything else, and glacially slow - so if you're after lots of adventure and sappiness your best bet is to go elsewhere. Hopefully there's a shred of originality in here somewhere.
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

I really like you work. Ron, I wish he could have got in to Potions! Unfortunately he lacks the brains* dun dun duuun*. I think kreacher should be...and never brought back. You have portraied Hermione so well, always sticking up for the little ones, and Ron, always wanting to destory them!
Well done on this chapter, I will review the later chapters. *Runs off to read next chapter* I need popcorn, stat! 10/10


Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: None

This was a very entertaining chapter, I really liked how you blended in peoples ancestors. Mrs figg is related to C. Figg or am I mistaken? The head master was dead accurate, which I am so glad because it is one of Sirius' ancestors, even if he sneered at the children for wanting to eat. I however did not know that Albus' brother Alberforth was the same age as him and that he was sorted in Hufflepuff (Oh yeah!! We got Dumbledoreís brother!) Or did you just make that up? Overall I really liked this chapter, I am sorry it isnít like a spew review where is a page long but I am not as good a reviewer as them so hopefully you will get one of their reviews, 10/10 [/rant]

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you liked it! I was worried it seemed a little boring. Hehe, yeah, those people are meant to be Figg's, etc.'s ancestors. It's good to hear you like how I wrote the headmaster; I thought I might've over-exaggerated him. As far as Albus and Aberforth go, they're probably not twins. I couldn't find much about their background, but it was fun because I could make up stuff. Lol don't worry about your review! Feedback is great, no matter the length. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you liked it! I was worried it seemed a little boring. Hehe, yeah, those people are meant to be Figg's, etc.'s ancestors. It's good to hear you like how I wrote the headmaster; I thought I might've over-exaggerated him. As far as Albus and Aberforth go, they're probably not twins. I couldn't find much about their background, but it was fun because I could make up stuff. Lol don't worry about your review! Feedback is great, no matter the length. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Harry Potter and the Spirits of the Storm by QueenHal

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: A Post-HBP fiction.

When Harryís quest for the horcruxes turns desperate, he leaves the security of his homeland to seek out the advice of an ancient and most unusual Council Ė one whose allegiance is only to themselves but whose knowledge is so vast it may be his only chance. What Harry discovers there will change everything. Soon, he comes to see that this is all so much bigger than just he and Dark Lord Ė his role, though pivotal, is terribly minute compared to the challenges the Wizarding World must now face.

Meanwhile, across the Atlantic Ocean, a young witch uncovers the truth about her bloodline. But only when catastrophic events begin to unfold, does she realise her importance in the greater scheme of things...

It is a tale of epic proportions: bringing in the truth behind Slytherin's betrayal, and the choices the Founders had to make to ensure the longevity of their world. Enemies must unite, lines must be crossed, and children must forgo their innocence. And behind it all, fly the Spirits of the Storm, waiting, watching, scheming. Welcome to the greatest epic war the Wizarding World has ever seen.

Chapter 11 is posted.

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 01/16/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Of Labyrinths and Destiny

Wonderful. Your describing skills are beond words. I was pulled into your story like a six-year-old is to candy. Who is the strange person?? I will go an read the next chapter.. but not before I get some more popcorn *runs off to get another bucket of popcorn*

Author's Response: Ooo... nice analogy. I'm flattered! Thanks for your continued interest :)

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 01/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I feel as if no matter how big or good my review is it cannot match up to the previous reviews. Anyhoo, I really like the start of this story. When I saw you banner in the forums I thought it would be one of them typical year sevwen fiction were they just got to school and then verse Voldemort. This is, bar far, one hundred times better. I really liked how you described the setting and the Therestal (I don't know how to spell it). I can't wait to next the next chapter. ~Seamus124

Author's Response: Oh great!!! I'm so glad to hear that! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 02/12/06 Title: Chapter 37: When We Grew Up

Wow! I really liked this chapter. I really liked this whole story. I read this story a long time ago. I wanted to read it again and I did. I was on the verge of tears when great dumby died. Verge. Lizzy is a great OC, I knew she would be from the start, way back in The Girl Who lived- second best story in the WOLRD! Guess what the first one is. MINE. Nah, I'm kidding, This story! JKR would be stopped in her tracks if she ever read this. I think you will be a great writer. If you have written any other stroies un-HP related I would love to read them, please. I LOVE your HP fics but I have read them all... or have I... This ten chapter fiction...hmmm? PLEASE write it! Pretty please =). Wonderful story! ~Seamus124

One Life Owed by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is yet another spin-off from my main fic. In it we discover the reason for Snapeís allegiance with the Order and Jane Potter.
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 12/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: One Life Owed

You champoin! I loved it! I have been following all of your stories and I even cheated to read HP&UP Iwent to fanfiction.net nadthen you made this and im like YES!!!!anyway top knotch story right there! PLEASE do the to chapters thing.

