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hey! my name is anna, im 20, and i live in California. and thats pretty much it. Im as big of an HP fan as they can get and im recruiting new HP fans everywhere i go!
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Temporary by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 1600]

Summary:

Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.

RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.



~COMPLETED STORY~

I also want to add that all this support you all have given me is just fabulous. Thanks a lot. I love you guys!





Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 87548 Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 07/13/05


Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/14/05 Title: Chapter 30: Permanent

this story is amazing. you don't know how intrigued i was!! i read it in ONE sitting. 30chapters, 2 hours, and im still fazed by your ABSOLUTELY AMAZING story. u are related to jkr, i swear!! i LOVE it. I. LOVE. IT. u are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo talented. i cant stop saying how amazing this story was!!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/23/05 Title: None

hey! great chapter. but dont you think h and d are moving along too fast? just a suggestion. when are you going to update?

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/23/05 Title: None

hey! great chapter. but dont you think h and d are moving along too fast? just a suggestion. when are you going to update?

Author's Response: actually, no offense, but i think they are moving along just fine. you'll see at the end.

 

The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5422]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 154682 Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Published:
01/17/05 Updated: 05/22/06


Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/10/05 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- For a Change

by the way, i JUST started reading your fic, right after chappie #21, and i read it all in 1 sitting!! that's how hooked it kept me!! i know it's kinda late, but can u send me the extra conversation from chappie #18? thnx! my email is petersonanna92@yahoo.com. by the way, please respond 2 this!! *smiles appriciatively*

Author's Response: Wow, you read the whole thing in one sitting?? Hahaha... I should really get around to putting a sign in summary to warn future readers of the highly addictive nature of this fic. =D About the original conversation, sure, no problem! I'll get around to sending it to you right away. And since you smiled so sweetly for a response, here you are!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 09/28/06 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- Closer

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/14/05 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- For a Change

hello, sparx! u may remember me as the girl who recommended u in her bio and said you wrote like jkr! i just wanted to say again, (and i hope you respond to this) how much your story is amazing me. i really like how that little studying session came to place. that was so sweet. and you don't know how many dozens of emails i got from other readers from reading my other reviews(which you'll find if you scroll down a little) agreeing with me. i really hope you update soon, so when are you going to? (can you give me an exact date? lol) *sends kisses and bows at your feet saying she doesn't deserve the honro of reading you story*

Author's Response: Hello, mrsfelton92! Of course I remember you! *blush* How can I forget? I'm really happy that my story's getting you soooo interested and that you like it sooooo much! I was slightly apprehensive about writing the studying bit in the end, but I decided to add it in because I thought it was really sweet. And it also gives a hint about their relationship. Hahaha... Wow, really? Thanks to all those people too! Actually, I updated twelve hours ago. So now, the chapter's in queue, waiting for the mods to validate it. This process will take a few more days, and it's only after this whole process is complete will the story actually appear on the website for you guys to read. I hope that didn't sound too confusing. =D Oh no no, please don't bow at my feet! You definitely deserve to read it. Everyone does! *picks you from my feet and does a happy dance for you*

Author's Response: P.S. I'm replying to your emails now too!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 04/09/06 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- The Big Game

sparx!!!!!!!!!!!!! my dear dear DEAREST friend!!!!!! did u miss me? i certainly missed you!!!! my INTERNET STOPPED WORKING AND FOR 2 WHOLE MONTHS I DID NOT HAVE INTERNET!! i literally died! it JUST got fixed 2 day and the 1st thing i did was come and check 4 ur story. the last chapter, i ABSOLTELY

Author's Response: mrsfelton92!!!! I was wondering where you had gone to! I haven’t seen you in the longest, longest while!! I missed you, for sure!! How have you been?? Ah, your internet dies on you? You poor thing! That would explain the sudden disappearance though. But thank you so much for coming to check TUP once it got fixed. =D And yes, you absolutely…?

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 04/09/06 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- The Big Game

sparx!!!!!!!!!!!!! my dear dear DEAREST friend!!!!!! did u miss me? i certainly missed you!!!! my INTERNET STOPPED WORKING AND FOR 2 WHOLE MONTHS I DID NOT HAVE INTERNET!! i literally died! it JUST got fixed 2 day and the 1st thing i did was come and check 4 ur story. the last chapter, i ABSOLTELY

Author's Response: absolutely…?

