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The Snake and the Eagle by Alessandra_C
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 70]

Summary: It's Harry Potter’s sixth school year and the world is under the impending menace of Lord Voldemort and his pitiless Death Eaters. A new teacher arrives to Hogwarts. Will it be another candidate for the DADA post? New friendships and love affairs sprang up under Albus Dumbledore’s benevolent gaze. A private Yule Ball. More bloody writing on the wall and a Muggle-born involved. Snape’s life is in great danger. The Second War begins. Who will be the winner?

Ship: Snape/OC

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94456 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 02/22/06


Reviewer: pen11 Signed
Date: 11/15/05 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

(applies to story so far): I enjoyed reading this. Alexandra is very sweet, although Snape seems slightly OOC. I liked how you focused on Snape but still wove a bit of what Harry was doing into it. Entertaining.

 

The Beginning by magic_quill
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Here is my version of the story of the Marauders’ first meeting through their eyes. A brief background of the characters showing the family ties on the morning of September 1st. I hope you enjoy it. Chapter two is currently being written. (1,244 words)

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5340 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
06/11/05 Updated: 11/17/05


Reviewer: pen11 Signed
Date: 10/21/05 Title: Chapter 2: On Platform 9 3/4

I enjoyed reading this. Both the story and the characters seemed to have a firm basis in canon as well as being appealing. I found the use of language interesting. I liked your style.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot...I'm glad you liked it. I'm sorry this is taking so long. I'm trying my best to stick to the wonderful characters (and world) that JK Rowling created...I think doing anything less wold be disrespectful to her wonderful creation.

 

His Eyes Were Black by SiriuslyMental
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Was he always evil? A little something I wrote in my spare time about Severus Snape.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2020 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/02/06 Updated: 06/08/06


Reviewer: pen11 Signed
Date: 06/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice take on why Dumbledore trusted Snape. I like your use of language, the whole thing flows very nicely. I must admit that I don't understand the significance of the last line though.

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