Summary: It's Lily's last year at Hogwarts, and she's determined to make it the best. But with Voldemort taking over everywhere, people are becoming distraught and friendships are breaking. Not to mention a certain someone just won't seem to give up on her. It seems like Lily just can't catch a break, and her friends and family are in danger...
I don't know if it was intentional, but I saw a lot of parallels between Lily's relationsip with Hagrid and Harry's relationship with Hagrid here. I like that, it's good to see some reference to Harry in these early times.
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Come on, for the love of God. Ron's never been that mean to Ginny.
Summary: Harry has to say goodbye to Hogwarts, Privet Drive and his former life. But in all bad situations, there is always a little hope and Ginny provides Harry with comfort. Ron and Hermione become a couple but are also there at Harry's side. Together, they face the hardest and most important battle of their lives. (Most romance happens in later chapters). I promise the story gets much better. I set the category at romance R/H and H/G because its general but has LOTS of shipping moments.
I gotta say, I'm not so thrilled. the main characters seem way ooc, especially hermione and ginny, even before the pregnancies. Harry and Ron don't seem quite right either, especially in relation to Draco, who is very wrong. It's a captivating storyline, but not one that deals with the characters as we know them.
Okay, having sex under the imperius curse is the same as being raped. Malfoy is a rapist. And Harry and Ron are okay with this? yeah, right.
Summary: This is my interpretation of what's going to happen at the end of the last book.
Wow. It's all over. I only hope I can bring it to such a decisive conclusion in my own story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There are so few that it's a pleasure when I get one!
Summary: This is the story of the adventures of Lily and James Potter as they watch their son grow up from afar, only allowed these small moments....
I would really like to see an update to this. It's a great idea and a great start.
Summary: The trio go to the Muggles after the funeral, but on the train ride home will one red-head decide to come with them after learning of their plans?
I love the concept and I think this is the kind of thing that needs to be written, but there's just no way I'm gonna be able to finish the story. You've got continuity issues crawling out your ears, Run-on and fragmented sentences, massively long dialogue, and blatant OOC-ness. I would suggest major revision before you continue. Best of luck to you!
Author's Response: Thanx for the constructive critism. I'll try to fix that and I hope Chapter 2 isn't like that since I wrote it many times already. Also who is OOC? I've been thinking and couldn't really think who it could be.