Hey hey! Somehow you've stumbled across this bio... *spooky music*. Well... about me:
I did read a lot of James/Lily fics, but recently I've been overcome by the amount of ientical storylines and cliches and so I have oficially converted to Draco/Hermione. Other than romance, I read anything on the recent additions list that sounds interesting, or anything people suggest in the forums as a good fic. Things that make me laugh tend to wind up on my favourites list; however the fics in the Humor section always seemed to me to be full of weak jokes so I don't go there if I can help it.
I enjoy playing the Harry Potter computer games, though once you've played the first one, you've really played them all.
I never really liked Sirius and Remus until I read some of the fictions on this website, and Gilderoy Lockhart was my all time favourite DADA teacher (he made me laugh a lot).
My two favourite characters are Draco and Luna, though if I had to pick from the Dream Team, I guess I'd say Hermione. Ron has the emotional range of a teaspoon, and I don't associate with teaspoons. I know almost the entire population of people that have read the Harry Potter books will hate me for this but... I don't like the Weasley family! And I don't like the 3rd or 6th book! The 1st and 4th books are my favourite.
Not a cliffhanger! I want to know what happens next *pouty expression and whiny voice* I'm worried that Draco is a bit OC, make him be mean to a few more people and it should be fine... I'm a bit confused at why Narcissa didn't curse Hermione to bits for being a mudb- I mean muggle-born, aren't the Malfoys extremely sadistic and pretencious Muggle-Haters? I love it when Hermione rubs Harry's and Ron's noses in it, they really undervalue her times and it's really funny to see her get her own back on them. Update soon! 10/10
I agree with kikmodo; I hope Lily won't be too mad. This story is going great, it really stands out from most James/Lily fics. Put a bit more description in; there aren't many fan fictions that put in enough, and it would really put yours in the Top Five Fan Fics range.
Wow... I read that all in one go, 17 chapters in one go! I must offer my congratulations, there aren't many people who write so well I can't put my reading off for a day or two. Update soon please, we love you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!! Yaaay! And no worries, the next chapter is on its way!! Thanks for reviewing!!
That was great, I love the idea of a secret apparition point in Hogwarts. In fact, it's such a great idea, people will probably steal it, and it will become one of those cliche scenes that everyone avoids. But you are the 1st one, and it's a great idea! I would like a bit more description when people are talking. What kind of voice they're using etc. Other than that, it's great!
Author's Response: Ah! Thanky for the tip! I'll keep it in mind when I'm writing the next chapters! And I'm so happy you liked the apparition point! I was nervous about people saying, 'BUT THAT'S NOT IN THE BOOKS!! AND HOGWARTS; A HISTORY...!' you know the drill. Thanks for reviewing!! ^_^
I have a few suggestions for this story. 1. Watch your spelling and grammar. 2. Try to stay away from clichés like having the separate heads dorms and having James save Lily from Remus. 3. Develop your characters more, I would definately like to see more of their personalities, rather that lots of snogging.
Lily Evans and James Potter share absolutely nothing in common, not even their feelings for each other. Lily, perceived as a ‘model student,’ detests the handsome, popular, Quidditch star James, who she thinks to be something of a git. James, on the contrary, has been infatuated with Lily for years, and has let her and the whole school know it.
As time progresses into Voldemort’s ‘reign of terror,’ the two have to learn to trust, tolerate, and love each other.
Please note, this story is incomplete, and will likely remain so for a long time. I apologize!
They kissed, then Lily acts like such an arrogant stubborn ... I won't finish that sentence. Definite 10/10, you nearly broke my heart with that chapter. I love this story, write more soon please...
Love your story. I couldn't peel my eyes away from the computer screen all evening. Definite 10/10, write more soon!
Ooh... how romantic. That was very sweet, that chapter made me smile, yet want to cry at the same time...
Author's Response: Heehee… I thought after the rather sloppy kiss on V day, a proper romantic scene was needed. I'm glad it made you smile and want to cry at the same time (I think)…
That chapter was hilarious. It does sound very Hermione-ish to get extremely talkative. I was a little disappointed with your portrayal of Draco in this chapter... I'm not entirely sure why though... I feel so sorry for Viktor, but it all worked out in the end.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought it was Hermione-ish to get extremely talkative. Hmmm, Draco’s portrayal? Is it because of the incessant snogging with Simone? Get back to me on that one if you can. I did feel kinda sorry for Viktor as well, but I couldn't afford to keep him in the fic for too long…
Jinx is really getting on my nerves, I honestly believe that Hermione and Draco are much better together when they don't have background commentary from a tiny object that somehow seems to have its own thoughts and feeling besides the slight problem of it [i]not[/i] being alive. Hermy and Drakie-poo actually have very good dialogues and their 'oh-isn't-that-sweet' moments when that silly ring is absent. Alright, I'll stop insulting the ring, this chapter was very cute and I loved Draco's thoughts at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next, update soon oh wonderful sparx!
