Really well written. Very consistant and true characterizations, I thought. Nice moment at the end when Ron & Hermione kiss and I really liked Harry enjoying the ball unexpectedly.
Very different changing the POVs like that. It worked for the most part, though I think there should have been a bit more when they were kissing. I really liked Ron defending Hermione against Malfoy, and Dumbledore's character was very right. Good characterizations throughout, actually. At times the switches from one POV to another was a bit too fast and was distracting, other than that it worked well.
Really liked this. Very sweet and in character for the most part, though them calling each other by their last names I'd not heard before and I found that distracting. Other than that, it was very sweet and fun. I also liked that they made the snowman like Harry. Could have included a bit more on the kissing part.
Writing something that really is funny is no easy trick, but you've accomplished it. I really laughed out loud. Very funny and very in character for Fred & George. Including a bit more about Ron and Hermione snogging in the closet would have been good, too.
Well done. Good characterizations, though I hated that Ron heard what Dumbledore said! But very consistant and true characters and good descriptions of their kissing, which is hard to do. Nicely done.
This was cute. I really liked bringing Fred and George into the picture. And yeah, I can see Ron saying "she's mine," like you him blurt it out. But would he have said the rest of it so quickly like that? Or would he have hesitated more? Not sure. But yeah, I can see Fred & George doing that. The ending part could have lasted longer and including the kiss between R & H would have been nicer. The ending was a bit abrupt, but I liked the story overall.
While I enjoyed the kissing bit, I think it was really out of character for Hermione to go up to Ron's dorm room. I don't think she'd ever do that. Also, I don't think she do that with Harry right there in the room. I liked that you included a lot of kissing for them. Would she bite his neak, though? That seemed out of character to me, too. Bet Ron would've liked it, though.
I have saved this in my favorites. Really romantic and well done. Great characterizations that were consistant throughout. I loved how he was jealous of Viktor and also that you made Viktor not the great guy that he is in many other fics I've read. I was completely hooked! Great read!
Really nicely done. My biggest pet peeve with HP fiction is staying in character, and most writers seem to have the hardest time with Ron in this regard. But I could hear his voice all through this piece. The characterizations were very well done and nice touch on having Snape as Ghost of Christmas Present! Also, I loved that Ron had bought her a ring and then decided not to give it to her. Very sweet. This is one of the best fanfics I've come across. Thanks for the great read!
Very cute with a nice ending. I haven't read another fic that ties the "leviosa" back in and I really enjoyed that. Would have liked to hear a bit more from Hermione regarding her feelings, but I liked how you had Ron telling her first.
It is hard to find good Ron & Hermione fan fic that follows the books and is consistent with characterizations. But you have done that here! Very good flow and I very much want to read more! Very well done! I hope you add the rest soon!