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Hey, I'm little_kitty, welcome to my info page (yes, so sorry for the cheesey opening line.)

Quick Update (as of August 14, 2006): To my readers, Shadows of Death and Sweet Vengeance: 8 Ways to Torture a Ferret have officially been taken down (not permanently!) due to the fact that I really need to rework the plots. I'm sorry about that, but thanks to all who read what I started. Hopefully they can be reposted sometime in the near future.

My Stories:

I’ve Got My Eyes On You: This is a general fic that I wrote recently. I’m pleased with the way this turned out. It started off as a drabble, became a one-shot, and is now going to be a [short] chaptered fic. It’s a bit of a “what the heck?” fic, but I had fun writing it. [Chapter Two Posted]

Memories Never Forgotten: This is my first one-shot songfic. It's H/G, and I'm rather pleased with the way it turned out. It’s based on a song by the Backstreet Boys from their Never Gone album. [Complete]

Somebody Beside Me: This is a one-shot that I wrote for the Gryffindor banner challenge, in response to a banner made by wendelin the wierd. It's dark/angsty, and I rather like this one because it was the piece that got me out of my writer's block. [Complete]


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A Bit about Me:

~I'm 16 years old.

~I'm the Gryffindor House Prefect.

~I live in Canada. No, I do not have a dog sledding license, nor do I live in an igloo or say "eh?" after every sentence.

~Regardless of what you might think, I actually don’t have a cat, nor will I ever have one. I just like cats.

~I'm a fan fiction moderator on this site. Contact me if you have problems.

~Goblet of Fire, Prisoner of Azkaban, and Half-Blood Prince are the best three Harry Potter books.

~Star Wars is love (especially Revenge of the Sith!).

~I like to collect quotes. =)



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Date: 02/11/06 Title: None

Hey, this is not so bad. I liked it, but would strongly suggest that you make paragraphs because the entire chunk is hard to read. Also, it's important to separate the dialogue so we can clearly distinguish who's speaking. the way you had it was unclear, but after a bit, I was able to figure it out! Nice work. I liked the way you ended this chapter. Very effective.

 

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Date: 03/16/06 Title: None

I’m liking the backstory behind this. It’s great! You have a few dialogue errors that need fixing, though. I liked the appearance of Dumbledore’s brother; we don’t get to see him very much, but this was a little different :) I wanted to point out that some Potter words ought to be capitalised, such as Dark Lord. I loved your description of what happened that night on Halloween. The piano idea was a little bit strange, but everything was wrapped up nicely with your closing statement. It really gave a sense of “to be continued” but didn’t leave me confused. Good stuff, and I also liked the poem!

 

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Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 03/16/06 Title: None

Great! James Henry Potter…very similar to Harry James Potter, in a way, kind of. I thought it was pretty finny how Mrs. Lupin was making Remus eat all kinds of green food…does she really love that colour or what? As for Ray being Sirius’ brother, isn’t his name Regulus, or have I missed something? Just thought I ought to ask you that. Just one thing, how could you leave out Peter? You had scenes with every Marauder except for him *tear* that is very saddening. You should include a scene with him, too.

 

Summary: Uncle Vernon has a bad toothache, and the only dentist who can see him on a Saturday is a Dr. Granger. What he doesn't know is gonna hurt him. Open wide!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3990 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 11/09/04


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: (Short Story)

MsTattersall, this was hilarious! Vernon going to the dentist and being drilled by Hermione’s parents? What a strange, yet funny coincidence. So Dudley’s still afraid of the M word…guess he’ll never grow up. Well, he does certainly seem like quite the bad boy, smoking and all. Hermione’s mom’s name is Granger? Interesting…that’s Hermione’s middle name too isn’t it? Sorry, I just realized that. Kind of hard to believe that Uncle Vernon would be afraid of the radiation from the x ray. Probably doesn’t go to the dentist often, and I’m not surprised. Overall, I thought this was pretty funny because it focussed more on the Muggle aspect of the HP world, but still incorporated some wizard stuff. This was unique, and the OWL part with Vernon howling was great! You seemed to portray the grangers as smart people, and I thought that was very believable. Great stuff!

 

Summary: During the final war, Ginny believed she had lost the one she loved most. Pushed to move on, she becomes an advice columnist for The Daily Prophet and recieves a mysterious letter that forces her to examine the past and look for the truth in the lie. DG

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6546 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
11/26/04 Updated: 11/26/04


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Promise is for Never

This was good. It's the first Draco/Ginny fic I've read, and you've given me a good impression of this ship. I just wanted to point out that Floo Powder is capitalised; you did forget it in several places. But not to worry. The characters all acted quite IC, but I would suggest that you don't call hermione "granger." Only Malfoy calls her that, and the story isn't from his POV. IT's from an omniscient POV, so I think that "Hermione" would suffice. Overall, though, nicely written! Now I'm going to go read some more draco/Ginny fics! You've inspired me ! Good job!