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 04/09/06 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31- The Big Game

srry, i accidentally clicked submit. anyways, as i was saying, i absolutelyLOVED the last chapter. i loved how he said he enjoyed her kiss and the healer was quite a character. he added so much spice to the story! as for this chapter, i am srry to say i HATED it. :/ OMGOMGOMGOMG JUST KIDDDINNGGG!!!! scared u 4 a moment, didnt, i? :) no i LOVED it.....and malfoy is really starting to be the good guy. i love how he protected hermione. u know, when she was using the calming draught, and "her brown eyes widened with questions" she really reminded me of Luna. oh well.....kk i love u, i missed u, so plz respond!!

Author's Response: Haha, right, no wonder! I was wondering how come you kept stopping after the “absolutely”. But, now that I know what to say, thank you so much for liking the chapter! Haha, I thought it would be kinda cheeky to have Draco admit that he enjoyed the kiss. Healer King was a sudden idea from the top of my head that I thought would be a good addition. Glad to see he became so popular! LOL, yes, you did scare me for a moment! I was, “Oh no, was it really that bad???” Haha… I guess Malfoy, regardless of how reluctant he may be to admit it, may have a good guy conscious in him somewhere? Or maybe not… She reminded you of Luna? Really? Actually, now that you mention it, yeah, she does somewhat seem like Luna, doesn’t she? Anyways, thanks for leaving a review dear. Love you too, missed you too and hope to see you soon!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 12/21/05 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- The Four Cloves

ooooooooohhhh as hot as malfoy is, i really hate him for what he did to poor viktor. excellent chappie, luved it, as usual. srry i don't have and critisisim lol ;) but ya i hope u enjoy ur holidays and keep on writing!!

Author's Response: I agree with you, Draco was an idiot, wasn't he? It's not like Viktor did anything to him. But I guess sometimes certain situations just drive you to do the unthinkable. =D No criticism this chapter? No problem will be looking forward to some in the next. ;) You enjoy your holidays too, mrsfelton92! I'll see you soon!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 01/31/06 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Hermione’s Decision

hah!! sooooo.......thought you werent going to get a review from me, huh? well for your information, my dear dear sparx, i am GROUNDED. yes, grounded. sweet little old me.......grounded for spending apparantly TOO much time on the computer! the nerve. oh well. how am i on the computer, you ask? yes well i "have hw" and im "reasearching" *cough cough* im sorry! my parents just couldn't keep me away from you and your stories! So yes, 2 weeks so far i have been grounded. and i ve got 3 weeks to go!! yes i know, harsh. ok back to the story sorry when i get off topic ill just start alking and talking and talking and talking and well........you get my point. now to my wonderful review! *clears throat* this chapter was progressive, and i dont care if it wasnt eventful! i still loved it! *pouts* lol jk hmmm.....who would steal and rip out the pages in that book? lucius maybe? oh i dont know...you come up with something! wow that should be like a class instead of math called like "how sparx comes up with her ideas" lol jk omg u know what i say? i say "j to the k like you just don't care!" lololol ya i know im HILARIOUS lol jk so yes loved the chapter, and u know, i never got the email from you. maybe u sent it to the wrong person? actually you dont even have to....b/c i realize what u meant and looking back on it, i was a little over the top. what can i say im a GIRL we all go over the top once in a while lol OK SOO um yes respond please!!! much love Anna

Author's Response: Mrsfelton92!! Hi!! I was just wondering where you were, and wondering if you were going to leave a review this time round. Oh dear, I had no idea you were grounded! That must suck! And yet, you took the risk to come check out my story?? That's so sweet of you! *hugs* Ah, the old "I have homework" and "I need to research" trick. Works everytime!! Heehee... I just hope your parents don't decide to come check up on your "research". =D Don't worry, I;m sure these 3 weeks will pass in a jiffy! K, on with the response. Hmmm, I would consider this chapter eventful yet uneventful (wow, don't I sound so philosophical??). I guess it's mainly 'cos there are a number of important things going on that will lead to important events, yet there isn't one big, major event that's going on. Am I making sense at all? Anyways, I'm glad you thought the chapter was progressive! That's saying quite a lot. LOL, a class about "where does sparx come up with her ideas"?? Honestly, the class would be pretty short because sparx isn't very sure about it herself! My brain just overworks and creates nonsense like this once in a while. Heehee... Oh, you never got that email from me?? I sent it to you a while back, but when you never replied, I assumed that you didn't get a chance to check your email account. Oh no, I think I may indeed have sent it to the wrong person. Some poor person probably read that email and wondered what the hell was going on. But if you think you don't need one, then I won't attempt sending one again. I don't think you were over the top. And maybe you're right-- I am a girl too, so I admit, we do get a little over the top at times! =D Anyways, take care and hang in there for another 3 weeks. It'll be over soon!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 12/07/05 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Valentine’s Day

