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Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 06/02/06 Title: None

i love both these stories, i'm actually glad in a way you didn't give harry back his powers, it would have made the story less realistic or something i thought it was a brilliant idea

 

The Moon Divides by Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 133]

Summary: COMPLETE!

(AU Fic) Two twins named Remus and Rachael Lupin have been inseperable for the eight years they've been on this Earth. But one fateful trip into the forest has changed all of that.

Excerpt from Chapter Twenty Three - A Second Chance

Professor Lupin walked over and sat down at the foot of his daughter’s bed.

“How are you?” he asked, watching his daughter carefully.

“Fine,” she answered, although she could have been better.

“How could you-,”

“Please dad,” Rachael cut him off. “Sirius already gave me the ‘how could you’ lecture.” Professor Lupin smiled.

“Did he now?”

“Yes and he got through to me pretty well.”

“Good, I just hope you know never to do something like that again.”

“I’m not going to, Mum’s not worth it.” Professor Lupin clicked his tongue.

“You can’t say that,” he said quietly, getting up and heading for the door. “Everyone deserves a chance to change. Just as you tried to prove that to your mother, one day she’s going to prove it to you. Everyone deserves a second chance.”


*Warning, some mental abuse and later a little physical, nothing terribly bad, just a warning*

Nominated for 2006, 2008, 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Dark/Angsty Fic

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Self Injury, Violence

Word count: 126939 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 09/02/06


Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 06/28/06 Title: Chapter 22: Friends 'Til The End

omg, i can't believe that racheal's actually planning to become a werewolf on purpose

i loved this chapter, i'm glad that remus and james are finally friends again. the laughing potion was really funny,

update soon plz!!!!

thanks for a great chapter :-)

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 07/06/06 Title: Chapter 25: Abuse of a Different Kind

wow, i knew racheal's mum was horrible but i didn't think she was going to be that bad. anyway geat chapter, i've been checking to see if its validated for ages. :-)


Author's Response: Yeah she\'s worse the horrible... we should all throw rocks at her.

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 07/17/06 Title: Chapter 27: What to Say?

nice chapter. i like racheal's relationship with her father the arguments between them seem realistic. can't wait for them to validate the next chapter

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 06/29/06 Title: Chapter 23: A Second Chance

is racheals mum going to stop being so horrible,
i love the sirius/racheal friendship and i really hope they go out. they both hate their mums so i guess they're alike.
cool chapter again, you update really fast
:-)

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 28: A Farewell to Home

gud chapter, can't wait 4 da nxt one 2 b validatd,

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 07/16/06 Title: Chapter 26: There's No Bright Side

another great chapter, is their father actually going to leave, its interesting the way you show the family falling apart i'm still hoping for a racheal/sirius romance, can't wait till they validate the next chapter

Author's Response: Yep he\'s really going to leave, but he\'ll still be around for the next chapter, and a bit of the one after, so he\'s not gone yet.

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 06/30/06 Title: Chapter 24: A Chance to Explain

i really like the way you're telling the story, its so good and the characters are very interesting,
you update so fast, its really great.

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 06/24/06 Title: Chapter 21: A Punch for an Insult

i read your story over the last few days, i love it, alot of the stories in the marauder time just cover james and lily but giving remus a twin sister is a really cool idea.

is there a sirius/racheal thing going on? i really like that idea,

anyway, great story and i can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review. You\'re right with a lot of the Marauder stories just covering Lily and James, but there are some good stories about Remus out there. And as for the Sirius/Rachael thing, well you\'ll find out about that eventually.

 

I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1038]

Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66757 Chapters: 56 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 09/27/11


Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 11/05/05 Title: Chapter 45: Flirting With Danger

great chapter as always please keep it going

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 11/28/05 Title: Chapter 45: Flirting With Danger

wonderful story. ppppppppllllllllleeeeasssssssseeeeeee update if you can, its my favoutie james/lily fanfic and i can't wait to read more. best of luck and thanks for it soooo much

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 12/29/05 Title: Chapter 46: Fleeing the Tree

yay, my favourite story's back. worth the wait. maybe taking a break will do the story good in the long run, get you fresh ideas or stuff or something. anyway brilliant chapters. can't wait to see what happens next. good luck with your story

 

Lacrima Serpentis by Insecurity
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 311]

Summary: This story is set in the dystopian society of Wizarding England under the control of Voldemort. Fifteen years after leaving Hogwarts, Harry Potter is in hiding; he fears the words of the Prophecy and has lost the will to fight. This story tells the tale of an adult Hermione who sacrifices everything: her family, her moral beliefs and eventually her dignity, in order to save the Wizarding world. She becomes a Death Eater under the recommendation of someone she barely trusts. She struggles to find the courage and strength, but with every choice she makes she gets deeper and deeper into danger.




