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i'm an 18 year old girl from Wisconsin. Go Cheese-Heads! I love harry potter. my AIM and yahoo screen names are twirlergirl583 talk to me there if you want. Just make sure to say where you know me from or I might not add you. Thanks and enjoy the stories.


My story Redemption can be found at: http://www.freewebs.com/twirlergirl583/index.htm
you can read it and review it there. It hasn't been posted on mugglenet fanfiction yet.

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Plugs and Outlets by Alphie

Summary: Mr. Weasley has a talk with Ron about his developing relationship with Hermione.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Plugs and Outlets

HAHAHAHA that was fricken hilarious. Wow.

The Challenge by Little Loony

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Sirius and James do a little comparing with the aid of one Remus Lupin. It is not how it seems at first.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

That is the most sexual inuendo I've ever read that didn't even turn out to be what I thought. And for some reason I kept reading...scary. I like the line "Next time, we ask LIly..."

Barbie Girl by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's just your average, boring Summer day on Privet Drive. Or is it? Harry is stuck doing another one of his many thankless chores, when he hears something VERY interesting coming from Dudley's room and goes to investigate.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 08/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot


The Girl Behind the Bookworm by Hermione Weasley_Ginny Potter

Summary: Hermione Granger is not the person everyone thinks… sure, she regards the rules more than most people and tries her best to keep her grades perfect, but a real teenage girl resides. This story is Hermione’s diary, and if you read it, you will read about the girl that is hidden by the bookworm, and we will explore Hermione’s real thoughts. Rated PG-13 for language. Author’s Note: This fic was written BEFORE the publication of HBP, so it will follow through OotP cannon. And, I promise that the story is better than the summary! ;) Chapter Five accepted!! The story is finished now... you know you wanna review!
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 01/31/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

the best romance fic i've read yet! I hope to read a sequal! OR maybe a Harry Ginny one or something! i give it a 10!

Author's Response: Oh, I doubt it was that good, bu thanks anyway! Lol. Sorry, I don't think I'm going to be writing a sequel, but I have a few other R/Hr stories I plan on submitting. No H/G ones yet, but who knows what'll happen in the future! Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 01/29/06 Title: None

amazing story. i love it when Ron and Hermione get paired up. When will they offically hook-up? Soon I hope.


Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 01/31/06 Title: None

yay #1 review! It was a very well written and enjoyable chapter! I hope to read more in the near future...

The Art of the Quill by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: *One shot* It is Lily and James's fifth year, and they have to endure many extremely dull classes. To pass the time, they swap notes. This is a collection of most of those notes ... and the madness that inevitably ensues.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Art of the Quill

Very nice. I was laughing hysterically. I was laughing so hard that I was crying at one point.

Author's Response: Really? I wasn\'t aware it was that funny ... but I\'m glad you liked it, anyway! Thanks!

Only In My Dreams by Ice Cream Eater

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ron has been dreaming of Hermione during the summer months. He hasn't told anybody. Hermione is secretly thinking of him as well. When will they find out their love for each other and what will happen then?

Mostly Ron/Hermione, but Harry and Ginny are a couple.

Warnings: Alternate Universe, and eventually some Violence
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 01/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Diagon Alley

this is a very fun story. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I will follow it all the way! Very enjoyable.

Neversent by Lacerated

Summary: "I have a thousand dark nights that will never be spent with you. I have a chorus of broken voices. The victims of war. I have the misery, the stench of death in my hair. The poignant, musky odor that terrifies me of what is to come. The ringing of a hundred mournful cries." One-shot.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 03/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot.

I was suprised by my reaction to the stroy, for I am not a Draco/Ginny shipper. However, the moment I began reading, I was hooked in. Reading this story gave me the chills. The story was written very well, and contained very descriptive words. To that I have to say BRAVO!! It was so good that I plan to read 'Of The Sorrows' also. Thank you for writing this story.

Author's Response: Ohh, well thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. =)

Is it Pride or Prejudice? by Stormbringer

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Evans is confident yet unsure of her future. Who needs a boyfriend anyway when you've got awesome friends? But when James Potter finds a way into her mind and heart, slowly but surely, Lily finds what she missed in life. Love, loathing, friendships, and hardships are all components of this epic tale.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 19: Perhaps You Can't Know Everything

That was awesome! I'm sad James had to leave tho...I can't wait for more!!

sorry this wasn't one of the constructive reviews i usually leave...it was just...well...awesome!

Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 11/23/07 Title: Chapter 20: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

*Standing ovation with much loud cheering!*

Absolutely brilliant story. It had the perfect sweet ending that everyone new was eventually coming, yet it was still very good to read it. I love your writing, it is amazing to read your work!

And to read a story from start to finish, wow...it's been a while since a I've watched a story become complete. And for that, thanks and congradulations on creating a spetacular story.