hello again! its anna. but yes the chapter was very well done. the thing about draco/hermione romance fics is that they are very difficult to write. bringing 2 enemies together is no easy task. it takes time. i really dont see malfoy and hermione cuddling up together in front of the fireplace and kissing in public and all that sort, so i like to see stories that are IC and take some time to develop. now im going to do something i have never done before. i am going to make some....er.......... suggestions. i felt as if draco was moving a bit too fast on the kissing scene, like i said, it takes time. and i really dont see Luna and Harry together!! she is not such a main character and i dont think harry would like her. i felt horrible for ginny!! it reminded me of a position i was in some time ago :( but overall i felt u could do better and that the chapter was rushed. Dont rush your chapters b/c your fans are waiting, take a longer time and really put your heart into it! im sure we would rather wait 2 more days and read an excellent chapter than see a chapter completely rushed and not thought through. i hope u dont hate me now for my criticism! much love always....(please respond) *showers with kisses pleading your forgiveness for critisizing you*

Author's Response:

Hey anna! Thank you. I agree, it's not easy to bring them together, so here I am, trying to do so. So hopefully, my characters will remain IC and the plot will move at a suitable pace.

Oh, about the almost kissing scene, don't worry too much about it! I needed to have that scene to set the stage for another scene. Plus, I will explain later on why Draco nearly did what he did. And you have to remember that Draco himself was puzzling over the fact why he very nearly kissed her. You seem to be a bit upset with that, but don't be! They're not going to get together anytime soon. It's just one of those instances that serves a greater purpose for the progress of their relationship.

Don't worry about Harry and Luna! I just had them go out together for a little fun. They're really not going to get together! I'll give you a little hint about why I did this. What's more important in that scene is a certain redhead's reaction (and I'm not talking about Ron).

Hmmm... So you felt the chapter was rushed. I see... I actually wrote this particular chapter a pretty long time ago. Most of the scenes occured to me when I was doing the most random things, so I had it planned out a while back. After my exams, I just came back to do a bit of touch up. But if you feel it's rushed, I promise I'll work on the others better! And I appreciate that fact that you guys would prefer an excellent chapter rather than a rushed one. Means a lot!

Don't worry, I do not hate you for your criticism! I'm glad you brought up those points. I'll know what to look out for when I start with the next couple of chapters then. Don't ever worry about the criticism. It only serves to make me write better and I do appreciate it! =D And you're forgiven, even though there wasn't a need for forgiveness in the first place because I really don't mind what you said and I don't hate you! Thank you for this review and the shower of kisses!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/14/07 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

OH.
MY.
GOD.
sparx im sooooo sorry for not responding to your last couple of chapters because i just logged in again now you see? i read your last 4 chapters plus this one and....
WOW.
poor hermione!

stupid pansy. -_-
you deserve the best author in the world award lol.
but i bet the thing that happened is mr. malfoy coming back.

awwww poor hermione!!! right after she hurts ron and harry by saying she likes him, her heart gets crushed!!

cant wait for the next chappie! love ya! (hope u love me too, even though ive been for like, forever!!)

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/20/05 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Double Date

no no no no no no no no no no no!!!! i ABSLOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT TILL DECEMBER BECAUSE THE ONLY TIME ILL BE ABLE TO READ YOUR STORY IS UNTIL AFTER JANUARY!! ARGH!!! by the way, great chapter. i really like your writing style and i really HATE simone. shes stealing my husband!!! i hope draco dumps her! ahh, lucky hermione. i mean, imagine sleeping next to the slytherin sex god! i mean WOW! omg i luv draco malfoy, as u can see in my name. but dont worry, im a grffindor. but who says you cant "get to know the enemy?" *winks*

Author's Response: Oh no! How come you're only going to be able to read it after January?? Why, thank you very much. Lol, so Simone’s stealing your husband, eh? What about if Hermione steals him instead? Will you mind as much? =D I'm sure you’d love a chance just to be in the same room as Mr. Draco Malfoy, wouldn't you? You're an ardent fan, and yes, I did realize that reading your name! and oh yes, I'm totally in favor of getting to know the enemy, especially when the enemy’s a certain blonde…

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 01/17/06 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- The Aftereffects of Alcohol

hello again sparx! after reading your response, i realized what a complete dope i am......DUH!!!! THIS IS BEFORE THE 6TH BOOK!!!! OR ELSE THE STORY WOULDN'T EVEN BE HERE!!!! MALFOY WOULDNT BE HERE!!! wooh *wipes forehead* after getting that out of my system and reminding myself the obvious, i can now get back to my hw. no seriously. im doing homework im just......*searches for right word* multitasking!!! ya that's it. lol good luck with your next chapter!!

