i like this fic. i've been following it for a little while and i was pleasantly surprised when there were two updates tonight. snape is one of my favorite characters and i feel you've captured his personality perfectly. your writing skills are good, and so are your storytelling skills. and, unless jk decides otherwise, this is one of those rare fics that i would say could easily fit inside HP canon (at least for me). good job, and keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Gosh. I'd say that was all too much praise, but we all know there's no such thing as too much praise... So instead I'll say 'thank you'. :)
i really enjoy this fic. i just finished reading what you have posted on fanfiction.net, and i wish you'd update because i really want to know what's going to happen.
my only... i guess you could call it a 'complaint'... is that they all seem to pick on pettigrew a bit too much, you know what i'm saying? sure, he's a dirty little bastard, but he was one of their friends. and the way they treat him during your story, it's no wonder he betrayed them.
but great story, i hope you keep updating, and quickly.
Author's Response: Wow, babe, thanx a bundle! So glad that someone's still checkin out my fic at fanfiction.net I'll be updating within two days, that means probably the 13th of Nov. Luv you so so much. Oh and yes, I did fix it to where the Marauders treat Peter like dirt, it was the only way in mind I could think why he might betray them, but he'll be treated kinder soon. Merci beacoup!
this fic really makes you think. that poor spider, by the way...
oh man, this chapter is awesome! i can't wait to find out what happens next, it's crazy!
i read both chapters and i like what i'm reading. i like the attitude, and the humor. sections are a little short, but i think you've got a few fics in the works right now, right? either way, please update as much as possible and keep up the good work.
whew, i was half-expecting grayson to be locked up for life. i'm looking forward to his next adventure!
Author's Response: Grayson is far too cool a character for me to lock him up for life.
i like the story so far. it's nice and long and all that. i'm assuming at least some bit of the story we're familiar with will make it's way into yours, so i'm looking forward to it. oh, and this quote:
“Plumbing travel, an alternate to Floo or as it is called…Ploo.”
i thought that was freaking hilarious. either way, keep up the story.
Author's Response: Thank You. No fear, part of the story we all know will indeed feature in this one, far more prominently than you may think.
wow, how delightfully morbid. i like it. good job. puts a nice twist on things.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm surprised that anyone actually read it, let alone enjoyed it.
your fics never cease to amaze me. with each one i read my respect for you as an author grows, and "window to the heart" is no different. your writing is beautiful and can easily manipulate the emotions of the reader. i actually found myself close to tears in the first chapter (sad tears) when sirius' cowboy doll (i'm guessing it's a toy story reference?) was destroyed by his mother and then again (happy tears this time) when remus got the acceptance letter to hogwarts towards the end. please continue to update, you can't leave us hanging.
wow, james really wasn't too bright, was he? lol, i like the story, keep it up.
Author's Response: Yeah I suppose you could say that. I reckon he just trusted Sirius just a little bit too much. His trust of his best friend blinded him so much that he couldn't see the dangers in what Sirius was suggesting. Thanks for your response! :-D
argh! cliff-hanger! the story's looking good! can't wait for more. keep it up.
omg that was hilarious. very damn funny, i loved it. sounds just like something fred and george would do.
this is a fun story. i like how it's going so far and i especially like how long the chapters are. keep it up!
holy crap, i looked at your profile and cleverly followed a series of links to your ff.net listing. why didn't you tell us you've got a lot more there? wow, it's like christmas! PoT for all! yay!
extremely cool fic. i can tell this is going to be one of my favorites. keep it up!
the sections are a little short, but i'm looking forward to finding out what happens.
Author's Response: Yeah, chapter 3 will be pretty long, glad of more constructive critism!
much better chapter length and content! keep up the good work!