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hi there, I am loving this story! It's great. Can i ask have you written this story before? I am sure I have heard about the girls that are Lily's friends in the story before. Either way it's fantastic!
Potter's Charm by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 2501]
Summary:
All's fair in love and war
Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP
oooooh!!!!!!!!!! That was FANTASTIC!!!!!! my answers to your questions: lily, addy, chapter 11, 'Antsy aren’t we Addy babe. Let’s wait until we get Lily and James back together and then we’ll browse around for broom closets', hell yeah!!, Lily and James, Some embarrassing rejections for james, no loved it all, becoming a girl, yes read most of them (i think)
oooooh!!!!!!!!!! That was FANTASTIC!!!!!! my answers to your questions: lily, addy, chapter 11, 'Antsy aren’t we Addy babe. Let’s wait until we get Lily and James back together and then we’ll browse around for broom closets', hell yeah!!, Lily and James, Some embarrassing rejections for james, no loved it all, becoming a girl, yes read most of them (i think)
But I Do Love You by iheartyou
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 387]
Summary: It's Lily's last year at Hogwarts, and she's determined to make it the best. But with Voldemort taking over everywhere, people are becoming distraught and friendships are breaking. Not to mention a certain someone just won't seem to give up on her. It seems like Lily just can't catch a break, and her friends and family are in danger...
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Silly girl!!!!!! That was very good though, brilliant! Such a cliff hanger, so well done!!! 100000000000/10. excellent writing
Oh please let them find her, please!!!! I'll miss Raven if we don't!!! well done. 100000000/10 for suspense
Oh please Raven, turn up, please!!!!! Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She'll be in the shack, won't she??? She might get bitten!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway, well done, that was great work as always! 10/10
Oh no............................. But James wasn't a werewolf! Maybe he stunned remus or something? well done, I won't say more as I am so anxious to read the next part......
Your descriptions are great, everything is fantastic. I like also how Lily and James are arguing over this, it's really good for the plot as it could make them stonger. anyway, well done, it great work, keep it up. 10/10
Mmmmm, let's hope no one gets hurt. Anyway, well done as always, I think you probably know my drill but your writing is so good I don't know what else to say, and I am not good with long reviews. Well done, 10/10
few!!!!!!!!!!! They're all good now, no more tears, etc. Anyway, well done as always, I am a huge fan, so yeah. It's all good. Will Sirius ever ask Raven out??? Just wanted to know. 1000/10
Ooooh, I can't wait to read. I love the fluff, so I don't mind. I think that was great, very good, so well done. 10/10
Oh, that was was really good. Not really a lot of fluff, but yet there was, which worked really nicely. I really liked it overall, so well done. 10/10
oooooooh, I like it. This sounds even more interesting........ well done 10/10
oh no! Lily must get scared now! that was good though. hee hee. suffer sirius. suffer raven. that was eally creative and I love how they hte each other. well done. 10/10
oh, that was sad. Annabella gave that desperate feel to it, I agree. well done. 10/10
I really liked that, and I realy liked the idea of Timothy. He's sounds cute, but terribly annoying. I also like how Stephanie likes Sirius, because to me it seems like Raven and Sirius having some under lyin flirting going on, making it a love triangle, which would make the plot thicken so much. ehh, maybe I am wrong, but it was great anyway, well don. 10000/10
Don't worry about Hagrid, He is fine! You made him just like he is! Anyway, I loved it, it's greatwork. Keep up the good work. 10/10
oh Timothy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, he was a pain in the backside, but still!!!!!! And Lily will be next, right? Oh no!!! Well done anyway, I love how alll those moments when Lily thinks she likes him she is interuppted. anyway, well done. 10000000/10.
That was good, I was on the edge of my seat when Lily and James nearly kissed -what a shame!!!! Anyway, well done, I like how you used the Prejudiced view on things to your advantage, it worked well. Anyway, well done, 10000000000/10 for sure
nup, I am glad they are both staying as it could be interesting. Well done as always, that was really cool and I liked it. 10000000/10 for sure
