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Summary: Past Featured StoryHope, loyalty, love, despair, and tragedy. Through it all, Lily discovers the truth about the Marauders, the affable troublemakers who hide behind smokescreens but still glitter in shattered light. They aren't the glorious, graceful men they are often perceived as, but stumbling, awkward boys who are still trying to find their way out of darkness.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3885 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
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04/21/05 Updated: 04/21/05


Reviewer: desertfox Signed
Date: 10/27/05 Title: Chapter 1: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

This is the first story I read here in mugglenet. I read it when it was still on the featured list. Your story inspiried me to wrote mine, though I doubt would be as good as this one. I saw all the reviews people wrote, and they all love it and appearently it also brought many people to tears. Why? because you captured the soul of each character. It is not something I found very often in most stories I have read. When I read your story, the characters seemed to float out of the screen and into my mind. I can feel how Lily felt( I am a man so it is a bit creepy :/). All the characters in your story all seemed, how should I describe it, alive. I can feel them. It is not something just anybody can do. Well done, unbelieveably well done.

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