A Rivalry Like No Other by halfbloodprincess22
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Malfoy reveals to Harry another side of his otherwise hostile personality. This story's about tension between Harry and Malfoy, kind of similar to tension between any rivals, if you think about it. PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! COME ON GUYS!! OVER 100 READS AND ONLY 5 REVIEWS? PLEASE REVIEW!!
Very interesting start. The dialogue and action are both very clear. I look foward to reading the rest of it.
Author's Response: it's a 1-shot, so its finished, but definitely check out my other stories! thanx
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Very well written so far. It is good to read the start of a story that has some life of its own outside of Rowling's novels. Keep up the good work, I look foward to reading the rest.
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Great story so far. I think the paragraphs were really well organised and the dialogue was entertaining. Keep writing, this looks like it will be a refreshing addition to the fanfics on this site.
Author's Response: Thanks :] It makes me happy to know that people like my story and review and such. Hehe. ♥