Author's Response: Hello again anna! Nah, you're not a complete dope. You just forgot that I didn’t consider the sixth book in this story because I started writing a long time before the sixth book came out. So it’s not your fault! Hahah… All the best for your homework. Hope it isn’t stressing you up too much. =D Thanks for the well-wishes!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 05/23/06 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32- Closer

SPARX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my dear dear DEAR sparx!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh, how ive missed you! and your story!!!!!!!!!! well, i guess what i should say is................i HATE THE MODS!!!! arghh! oh well im over it lol so yes.....the chappie......wonderfully little pretty chappie......k so one thing im kind og shocked by. the title of the chapter is "closer", is it not? then y was draco soooooooooooooooooooooooo utterly rude to hermione??? ahh, i guess he was embarassed.....and hermione.....she was a little out of character too......but i mean....she was still on the calming draught, wasn't she? yes yes yes yes YES. so. hmmmmmmmmmm........do have an approximate idea of wen this story is going to end? (NOT THAT I WANT IT TO!! OH NO SIREE!!!) k well, g2g, i loooooooooooove u sparxy!!!
bye!!
love, Anna aka tom felton's secret lover

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/16/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- More Rumors

dear sparx,
i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo truly sorry for not replying sooner. you see, my parents had seen my not too amazing grades, and banned me from the computer for like 6 FRICKIN MONTHS!!!!!!!! to day is the first time ive been back on since like..........may. wow its so sad isnt it? i missed u and the unseemly proposal like HELL!!!! so i was a little shocked to see only one chapter had been added......please dont tell me youre leaving us!!!! anyway yea, with this chapter......i really really did like it, i liked how there are just these little perks and little flirty lovey things they say to each other and do to each other (hermione cleaning draco;s wound--so sweet!) that they might not see as progessive or significant, but i certainly do!! i can't believe the progress you have made and I am so happy do be one of your loyal and loving fans. sparx my dearest i love you (even though i don't know you lol) and i want you to know that even though i was gone for a while, i still support and love this story 100%!!!! keep writing, and please respond, ive missed u

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 02/18/08 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

SPARX!!!!!!!!!!

i dnt kno if u remember me (u might have forgotten!) but its MRSFELTON92!!!! ur DEARESSTTT fan and boy have i missed u. i now truly understand the whole "piling homework" thing. I LOVE YOU SPARX!!! and i absolutely must know what happened! we all miss you A LOT and cant wait! we support you and love you sparx!

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/16/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- More Rumors

dear sparx,
i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo truly sorry for not replying sooner. you see, my parents had seen my not too amazing grades, and banned me from the computer for like 6 FRICKIN MONTHS!!!!!!!! to day is the first time ive been back on since like..........may. wow its so sad isnt it? i missed u and the unseemly proposal like HELL!!!! so i was a little shocked to see only one chapter had been added......please dont tell me youre leaving us!!!! anyway yea, with this chapter......i really really did like it, i liked how there are just these little perks and little flirty lovey things they say to each other and do to each other (hermione cleaning draco;s wound--so sweet!) that they might not see as progessive or significant, but i certainly do!! i can't believe the progress you have made and I am so happy do be one of your loyal and loving fans. sparx my dearest i love you (even though i don't know you lol) and i want you to know that even though i was gone for a while, i still support and love this story 100%!!!! keep writing, and please respond, ive missed u

Author's Response: Hey mrsfelton92! You\'ve always stuck around and I\'m uber grateful for that. Thank you so much for your wonderful words. You know I\'ll always appreciate your comments. And thank Marco for me too. =D

 
Reviewer: mrsfelton92 Signed
Date: 11/16/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- More Rumors

OMG MY REVIEW GOT CUTT OFF IT TOOK ME LIKE AN HOUR TO WRITE IM SO PISSED!!!!! kk what was i saying? o yea and GUESS WHAT!!!!!! i got my boyfriend marco into harry potter too!!!! he had never read it or anything and with some persuasion (hint hint) ;) i got him into it!!!!!! he read the books and once wen he came over he saw this in my favorites thingymabobber on my labtop and asked me what it was.....i showed him, he read it, loved it, and yay for us!! ill be letting u know his opinions once in a while lol......arent i a good and true and loyal harry poter fan? trying to make the world more harry-potter-friendly lol anywayz got to go i LOVE u keep on writing!!!!!!!!!


love always
anna (and marco!!!!)

 
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