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Summary: Another Christmas Ball. Ron gets it right this time with a hint of H/G.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2817 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/07/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1/1

Really well written. Very consistant and true characterizations, I thought. Nice moment at the end when Ron & Hermione kiss and I really liked Harry enjoying the ball unexpectedly.

 

What Are We Waiting For? by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 43]

Summary: Malfoy attacks Hermione, so Ron steps in to rescue her.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2106 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 11/08/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: What Are We Waiting For?

Very different changing the POVs like that. It worked for the most part, though I think there should have been a bit more when they were kissing. I really liked Ron defending Hermione against Malfoy, and Dumbledore's character was very right. Good characterizations throughout, actually. At times the switches from one POV to another was a bit too fast and was distracting, other than that it worked well.

 

Snow by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: Ron and Hermione enjoy a snowy day at Hogwarts.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1025 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 11/08/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Snow

Really liked this. Very sweet and in character for the most part, though them calling each other by their last names I'd not heard before and I found that distracting. Other than that, it was very sweet and fun. I also liked that they made the snowman like Harry. Could have included a bit more on the kissing part.

 

Mission Accomplished by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 61]

Summary: When Fred and George decide to help ickle Ronniekins get a girl, much chaos and hilarity ensues.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1739 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 11/08/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Mission Accomplished

Writing something that really is funny is no easy trick, but you've accomplished it. I really laughed out loud. Very funny and very in character for Fred & George. Including a bit more about Ron and Hermione snogging in the closet would have been good, too.

 

Defining a Hero by Deia
Rated: [Reviews - 26]

Summary: Ron overhears a conversation and Hermione helps him deal with it.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1767 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/10/04 Updated: 11/10/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: Defining a Hero

Well done. Good characterizations, though I hated that Ron heard what Dumbledore said! But very consistant and true characters and good descriptions of their kissing, which is hard to do. Nicely done.

 

Summary: Ron is so obviously in love with Hermione. But they'll NEVER get together at the rate that he's confessing his love. Fred and George decide to speed the process along a bit...one-shot ficlet.


Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 793 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/12/04 Updated: 11/12/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: A Shove in the Right Direction

This was cute. I really liked bringing Fred and George into the picture. And yeah, I can see Ron saying "she's mine," like you him blurt it out. But would he have said the rest of it so quickly like that? Or would he have hesitated more? Not sure. But yeah, I can see Fred & George doing that. The ending part could have lasted longer and including the kiss between R & H would have been nicer. The ending was a bit abrupt, but I liked the story overall.

 

Summary: Hermione decides to stop being such an old fuddy-duddy! Love ensues!


a/n: a little OOC hermione, but nothing that she won't soon grow into... >:) also, described as "almighty fluffiness" by the kind-enough-to-review Ella Norman!
a/n2: this story has had over a thousand reads, and only 13 reviews! c'mon people! do you love it? do you hate it? please please gimme some feedback! just let me know!

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2139 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/14/04 Updated: 11/14/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/09/05 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

While I enjoyed the kissing bit, I think it was really out of character for Hermione to go up to Ron's dorm room. I don't think she'd ever do that. Also, I don't think she do that with Harry right there in the room. I liked that you included a lot of kissing for them. Would she bite his neak, though? That seemed out of character to me, too. Bet Ron would've liked it, though.

 

Hopes, Lies, and Discoveries by JoWannabe
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 85]

Summary: Begins at King's Cross and continues at the Burrow the summer after 5th year. Ron confronts Hermione about Viktor Krum and learns a few things. A little fluff, a little angst, a little Fred and George...

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 9212 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/17/04 Updated: 11/25/04


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 6: Apologies and Explanations

I have saved this in my favorites. Really romantic and well done. Great characterizations that were consistant throughout. I loved how he was jealous of Viktor and also that you made Viktor not the great guy that he is in many other fics I've read. I was completely hooked! Great read!

 

Ronald Ebenezer Scrooge Weasley by JoWannabe
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 58]

Summary: On Christmas Eve, Ron is shown the error of his ways by four ghosts. Will he learn his lesson before it is too late?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5053 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/21/04 Updated: 01/04/05


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: A Warning

Really nicely done. My biggest pet peeve with HP fiction is staying in character, and most writers seem to have the hardest time with Ron in this regard. But I could hear his voice all through this piece. The characterizations were very well done and nice touch on having Snape as Ghost of Christmas Present! Also, I loved that Ron had bought her a ring and then decided not to give it to her. Very sweet. This is one of the best fanfics I've come across. Thanks for the great read!

 

Finally by The Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 60]

Summary: It had taken a troll to bring Ron and Hermione together as friends in their first year…now as sixth years, what was it going to take to bring them together as lovers?!


CH 3 IS 'FINALLY' UP (get it? finally...sry couldnt resist...)


Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2192 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/28/04 Updated: 01/02/05


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 11/08/05 Title: Chapter 2: Hiding

Very cute with a nice ending. I haven't read another fic that ties the "leviosa" back in and I really enjoyed that. Would have liked to hear a bit more from Hermione regarding her feelings, but I liked how you had Ron telling her first.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: PigWithHair Signed
Date: 12/07/05 Title: None

It is hard to find good Ron & Hermione fan fic that follows the books and is consistent with characterizations. But you have done that here! Very good flow and I very much want to read more! Very well done! I hope you add the rest soon!

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