Welcome to my little bit of this great site :D
Here's some really random facts about me -
I am called Rachel
I am 16
I really can't spell
I am a Ranger (older Guides)
I hate prejudism
I go to Stage Coach Preforming Arts Academy every Saturday
Im in year 11
My favourite colour is blue
I love Monty Python
I love Old School comedy
I like all musicals
I did a random test and i am 90% Hermione
That's about it! I only ask one more thing from you - please please please review!
You all rock!!
it really really enjoyed your story but i noticed that you have quite a lot of gramatical and spelling mistakes - not that I am one to talk because my wrting is full of them! If you, like me, find them difficuilt to correct - go on the forums and grab a beta (he or she will correct your work for you). Apart from that really good story!
your writing has really improved, the story is developing really well :D
it was really great :D at first i thought the idea was a bit strange but it was pulled of really well! Well done for being brave enough to try something like this - it really worked!
one word! WOW i'm loving this story :-D keep writing!
so funny - go you! :D enough to bring a smile to anyones face - dudley singing barbie doll - class! :-D
woah!! thats on freaky chapter! *shiver* 10/10! of the whole story though! its really good - when i first found out that Harry was evil i thought that this story might be really bad like others i have read but its not - its great!! keep updating - please! :-D
wow - i really love your story - a seventh year fic and a half :D i must admit i was unsure about harry going back to hogwarts but you have worked it in really well - ive seen so many other seventh year fics where harry goes back to hogwarts as if nothing happens but yours still had the feel of how difficuilt it is for harry - i like that! Even though it is not to do with the plot i would really like to see Tonks teach a lesson - would be very fun :D
any ways - keep writing
Author's Response: Lol, thank you very much. Yes, I felt Harry sould go back to school one final time, but as you must have read in Ch. 9, he's beginning to have doubts... As for Tonks teaching a lesson - well, I'm just not good at writing humour. ;) Thanks for your review.
please please please keep on wrting i really enjoyed this story!! Please please please i love it!!!
Author's Response: I'm thinking about it. Thanks.
it was a great chapter / story so far! I love Harry - he seems calm and collected but every now and again she sparks - just like JK Rowlings Harry! Just like most of your reviewers - i really like Percy and it is an interesting side of his character which works realy well! The only two tips i would give you is -
1) sometimes your story gets confusing when there is a break of scenes (i.e when one scene switches to another. To make it more clear, you could use three or four * inbetween the paragraphs or leave an extra space - this gives time for readers like me (not much common sense) to digest what we have just read and move on to the next section! (sorry if that was mean)
2) UPDATE :-P
Lots of love Rachel
Author's Response: My beta keeps on to me about changing scenes better but I'm still resisting her.
wow! please update! this story is great and i can't wait for it to be updated! wow!
Author's Response: thanks a bunch! chapter 5 will be sent to my beta by the end of the week, since i don't have anything else to do.(yay vacation week) I luv your penname, by the way. and yes, that was random. sorry.
wow - really good story - i remember i read about up to chapter 8 or 9 but couldn't find the fic again - and i ve just found it again - im so happy :D its a really good story! keep it up!
that was really cute! cant wait for the next chapter - Ellies preggers hehe!
heylo - i love your stories - you seem to mange to keep everyone on the edge of their seets - you can make people luagh cry and feel all sorts of Emotions! you are flippin brilliant - tell me what is your secret? update soon im dieing to find out what happens!
Author's Response: It's terrific that you've enjoyed the storied so much. I wish i could tell you my secret but i'm not sure what it is yet. It's probably something along the lines of read a lot. That's the best advice that i can give.
another great chapter of a great story - cant wait to see what happens! it would be so cool is Ginny and Harry (when married) lived in Potter Manor!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Harry and Ginny married and living in Potter Hall, that's an awful lot to ask. I can't guarantee that you'll get it all but i'll see what i can do.
aww! such a happy chapter! :D
your a great writer - keep it up and update soon!
Author's Response: And you are a great reader! The next chapter is in the queue and just waiting for a mod's attention. It'll be here soon!
WOW another great chapter- the jobs the peopel are going to go into fit their characters perfectly! can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: As i've said in previous responses, the careers are going to change slightly but not hugely.
yet another really really great chapter - the only thing i can find wrong with it is that you should update more often to keep impatient fans (like me) happy :P
Author's Response: I'm updating as quickly as humanly possible. The only delay is the queue and that's being pretty well manned at the minute. So hopefully updates should come quickly, even quickly enough to keep someone like yourself happy!
hello! another great chapter - i cant wait until the next chapter - keep writing you are great :D
Author's Response: I'll submit the next chapter in just a minute or two.
WOW! the trio all grown up! :D another great chapter! glad Remus is ok and i loved the Malfoy stand off!!
A** 20/10 :-P
Author's Response: I know, it's so sweet. It had to happen sometime and this seemed as good a time as any. 20/10, wow, that's an impressive mark, even if i do say so myself.
Another great chapter - you wrote that with such ease and pulled it off remarkably well done! I canít believe you update every single day - good on you! What can I say - 10/10 (again) triple thumbs up!