Author's Response: Jinx can be a pain, I admit! She’s the sort of character you can either love or hate. Heehee, I like the way you put that. But she’ll be around less and less now because I want to focus more on the main two characters now. It’s all (mostly) about them now from this point. =D I do love the way you insult the ring actually. Made me laugh out loud! I\'m glad you liked the chapter overall and I will update soon my dear LaaDeeDah! (You\'re really kind, thanks!)
That was hilarious! I felt so sorry for Viktor though, why should he get dragged into this mess? That was just classic though, and the 'competition' Draco and Hermione had going there was just the kind of thing you would expect them to do. You're a great writer, 10/10, and Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Good to hear you enjoyed it! It is a bit sad that Viktor had to be dragged into this mess I guess. But think oif it this way- If he wasn't it wouldn't have been as funny! Anyways, thank you very much for the review and you have a Merry Christmas too! =D
Great work, but I think the alcoholic bit was a little over the top... oh well. The dialogue at the Gryffindor table during lunch was expertly done, and the Slytherin table wasn't too bad either.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hmmm, I guess the alcoholic thing might seem a little over the top now, but I do have plans to use it later on, so we’ll see how it goes? Good to hear that you liked the dialogue at the Gryffindor and Slytherin table. I was hoping it’d turn out fine.
Great chapter, I can't wait to see how the Quidditch game will turn out with Hermione clinging onto Draco for dear life. I'm not sure that Draco would really be a better seeker than Malcolm Baddock while he has Hermione on the broom with him. Like a previous reviewer said; the broom would be heavier, and that must impact on the speed and difficulty of navigation. Harry and Ron reacted as I expected them to... no surprise there. Would it be asanine to hope for a big brawl between the Dream Duo and Draco? Anyway, I hope you feel better and live to write many a chapter more for this story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I guess it would be quite a match with Hermione clinging on to Draco for dear life. =D Interesting indeed. Yup, you and Eilime did point out that the broom would be heavier with two persons riding it, but I hope I can find a way to get around that problem so that it will work out all right. Hmmm, well, I won’t say it’s asinine to hope for a huge fight between the Dream Duo and Draco… In fact, it seems like a pretty good idea… *evil grin* Yup, I am feeling much better, thank you! And I do hope I live to write many more chapters as well!
“Oh yes. It has been speculated that the Love-Knot was originally created by the Roman Goddess of Love, Venus herself, the epitome of love.”
I think that you used the word 'love' too many times in that sentence, and when you used 'mommy', that is American spelling, every other country spells it 'mummy'. Other than that, that was utterly and completely sweet, and I can't wait to read more! I don't care what you have to do, get them drunk again if you want, but I want to see some D/Hr kisses soon! Love ya, write more!
Author's Response: Ah, you\'re right, I never noticed that before. I shall go change it; I think I’ll omit the last bit, “the epitome of love” bit. Oh, really? I knew “mommy” was the American way of spelling it, so thanks for bringing that to my attention. I’ll go change that too. Other than that, I\'m glad you found the chapter sweet! More to come and there’s definitely going to be kisses… don’t worry! Love ya too, will be writing more!
Right, in my review for Dear Lily, I mentioned 2 of your stories being on my favourites list. From now on, your entire works are on my favourites list! You are too talented for your own good... it just makes people want to read more... please - never ever stop writing these stories! (Especially Lily and James ones)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! You made my day. :)
An old couple passing by stared at him as if he had grown a third head Did he have two heads to begin with? That sentence scared me for a minute, I imagined Draco with two heads and sprouting a third! This chapter was excellent, I love the 'floor' dialogue Hermione and Draco had in the bookstore.
I personally thought that Hermione was a little too edgy at the Burrow. It seems so out of character for her. Other than that, it was a wonderful chapter, post the next one up soon!
As queentazo said, wouldn't it be rather hard to maintain space between a person while living in the same house? Other than that, it was great. I was really pleased with Ron, he was very in character in this chapter. The 'Fred's baby' bit was hilarious, it really set the scene for a potentially awkward conversation. Update soon, I'll be waiting!
I liked the beginning, you wrote Draco's hangover really well. I think it tailed off a bit in the study scene, but the cafe was great. Especially the complimentary cake.
That was fantastic, I love the idea of the ink bottle, really cleverly placed! I can't stand Ron and Hermione being together; I've always been obsessed D/Hr. Please don't make them kiss anymore, it just feels so wrong to be reading that kind of thing! 10/10, that was really good.