I'm a college student studying Archaeology, and I've gotten into writing as a hobby. I really enjoy the Harry Potter world, and decided that I would make my own contribution to the fanfic library. Thanks go to my wife for all of her support and help with proof-reading.
Fantastic story; I hope to see more of it soon.
Your story is really quite fantastic, but the end of this chapter really seems to leave me hanging, with not even an elipsis to carry me over. Is that a mistake? Either way, it is wonderful. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: To quote Anna, "oh crap!" Yes, the end of the chapter is missing. Drat. I've emailed my mod. I have a feeling at 12,000 plus words, it may have been too big! I'll get it fixed. Sorry!
*wow guys...i'm so sorry i havent updated in a while. im not going to make excuses other than say that my computer with the story on it broke--so i'm rewriting the last few chapters. SORRY FOR THE DELAY AND THANK YOU TO ALL MY LOYAL READERS!*
Obviously the end of the chapter has people upset... but that just shows that you are able to write characters that people care about. Good Job, and keep it up.
This is one of the best beginnings I've ever seen; I really hope you'll continue!
Author's Response: I have every intention of continuing...but I won't kid you...updates will be slow at times.
Wow, I'm glad to see that you are posting again. After so long in between this is almost like a prologue to a sequal. I hope the next chapter is up soon!
That was fantastic. I for one would love to see anything else you might write, so go ahead with the other idea! Thanks for the story!
I've been reading this over the last two days, and I've been really impressed! But one thing was missing... opposition. There was no 'bad-guy' or great calamity that the protagonists had to overcome, only small problems here and there. It was still absolutely fantastic because these are characters I care about and I want to know more about them and what happens, but it still needed a little more. And now you've left me with a cliffhanger that makes me wish I had waited until the next chapter is posted to discover this story, and introduced what should amount to some great opposition. Great Job! I look forward to the next chapter, and I hope you won't keep me waiting for long!
Hey, this is me reviewing my own book, how about that, huh?
Anyway, I was thinking to myself that the plot synopsis/tagline that appears with my story sucks. And while I seem to do alright with the story itself, I can't seem to come up with anything better. So, if any of you, my faithful readers, can come up with something better, and I know you can, email me at email@example.com with your idea. I will then select the best one and use it, with due credit to the submitter expressed in the author's note on chapter one. I look forward to anyone trying this, hopefully you will think it's fun.
Author's Response: I\'m talking about the one that appears as follows. \"Harry begins to put his plans for defeating Voldemort into action, but runs into unexpected trouble that will make his task considerably more difficult. Harry will have to change his plans completely and rely on his friends more than ever. Seventh Year, post-HBP. Do you like quick updates? Me too!\"
I love your story... how in the world to you get them to validate chapters so fast?
Very enjoyable! I can't wait for more!
I've been waiting for another story from you for quite a while! I'm looking forward to reading more, as the beginning was fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Chapter 2 has been submitted.