The characters were brilliant: Lily and James were very well written with only the most minor glitches here and there, which made them seem even more realistic than you initially created them to be. Sirius and SamLin were also wonderful characters! They did a great job in their supporting rolls! And your various other characters were very fun to read, too.

Overall, I think you accomplished what you had inteded, and I hope to read stories that you write in the future!


Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 17: Obviously Not

I love your story more than I love the movie, which is saying something as it's in my top 10 fav. movies...and eventhough I can anticipate what comes next, I'd still love to read it. You are a wonderful author. I love the descriptions and the dialog. I hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: I wish I could update soon too...but I\'ve hit one of those bad writer\'s blocks. Ugh...I\'ll try writing. Thanks for the compliment.

Just a Boy by coppercurls

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: An ode to the life of Cedric Diggory and the countless others like him.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just a boy

This is really good. It's a wonderful representation of both Cedric and other children to be murdered by Voldemort.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I\'m glad you liked it. This was my hymn to the fallen, and I\'m glad it worked well.

Lullaby by crazy_purple_hp_freak

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Late at night, Lily rocks Harry to sleep. She murmurs this lullaby…
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: Lullaby

This poem is really good. It gave me chills as I read it. I could actually picture Lily reading this to Harry as Voldemort came to kill them.
Very well written, thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I\'m really glad the kind of feeling I was trying to convey got through.

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 8: Seventeenth detention...Potter is the bane of my existence

i love this story very much. You are a very good writer.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. How sweet!

The Tear Never Cried by harry_kissed_ginny

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A short poem about Ginny seeing Harry's dead body...
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of my fav. poems that I've ever read. And that encludes the ones I've written. It is just beautiful. One question tho...what happens to Ginny after she kills Voldemort? Does she kill her self? (okay that was two questions)


Author's Response: Hm.... I never thought about that. I might write a sequel to this one day.

Escape by BlackClaude

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: A ballad about my favorite conflicted hero and the lengths to which his loyalty drives him.

Second place entry in The Ballad Challenge

Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 11/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Escape

congradulations on the Win!!! This is a beautiful poem. I really love it.

But there was no one else who knew
The traitor was alive
So Black remained the last hope for
His godson to survive.

I don't think it flows quite right..The last two lines just don't work right...I think if you move the word for to the line right below it, then it will flow better.

it would read:

But there was no one else who knew
The traitor was alive
So Black remained the last hope
For his godson to survive.

The Hundredth Time by MrsRuebeusHagridDursley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I original wrote this poem for my poetry class over on the Boards, but I really liked it, and wanted to submit it here!

When I wrote it I was thinking about how Ginny would feel a while after her break-up, but, I suppose it could be read from the perspective of anyone after that kind of break up.

Oh, and about the warning. No one actually commits suicide, but they think about it.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 02/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Hundredth Time

This poem is beautiful. It really captivates the feeling of sorrow. I can understand where Ginny's feelings and words of despair. I expecially like the lines I feel myself stop feeling and meories come to taunt me.


Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Those compliments were so nice! I\'m glad you like it so much!

Portholes of Immortality by coppercurls

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Regulus Black reflections on his family, particularly Sirius, as he prepares to leave the Death Eaters.
Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 02/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Portholes of Immortality

I really liked this poem. I liked how you can feel the mood by how the line breaks and spacing occur.


Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I was having a lot of trouble transfering the format from Word to the website, so I\'m glad the basic idea still comes across. Anyway, thanks again!

Love Conquers by dumbly_dorr

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: If you're looking for the usual James-loves-Lily-but-Lily-hates-James storyline, then this isn't it. The thing is, Lily doesn't hate James at all, he can just be annoying at the best of times. As she comes to realise why she doesn't hate him, it leads to the famous love we all know about. Set against the backdrop of a warring magical world where nothing is certain, can James and Lily hold onto each other and fight?

UPDATE August 08: It's FINISHED! Thank you so much to all those who have read and reviewed this story, I have loved your support. i hope there are still people out there who are willing to read it. Keep an eye out for more stories by me! UPDATE February '08: I have changed the chapter names of some of the 'Defied' chapters, to make this fit and to make it more plausible, as I see the 'thrice defying' of Voldemort as happening when James and Lily are part of the Order of the Phoenix.

UPDATE 20th September: I have altered my facts in the chapter 'Once Defied' as I made mistakes in the ages of James and Lily. It didn't matter so much in this chapter but had annoying repercusions for future chapters. It should all now be correct.

Reviewer: twirlergirl583 Signed
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Sirius in Trouble

wow. i totally thought the high pitched voice was voldemort. then i was going to ask you how voldemort got into Hogwarts...and just wow. very well written.

two typos:
1. Sirius panicked, and in his haste, threw opend the nearest door to him, shutting it quietely behinf him.

2. The footsteps grew louder, and Sirius distinctly heard a cat miaow.

Meow. not miaow. but you were close!

anyway i still love the story. :)