 

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Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: None

Some nice work going on here. I haven’t read a lot of fics with Wood in it, and I have to say that you portrayed him pretty well. A very Quidditch focused kind of guy. I thought your ending to this chapter was good. It wasn’t exactly a cliffhanger, but it was definitely an ending that kept me in some sort of suspense. So that was well done. Casper and Taran are such troublemakers *giggle* Oh, just wanted to point out that Chasers and Quaffle are capitalised, Also, you accidentally misspelled McGonagall’s name: you wrote McGonnagol. Also, you many want to space out some of your paragraphs. Like, I know it’s a new paragraph, but it isn’t spaced and looks a bit chunky. That’s all the suggestions I can give you for now. It was quite good!

 

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A light-hearted one-shot collaboration - Marauder Era.

Join the Slytherins for an afternoon of insults, squid harrassment, 'Bowling for Badgers', and terrifying waterfowl.

{Amelia Bones, Antonin Dolohov, Bellatrix Lestrange, Mundungus Fletcher and (OC) Lydia St. James}


Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2824 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/04/04 Updated: 12/04/04


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: I: Squidventures of the Slytherins

I thought this was great! You have a wonderful wway of describing everything. I could perfectly envision all the characters in my head. Mundungus was really funny, welll done. PErsonally, for this quote here: "His hand dropped to the grass and he opened one eye at the shocking suggestion that he might be: a) a girl, or even more appalling, b) a Marauder!" I wouldn't have used the a) and b). Maybe I would have used "either' instead. well, that's just me. Here: "Annie bent his knee and crossed his other leg on it as he leaned up resting his head on an arm bent under his neck. " I was a bit confused on who Annie was at the begiining, but I figured it out after reading it a few times. I know it's like a nickname, but maybe you could put the real name in brackets. I actually thought it was a girl for a moment. Overall, fantastic job!! **applauds** 9/10!

 

Summary:

In their seventh year at Hogwarts, Lily Evans and James Potter are made Head Girl and Head Boy. Lily is horribly dismayed by this, as she cannot stand James. As the year goes on, however, things begin to change between the two. Can James catch his flower, or is it hopeless for him to try?

“That arrogant…arrogant…ARG! That toerag is Head Boy! HEAD BOY! How did he make HEAD BOY! What is Dumbledore on? I mean, he struts around, pranking, pranking, PRANKING, and then Dumbledore says, ‘Gee, this kid really is an irresponsible bad influence, prankster, and all around jerk. Yes! He’d make a fine Head Boy!’”



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 46601 Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Published:
12/17/04 Updated: 08/31/05


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 11: A Date?

Cute! I thought this was nice. At first, the whole thing with Lily suggesting Madam Puddifoot's to JAmes, I thought it was very much like Harry and Cho. Good thing this one turned out to be more successful! I think you captured the spirit of the characters very well. It was very sweet, and I see that James' effort to make Lily like him certainly are working out. Good job! 9/101

Author's Response: Thank you! We got the idea from Harry and Cho, but it had to work out with Lily and James, otherwise we would never get to see Harry and Cho, and we can\'t have that! We\'re so glad you liked our characterization, we worked quite hard on it.

 

Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 61059 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
12/21/04 Updated: 06/14/06


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chocolate Hearts

hey, great stuff! Loved every bit of it! You really have talent when it comes to words and this chapter was o cute! The Hogsmeade Trip sounded a lot funner than it's sometimes portrayed in the books, I think. Seamus is nice, I've never really pictured him with hermione, but he seems decent so far. This is so awesome, I'm putting you on my favourite author's list! Hope you enjoy your place there!

 
Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/09/06 Title: Chapter 5: Blissfully Unaware

Wow....just wow. Your story is fantabulous! I have honestly thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter so far. And that's saying a lot, considering that I usually read a chapter before I lose interest. But your story has managed to catch my attention. I think your characters are great, and somehow, your story reminds me slightly of one of my fics, Fatally in Love, since there's the situation with Harry and Ron, but Hermione with another dude. But yours progresses a lot faster, and you use Seamus as Hermione's b/f. But yours is way better than mine. I think the reason why I like your story so much is because we don't really get to see the other side of Hermione, and here you have it all written out. And yet it's still so believable. Seamus is such a nice guy! I want him for my b/f...nah I'm kidding. Well, I sincerely hope you update again soon, because I'm going to go read the rest of it now! Lovely work, 10/10!

 
Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/09/06 Title: Chapter 6: A Question Of Heart

Hey, some great stuff! I just wanted to point out that Muggles is capitalized, or I believe it is so. I liked Malfoy's character here...oh is he going to pair up with Ginny? Hm...oh well good job!

Author's Response: -sheepish grin- Yes, you're correct, however, by the time I discovered my mistake, I figured that it would take way too much effort to fix it. Thanks for pointing that out, though. =)

 
Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/09/06 Title: Chapter 7: Beautiful Disaster

Hahaha...I thought this was funny. Okay, I totally take back what I said about Seamus...such a player. Ugh. Anyway, the spider repellant was hilarious! Well, that's something I'd do too. Oh yeah, and now it seems like Harry's decided to take over the "overprotective" role from Ron, I guess, because it's kind of like how Ron tries to protect Ginny. Great stuff!

