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Jade is a Piscean teenager living in a small village in New Mexico, USA. When she is not traveling or procrastinating with her homework, she enjoys writing, reading, languages, dance, music, and art and crafts. She takes care of two adorable and wonderful siblings. Along with being an author, singer, dancer, guitar-player, outdoorsy hippi girl, and pseudo-mother, Jade plans to be the future director of her father’s business, The Tracking Project. She is a homeschooler enrolled with a prestigious curriculum and thus receives a prep school education in her living room. Hee.
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You Were Mine by Secret Lily
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 126]

Summary:

As James is ready to propose to his girlfriend of one year, he wonders why a certain red head's face pops into his mind. One-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2848 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/26/05 Updated: 04/26/05


Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 01/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: You Were Mine

Oh my god, that was amazing! Secret Lily, how old are you? I'm curious. This was a really, really good one-shot. I think The Prongs Complex and this one tie in first for Best One-Shot!

Author's Response: Um, 15 :)

 

Summary:

In her seventh year at Hogwarts, Lily starts to feel she'll never find love. That is, until a familar looking masked man sweeps her off her ruleabiding feet. Pre-HBP, AU



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 18710 Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/22/05 Updated: 01/06/06


Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The First Day Back

Yeah, I liked it. Especially the part where you made it seem like James had "filled-out", and had a deep voice and all that. That's how I feel every time I talk to my guy friends these days, lol. They grew up like that *snaps fingers*. On to the next...

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: The First Day Back

Yeah, I liked it. Especially the part where you made it seem like James had "filled-out", and had a deep voice and all that. That's how I feel every time I talk to my guy friends these days, lol. They grew up like that *snaps fingers*. On to the next...

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 2: Losing The Surname

Haha, that was a really good chapter. My favorite parts were: “Shh,” Sydney hushed. “Something’s going on in her head that she doesn’t like. This happens usually around exam time. Lily honey, it’s ok. O.W.L’s are over. You did well on them.” ~ “You’re telling me,” Sirius said, looking over his shoulder. James turned to see Lily banging her head against the table. “Well, she had beauty and brains. Obviously, there was no room for sanity. Hey, you can’t have everything.” Very funny. But of course, you've already showed your brilliance with numerous other fics, so you know...next one...

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 3: The Dance

I was almost disgusted for a second, when that guy with the black mask was groping Lily, because I thought it was James, but then I remembered that you never said what color his mask was, so then I was better, lol. I love how you did everyone's individual meetings, that was very cute.

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 4: The Morning After

I find it oddly concidental that we both used the name Evan Rosier in our fics. I never read this fic before starting mine though, so that's cool. My favorite part in the last chapter: “I’m not going because my hormones are out of whack like yours are,” Lily insisted. “I’m going to make sure that there is no fighting, drinking, no indecent exposure…” I just forgot to tell you that. Ew, Lucius Malfoy, what a fricken pervert! That is sooo nasty. Alright, again...next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 5: Distractions

Ooooooo, buuuusted! That is way awesome. I honestly can't think of a better way to spill a secret, if you had to. Ok, I wanted to ask you a question. Are you a happy ending kind of person, or do you find that people dying in the ends of stories is unusual and original? Long-winded and confusing, yes I know, but I just want to know. Most of your fics seem pretty light-hearted, and I like that. Just seeing if you had a Too Sweet to Remember kind of side to you, lol.

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 6: Coming Clean

Yes! You didn't make it that Voldemort and Malfoy and everybody was after Lily! Big change, and I love it! There's not much more for me to say, unless you want to hear more about how much I love your story and how talented you are as a writer, lol.

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 7: Behind The Mask

Oh that sucks. I wonder what Sirius and Sydney are doing right now though...okay, I must lighten my mood by telling you which parts were my favorite from the last few chapters, since I keep forgetting, stupid me. ~“That James is into some pretty kinky stuff,” Sirius explained nervously, Peter nodding enthusiastically in agreement. “Ol’ Florence Merryweather ought to be able to account for that. I heard her calling him Zorro one night. Pretty disturbing if you ask me.” ~ “Come on, Syd,” Sirius pleaded. “Give the boy a break. I mean, he may not be the brightest candle in the chandelier, but his heart’s in the right place.” Alright, until the next!

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 8: The Truth Is Out

I honestly don't know what to think. But it doesn't really matter, seeing as this story is over already, and I'm almost done with it. Ah well...

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 9: The Red Mask

Oh I love it. Of course I do, lol. My favorite part of all was: With that, he and Sydney walked up the stairs, giggling and saying something along the lines of ‘Call me Zorro’. That is sooooo KINKY!!! I noticed you liked that word. It's very funny. So is "smouldering". If you've read Seduced by the Toerag, you'll know what I mean, lol. Until the next chapter of No Rain!! ~Jade

 

Summary: "Oh who can tell, save those whose hearts hath tried.” -Lord Byron. Inspired by a line of poetry by Lord Byron, this is the first in a series (hopefully) on Lily, James, and eventually Harry Potter. Lily and James' seventh and final year at Hogwarts. Post HBP with a bit of AU thrown in.





Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 11394 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
07/01/05 Updated: 08/19/06


Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 12/11/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Fresh as a Daisy

That was great! "We are making PROGRESS!" Update soon! Tash

Author's Response: Hee hee... thanks. I would update, but submissions are closed. I am of the opinion that this is a well deserved break for our lovely mods, but still... I know you want to read (and I want to post!).

 

Revenge of the Serpent by QuIDdITch_PlaYA
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 201]

Summary: Voldemort is vanquished, Ron and Hermione have moved out of the Burrow together, Harry and Ginny are in love now that she is fresh out of Hogwarts, but not everyone is happy. When Harry leaves on a mission for the dwindling Order of the Phoenix, he is kidnapped by remaining Death Eaters who are out for revenge. This is Ginny's story, of rescuing the man she loves. Post-HBP





Complete!



The Sequel, With Tired Eyes, Minds, and Souls We Slept is up!


Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations

Word count: 16226 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/24/05 Updated: 03/02/06


Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 12/24/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Mission

Interesting! Very interesting! I have to read more before I offer any criticism or anything ;D. Great job! —Jade

Author's Response: Thanks :) hope u like it!

 

Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 78521 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/17/05 Updated: 07/21/06


Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 12/17/05 Title: Chapter 12: Such a Fool

Wow. That is simply what I have to say. I don't know why, but I see a lot of what's going on in my own life right now in this story. Not the whole part about being kissed by my crushes best mate, lol, but just all those feelings and everything. I love this story sooo much. You're an amazing author! Update again soon please ;D! Jade

Author's Response: You see your life in here? Wow, I'm glad I wrote the fic realistically. I tried as best as possible to combine real life teenage elements into the story in order for the readers to engage it more. I'm glad it's working! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 12/10/05 Title: Chapter 11: The Christmas Party

Oh my god! That was new! Now what's gonna happen...poor James. He just can't seem to do it right. *sad sigh*...Update again soon! I can't wait! -Tash

Author's Response: James really can't pull it together, lol! I'm glad you liked it and thanks a bunch for the review!

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 12/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Crumble to Ash

hmm...interesting. i was definitely hooked with the quote in the summary though, that was quite ingenius of you. keep writing, Jade

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 15: The End of the Beginning

Wow. I must say this is probably the best chapter so far, just because both of the things they were saying were equally true. I love how you didn't make Lily instantly like James after he said all those things. That's what makes this story really different from everyone elses. I really admire you, Starmaiden, and Cherry and Pheonix Feather, because all three of you delve into the emotions of the characters and make the readers feel something, you know? So congratulations, you're obviously in my Favorites :). Great job, and I'm on to the next chapter! (I must say, you've updated a lot in the month that I was traveling, and that's the best coming-home present anyone could've given me, even not on purpose, lol.)

Author's Response: Hi there! Awww, this review is so very flattering. I'm really glad you like all the inner-emotional issues I put in, and my writing. Thank-you so much! I hope you had a good time on your trip. Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 16: Cold Fog

OMG! Foul-play, or just Bludgers? Got to find out! ......

Author's Response: Heheh, keep reading and find out! LOL!

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 16: Cold Fog

Ok, sorry, I just had to read the next chapter to find out. Now I'll give you a real review, lol. Okay, you are one of my idols. I love the way you explained what was happening in everyone's life! It was funny and interesting and kept me reading. I've noticed that now that I've started writing, I study other people's writing styles, and yours is really amazing. Just the way you put everything. It's not too fancy, not too boring, just right. I really, really liked this chapter! And now I'll go leave a review on the next chapter :).

Author's Response: Ooh, I know what you mean by studying other people's writing. I do it all the time now! Goodness, you are very flattering, I'm truly brimming with happiness. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Natasha Johnson Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 17: Poetry

This was a great chapter, because you blended intrigue, sorrow, comedy, and romance together really well. That's what I've decided I like this fic for: it's unusualness. You know, usually Lily just falls for James just like that and everything, but in this one, it's real. This is more what it's like to be teenager, you know? So I love the reality of the situation. And also the fact that Sirius is going out with a younger girl, 'cause YEAH! Guys go out with younger girls! That's also very real, lol. But anyway, really, really great job, and I'll be waiting for the next update with bated breath :). Bye!

Author's Response: Unusualness? Ooh, thank-you! For this story, I tried to move away from the typical things in a J/L fic, but still keep everyone canon. I understand what you mean by the teenage issues (yeah guys go out with younger girls!!). I'm very flattered, and I'll try to update real soon! Thanks a bunch!

 
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