(applies to story so far): I enjoyed reading this. Alexandra is very sweet, although Snape seems slightly OOC. I liked how you focused on Snape but still wove a bit of what Harry was doing into it. Entertaining.
I enjoyed reading this. Both the story and the characters seemed to have a firm basis in canon as well as being appealing. I found the use of language interesting. I liked your style.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot...I'm glad you liked it. I'm sorry this is taking so long. I'm trying my best to stick to the wonderful characters (and world) that JK Rowling created...I think doing anything less wold be disrespectful to her wonderful creation.
Nice take on why Dumbledore trusted Snape. I like your use of language, the whole thing flows very nicely. I must admit that I don't understand the significance of the last line though.