Chapter 33 is finally up. Thank you for your support and patience..

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 117014 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/27/04 Updated: 09/08/06


Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 06/21/06 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

i really liked this chapter, i've been hoping you'd have a chapter like this about snape since the start, i wanted to find out what you were going to show him as. i thought it was really good the way you did it, but i hope we'll see more of him before the end of the story and hermione doesn't give up on him.

can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. It\'s a chapter I\'ve had planned for over six months now and when it came to actually writing it I found it very tough. I knew that I wasn\'t going to portray him as \'the good guy in the end\' but I also didn\'t want to put him on the same par as some of the other, more evil, characters. So, I am glad you liked it. Update will be soon.

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 04/02/06 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

i saw your note, please update soon if you can i can't wait to read what happens next, how many more chapters are you planning?

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying my best to. I put the next chap in queue but taht means it may be a week, if it gets accepted, until it's up. Chapter 33 is going well, though. And I think it's about 40 chapters... I may try and end on 40 so as to have it a nice, round number.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying my best to. I put the next chap in queue but taht means it may be a week, if it gets accepted, until it's up. Chapter 33 is going well, though. And I think it's about 40 chapters... I may try and end on 40 so as to have it a nice, round number.

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 01/22/06 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

yet another brilliant chapter. i love this story so much. i really like that you update so fast usually even inside a week. if stories aren't updated for about a month i begin to forget the plot and give up on the story but you keep it up really well. roughly how many more chapters do you think you'll have. Hermione's plan is brilliant i really like the idea that the death eaters will help to defeat voldemort and him being defeated from the inside. i really hope hermione does have her baby. it would be so sad if she didn't. she seems to have given up so much that she deserves the baby. thanks so much for your wonderful story

Author's Response: Thank you! It is difficult to get them written, editted and through the queue in a week and so I hope people don't mind when it verges on a fortnight. I am looking at 8 more chapters-ish. I know roughly what happens in each and could tell you the last sentence of the story (not that I will!)

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 01/22/06 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

forgot to say 10/10

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Yay, Hermione's plan's going to work. That is so cool the way the thing works. by the way this story is one of only three in my favorites. i really like it and i check for the next chapter almost every day. Thanks.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I try to update weekly but sometimes those annoying things called A levels get in the way and other times I'm just plain lazy. I'm trying not to make the plan look too easy because Hermione does have her work cut out.. but at the same time the story needs to carry on moving. I've written 1,000 words of the next chapter so it won't be too long. Laura xxx

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

i'm reviewing again to wish you best of luck in your exams which you said a few weeks ago started soon, my junior cert( irish gsces started today) so i just wanted to wish you best of luck especially in english

Author's Response: EXAMS ARE DONE! Thank you so much for your understanding and patience with them. English went fine. Good luck with the GCSE\'s - they can be a nightmare because there are just so darn many of them. *giggles*

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

wow, great chapter, i can't wait for the next one, i'm glad hermione wasn't left locked in the room for the whole battle, she put so much into making the battle happen at all she i think anyone would have wanted to. can't wait for the final chapter even though i won't be able to read the story anymore, great chapter

Author's Response: It\'s sad when things come to an end *sobs* I had to stop myself from writing it and tell myself that it had come to an end, and to stop hanging bits onto it. It\'s hard to finish a project that\'s been on-going for two years. Thank you for all the kind reviews. And of course I wouldn\'t leave Hermione just sat there in a hotelroom... hehe!

 
Reviewer: cenedra Signed
Date: 01/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hi, i'm new to your story but its sooooo good, i read the whole thing in a couple of days and now i can't wait for your next chapter. maybe i should go back and review all the other chapters!? the only thing about your story is that i'm not really a hermione/snape shipper but its really good and well-written. even if you don't ship them its definateley a good read. anyway thats sort of just me. hope you update again soon, can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response: Arwwww thank you very much! To read it through in a couple of days takes some stamina, and I hope your enjoying it and that I don't let you down with the final events. I understand that quite a few of my readers aren't HG/SS... in fact, neither was I when I began writing this. It just happened the way it did - they kind of take over the plot themselves and insist on being written certain ways. I found it increasingly difficult to have them both in such an intimate environment, with her quite insecure and him the manipulator, without taking their relationship to that next level. So one day I just gritted my teeth and did it. I hate romance, usually, and so I try to keep any lovey doveyness well out of the way. Feel free to review other chapters, but I won't force you to. I tend to just review whenever and wherever myself. Laura xxx

 
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