Butterbeer And Chocolate Cake by PatronyBologna

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Set in HBP: Hermione and Ginny escape the Great Hall for some solitude. Misery loves company. A bottle of butterbeer, a heafty slice of chocolate cake, and an unexpected visitor put the last few months in perspective. Sometimes funny and often heartfelt, Butterbeer And Chocolate Cake takes the sting out of cupids misplaced arrows.
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

I really liked this chapter, it was very entertaining. oh some strange bug huh? A LOVE BUG! Good chapter, well done. I really liked this story, cudo's on the name, it caught my eat straigh away! 10/10

Author's Response: Yes, the love bug is a strange and fickle thing! lol I don't know about the butterbeer, but surely there's some chocolate cake lying around! ~Patrony :)

Harry Potter and the Last Chance by MinSev

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Harry faces his final and most difficult year at Hogwarts, will he come through the year with his NEWTs or more importantly, with his life?

All reviews will be replied to so please review us
Chapter 11, The Meeting should have been Chapter 10 and Chapter 10, Confession Confection should have been 10 so I have swapped them
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 09/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Letter From Ron

Wonderful start, I love the suspense, I like to take guesses about what is going to happen next, sorry. I'm tipping its Ron, but from what I saw of the next chapters name I donít know, anyway, Loving the fic *scurries off to continue reading*


Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 09/06/06 Title: Chapter 2: Death of the Dursleys

Nicely written, great plot, this equals a magnificent fiction, *grabs munchies and keeps reading"

Author's Response: well, we have magnificence in abundance
Am I being stuck up?
Oh well


Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 09/06/06 Title: Chapter 3: The Surprise

It was good, time for some constructive criticism, I noticed that you mentioned the burrow when harry was comparing previous safe houses. Wasnít grimmauld place the Orders hideout as well? Is harry trying to forget about it? just wanted to know, Seamus

Author's Response: Mmmmm... but that wasnt so much a safe house as headquarters..
love Minnie

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 09/06/06 Title: Chapter 6: Family Values

Great chapter, I picked up on the Rons kids thing, but will it really happen? *waddles off to read next chapter*

Author's Response: Yes... We have decided so
love Minnie

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 09/06/06 Title: Chapter 7: The Wrath Of Molly

cool, i cat wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: cool, i am a cat...
love Minnie

Harry Potter and the Magical Myths by nuw255

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A man from Interpol comes to question Harry Potter as part of a murder investigation. How will Harry react? And how will this affect his search for Lord Voldemortís Horcruxes? Plus, the question we all want answered: What will happen with Ginny?

This story picks up immediately after HBP, and is very slightly AU. But hey, arenít they all?

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 10/05/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: A Very Black Secret

I am loving this story so much, I had my suspisions that Jared was a black from when I saw J.B on the map. Just one question, would his name truely be Jared Brown, he was born after they changed their name right? so wouldn't he be born a brown and only have black in his blood. This is all just a guess ofcourse. Great ideas, cant wait to see more.

Author's Response: You guessed that? I\'m impressed. Yeah, Jared Brown is his legal name because his parents had already changed their last name by the time he was born. However, they knew what their son\'s name ought to have been if they didn\'t have to be in hiding, thus the two \"true names\" with the same initials. Thanks for the great review, and I hope to hear more from you in the future.

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 12/04/06 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Harry's Secret Plan

Well, I can tell you this; You didnt lose me over the whole H/G thing, im fine with it, it wasn't all smooch and that =). This was a good chapter, I liked it, length wise it was good, a long, good read. 9/10.

Author's Response: Thanks very much; I really appreciate your sincerity. Hopefully the next chapter will get validated soon.

Fields of Broken Glass by evanesco123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: And so she weeps, for innocence lost and beauty forgotten. A story set after the final battle.
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 09/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a very dark story and I loved it, you choice of words was brilliant, I actually kinda felt for this story, I really liked it


Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! Your compiments mean so much to me!

When The Church Bells Ring by TheVanishingAct

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: What no one else could do, she will, when the church bells ring.

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 09/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

That was amazing! You style of writiing was brilliant! I'm off to read the rest of what you have written, keep up the wonderful writing, Seamus

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :)

A Different Sort of War by Sly Severus

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Long after a war ends the wounds remain. When forced to face something so horrific a part of a personís very soul dies. People are left changed. Societies are left in shambles

During this time, people are prone to making bad choices. Horrible things are said and done because the bitter continue to fight. How can such a monstrous event ever truly be over? And how can those left behind truly regain their lives
Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 08/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Caught in the Act

Wow, that was brilliant. I havent read a first chapter to breathtaking, I have so many questions about this running through my head and its better because I still have 21 chapters to go! 9/10 (My reason for only 9 is too long)

Author's Response: :D There are actually 35 chapters in total, so you have a ways to go. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124 Signed
Date: 08/28/07 Title: Chapter 27: Understanding

I'm glad to see everyone is accepting Bella but I think that its seemed like Neville just changed heart too quickly, He went from hating, despising Bella, to thinking she was a saviour, although I am happy to see this as a read, I believe that as a critic you should have extened this chapter to show how they changed because of the situation, but not so suddenly.

Author's Response: *sigh* I was actually rather concerned about the speed in which Neville changed his opinions. I may have to edit this chapter somewhat in the future.

Thanks so much for the review!