Okay, what to say? Well, my name is Bonnie, I'm American, and I love to read and write fanfiction. There's nothing to say, really. I'm quite a boring person. Umm. *dies of sheer boredom*
If you are offended by strong language, I warn you not to visit my livejournal. I have a veeeery colorful vocabulary.
Hey, Spellbound, once again you have me positively baffled with your fantastic story. This is practically the only Harry/Hermione story I've ever read (I'm not really a fan) and its GREAT! I almost died when you took that long break. Anyway, I loved how you've ended the chapter. It shows that although everyone's back together and happy, the looming threat of Lord Voldemort hasn't disappeared yet, as it would have by now it this were another story. Wonderful; keep up the good work!
Very nice, very nice. Short, to the point, tidy, well written. I liked it very much. Keep up the good work. ~Bonnie
WOOHOO, TEN, TEN, TEN!! Fantastic! You've managed to make beautiful beginning to a beautiful story and I'm sure it'll turn out beautiful. I love it. All the characters are in character, the story doesn't interfere with canon (yet) and as far as I can tell, this will be great. But why did you change it? It used to be taking place at Hogwarts, from what I remember. Anyway, good luck and keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I chose to change the story because after not writing in it for a long time, I realised that I had a better idea for a story using a similar premise.
"How do you melt a heart of ice?"
I love you! This chapter is my favorite so far! You're a great writer. Although it isn't clear what happened to Draco when he lived in the forest or what type of person he's changing into, you seem keen on keeping the reader's attention on what Draco is now. Well, that's what I think. And sometimes I'm just weird like that. Ten! Keep up the good work!
Ten! This chapter is quite different than the others before it. I really didn't think they would be able to converse so, as you put it, naturally. I liked the way this chapter was written. The way you wander off to other elements of the story and still manage to stay focused on the main idea of the chapter amazes me. Excellent work! Keep it up!
ZOMG! 10! Very good, wonderfully written, a real tear-jerker! Very, very good. Keep up the good work and stay humble! ~Bonnie
Okay, here's your review! I loved this chapter very much. I thought the conversation that Hermione and Malfoy had really brought out their feelings in ways that actions couldn't have, so kudos for that. *hands cookie* And also, the way you kept Malfoy in character is really good. I can't stand it when people are out of character, and you've stayed far away from that, so here's another cookie. Keep up the good work! This is a really great story! *hands a whole box of cookies* ~Bonnie
Author's Response: hahaha! Hey, Bonnie! Oh, it\'s awesome you liked this chapter, and I hope you enjoy my others as well! =D The hardest part is keeping them in character so it\'s great that you think that I did a good job on it *gladly accepts all the cookies* Thank you soo much for the review!
Oh my God, that Jesse is such a @$$#^(*@^%@^&@^ ^@%#^))(@&^@@$! %@$$!^!*!!((@&!!!!!!! I love how you actually make the reader hate her as much as Hermione does. Once again, kudos on the in-character-ness of Malfoy and Hermione. Brilliant! ~Bonnie
Author's Response: *laughs* I hate her as much as you lol....she\'s also one of my favourite characters in a really wierd way (it\'s tons of fun writing out her part) !! Glad you\'re liking the way it\'s going so far *winks*
Yay! Hermione finally figured out that &^$%$@#!! Jesse's evil plot. I must say, this Malfoy/Hermione is unlike any I have ever read. Fantastic! I always love stories that unusual. I mean, a cruise? That's just a one of a kind thing, dude. Excellent! Keep up the good work! ~Bonnie
Author's Response: Thanks, Bonnie! I really have no idea how the idea popped into my head! Aw, but it\'s good to know I did a good job on it, eh? =D
Very good, verrry good. That slag can't seduce Draco anymore without her perfume! I liked this chapter a whole lot, and I'm just waiting quite impatiently for the big kiss! Do hurry with that, will you? Hee-hee. ~Bonnie
Author's Response: hehe...That kiss everyone\'s been waiting for *drum roll* lol...I\'ll have to make a spectacular scene so that no one gets disappointed! *whew* That\'s gunna be reallly hard!
Really good. Please update soon! I loved this chapter, and I think it's my favorite chapter so far. Keep up the good work and stay humble. ~Bonnie
Author's Response: Ooo thanks! *nods solemnly* I promise to keep up the good work and stay humble =D thank you sooo much for all the reviews! Seriously they mean tons and tons and tons....and tons.... *smiles*
Come on! Update! THis is a great beginning to what I'm sure will be a great story, so please update!!!!
Why did you stop? You're doing really well, and I can't wait until you update. It's really funny, but I'm pissed off as anything! Three chapters, and we're still not at the food fight? Keep up the good work! ~Bonnie
Author's Response: food fight is next. I will update in about five days when I get home off this ship.
I think that was a very nice start to your story, Gin_Drinka! I liked how you brought out so much of your characters in the first chapter. I can see what the story is going to be about from here, and that's really great. Now, before I start to blabber, I'll just read the next chapter. Once I start, I usually can't stop. Heee.
Author's Response: well thanks. again. lol
God, I feel so dumb reviewing again when all I'm going to do is type up a bunch of nonsense. But I musst say, that Sirius and the sexual harassment comment he made made me laugh out loud and I'm alone here. I loved the chapter! Wonderful how you get your point across in many parts of the story without confusing the reader. Brilliant, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thanks. I get such nice reviews from you.
Oooh, will she do it? Don't keep us hanging! Update as soon as you can!! This game is so brilliant; I'm telling my friends about it. Good chapter, keep up the good work! ~Bonnie
Author's Response: You\'ll have to wait until Chapter 3 I\'m afraid.
Oh my God, where are the reviews?? I loved this story and I thought it was really creative. The fact that there wasn't any speech in it must have made it somewhat difficult to form such a good one-shot, but that didn't seem to stop you!! Very good. Keep it up! ~Bonnie
Author's Response: My writing is often very dialogue driven, so this was somewhat of a challenge for me. I\'m glad you think I pulled it off though! :) Thanks for the nice review!