 

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Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: None

I’m really liking this so far. A twist on Prisoner of Azkaban would really be interesting, I think. So far, everything seems so familiar…reminds me of the long time ago that I actually read the book. Well, you’ve got a pretty good start so far, nothing seems twisted yet. Seems kind of just like you’re rephrasing the book so far. But at least you’ve got the facts correct! Good luck on making this “twisted!” Lovely job so far!

 

Next Game! by Liisa
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 36]

Summary: The Marauders and Company get their hands and some muggle board games. Hilarity ensues.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3095 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/18/05 Updated: 01/18/05


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: That's impossible...

This was awesomely funny! I thought it was great how they were all playing Muggle Board games. The Frustration picture was particularly good…hmmm…shouting out random words. Next time I play pictionary, if I ever see that word, I’ll think of this fic. Sirius bellowing out “I AM A PRETTY LITTLE GIRL” was actually kind of scary. But their reactions to these “new” Muggle games were all great! I mean, if I were non-Muggle, I’d probably react the same way. You did a fantastic job, and I laughed throughout the whole story. 10/10

 

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Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
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12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: None

Hey, this was the first J/L fic I've read, and you made it believable! awesome job, even though it was a teensy bit fluffy. It made me laugh, especially the top 10 list for Lily. It's cute, though. And they seemed to act very typical ,so good job on keeping this IC. Also good job on your transition to the past. You managed to do it without needing to add a subheading. It was good that you didn't have to disrupt the story that way! 10/10!

 

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Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 03/16/06 Title: None

This was interesting. I really liked the way you touched on all the aspects of Harry’s life that he has experienced so far. Had I never read HP before, I would still have been able to get a general idea. The good part is that you only gave the highlights without making it boring. So kudos to you. One thing I want to comment on (is very minor) is the fact that Lupin signed the letter as Moony. Do you think he would really do that? I thought he would have signed it as Lupin or something, since Moony is kind of a name he used with the Marauders. But that doesn’t really matter. You have a few minor errors regarding spelling/punctuation, but that can be easily overlooked. One thing, for example, is the fact that Muggle should be capitalised. And you misspelled McGonagall. Other than that, some great stuff going on here! Keep it up! 8/10

 

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Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: None

Hey, this was a good story. You have good grammar. The butterbeer trick was evil…making Aelwen turn green? Funny, though, and it really seems like something Fred and George would do. Ainslie and Aelwen are interesting names. Where did you come up with them? Oh, and their last name is Clearwater. Do they have any relation to Penelope Clearwater? Percy’s girlfriend from way back when? The end was a bit surprising, though. Malfoy kissing a Gryffindor? That’s a first. You sure he wasn’t drunk at the time? Snape seems very in character. I liked that. But how could a Gryffindor betray her own house? Noooo….cannot be possible! Lol…this was great stuff! You

 
Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: None

Hey, this was a good story. You have good grammar. The butterbeer trick was evil…making Aelwen turn green? Funny, though, and it really seems like something Fred and George would do. Ainslie and Aelwen are interesting names. Where did you come up with them? Oh, and their last name is Clearwater. Do they have any relation to Penelope Clearwater? Percy’s girlfriend from way back when? The end was a bit surprising, though. Malfoy kissing a Gryffindor? That’s a first. You sure he wasn’t drunk at the time? Snape seems very in character. I liked that. But how could a Gryffindor betray her own house? Noooo….cannot be possible! Lol…this was great stuff! You

 
Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: None

Hey, this was a good story. You have good grammar. The butterbeer trick was evil…making Aelwen turn green? Funny, though, and it really seems like something Fred and George would do. Ainslie and Aelwen are interesting names. Where did you come up with them? Oh, and their last name is Clearwater. Do they have any relation to Penelope Clearwater? Percy’s girlfriend from way back when? The end was a bit surprising, though. Malfoy kissing a Gryffindor? That’s a first. You sure he wasn’t drunk at the time? Snape seems very in character. I liked that. But how could a Gryffindor betray her own house? Noooo….cannot be possible! Lol…this was great stuff! You

 

Secret Admirer by VickNick
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 103]

Summary: It's nearing Valentine's day, and Hermione falls asleep in the common room again. When she wakes, she finds a gift and a number of notes from her, 'Secret Admirer'. With the given clues, will she figure out who it is, and will he be the oh-so-special-one she dreams of it being? Everyday, she receives a new clue, and everyday, she comes closer to figuring out who it is.
~* By Vicky (hermioneclone12) and Nickle. GUYS!!! The last chapter is up!! Enjoy!!

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8969 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/04/05 Updated: 06/29/05


Reviewer: little_kitty Signed
Date: 02/11/06 Title: Chapter 3: New Mysteries, Funny Surprises

This was a good story. I like the Ron/Hermione ship. You wrote this well. I thought it was humourous! The Malfoy poster was just so funny! One little suggestion is to check over your punctuation again. in a few places, you used periods to end quotations instead of commas, and at one point you used a " to start a quotation or something and you ended it with '. Just those little mini things. OVerall, though, I have to say this was realistically written, with the characters sounding very IC. It was very cute, and I liked it! 9/10

 
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