Summary: It's Harry, Ron, and Hermione's 6th year at Hogwarts. With a little romance, a little bit of Voldemort, a lot of the Mauraders, and the best DADA teacher since Lupin(and he's in it too). There are a lot of changes and a lot of trouble. Harry discovers his increasing doubt in his talent, Hermione remains overworked and ever loyal, while Ron struggles to find out what he really means in the story.
(This is an AU!Sixth Year Fic)
An interesting fic, sometimes you need to watch out for your grammer, there were a load of punctuation marks missing, especially during the first few chapters. It was an interesting storyline, and definitely readable. I just don't see Harry and Hermione ever getting together...but everyone is different. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive review. My beta and I definately need to go over the first few chapters since she didn\'t come in but about half way through the project. Thank you.
Summary: She stands up to those who would tear her down. She laughs when others would cry. She sings when the rest of the world screams in anguish.
That was a good fic, I enjoyed it. The subtle humor and the way you portrayed Luna was excellent, I can just imagine her doing what you wrote down! I thought at first it was Hermione, being the smart (and brave) person she is. But I thought about half-way through it that you were portraying Hermione wrong, and it was more like Luna, lol. I enjoyed this, well done!
A Cinderella Story - In the Universe of Harry Potter by Powerful_Quill
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 308]
Summary: What if, in the 1300s, Hogwarts was a kingdom?
Follow the story of the young Prince of Hogwarts, a fair maiden, and one, not-so-orthodox fairy godmother. (AU)
I like it ;)
Summary: Harry suffers through another horrible day at the Dursleys'. Little does he know that this day will start him on a road of discovery and renewal.
Yes! I do hate you! But great story!
Brilliant! I take it all back!
Summary: Brown eyes staring—hair cascading—black blood pouring—stained rope pulling—bare neck snapping—frail heart breaking.
Aww that was awesome. You really portrayed the characters well, especially Harry, and the only downfall was that up until about three-quarters through it it was slightly confusing! Slightly creepy as well - but in a good way! Well done!
Summary: It's Lily's 6th year at Hogwarts and things just keep getting more and more confusing.
Alanna Potter, James' younger sister, seems to hate her without reason, James STILL won't stop flirting with her, and Sirius Black may have a crush on her! With all this in her head, it's hard for Lily to find out how she REALLY feels about James, until unexpectedly her so called worst enemy opens up her eyes.
(This is my second Lily and James fanfiction. I almost deleted the other one before realizing they aren't even similar so there would be no point. I just can't help that there are so many adorable ways to get them together.)
hee hee I'd like to note that I will never have enough skill to create characters as enchanting as Lily and the marauders. anyone you recognize belongs to JK and my only character is Sae. Alanna was invented by my bff as I've said in my other fanfic.
Hey I love it! Your writing is fantastic and I can't wait for the next update!
Aww, you got me hooked :)
Great storyline, nice job :)
Summary: A sixth year fic that explores what might happen if Harry moves past the angst and starts to put his life together and has a few things break his way for a change.
wow...I've never thought of the possibility that Nicholas Flamel could ever come back. Interesting, very interesting, it's added to my favourites!
Loved it. You could actually feel Harry's inner battle towards the end there! Sirius's letter was very moving too, you captured his character perfectly there.
Summary: Lily and James discovered that Peter had betrayed them before their death. They knew Voldemort was coming for them, and that they had nowhere to run. How can Lily bear to leave the young baby Harry all alone in the world? Sad, one-shot, featuring the song 'Baby Mine' from Dumbo.
Aww so sad! That was great, I liked the idea about the clock!
Summary: Harry has been dreading this moment, he can't, he won't, let Ginny die...as the final battle comes down to him and Voldemort will his heart, which is broken from losing so many he has loved, be able to defeat the darkest wizard of the age...
I've also thought about the parallels JK uses and I think they are great as well. This is exactly the way I would write the Final Battle, but I think you need to be a lot more descriptive e.g. what is happening in the background, who else is falling to the ground instead of what is directly around Harry. Grammar was good, couldn't find many faults! 9/10
Summary: Two friends owl each other anonymously, and begin to fall in love. When they meet at the dance and discover each other's true identities, will it ruin all, or will everything they've ever wished for come true?
That was a good, original storyline and I enjoyed it. I think the only thing I found wrong with it is that Harry seems to be quite good with Ginny, when they eventually meet, and I don't think Harry is supposed to be like that.
Summary: Harry and Ginny are destined to have a love that endures. He Who Must Not be Named certainly thinks so. Could their love be the key to fulfilling one of his greatest wishes?
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.
I especially love the way you wrote as Ron watching Harry and Ginny at the start, that was really well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Ron is a great big brother. :)
Ouch. Surprising ending!
Author's Response: lol! Surprises are fun?
I'm already hooked on this story, you are a fantastic writer!
I also thought, at the very end of this chapter, that you wrote Dumbledore perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I actually read Blood of the Heart a while ago and was looking at some of your other work when I came across this.
I feel I should read it again :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes - this is where it all began, for better or worse. :)
I love the way you end chapters with a different perspective, a creative addition to your wonderful story :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad that worked.
Summary: Harry has a surprise for Ginny, one that is truly deserved after all the dark of the war.
Aww awesome. I've always wondered what Ginny and Harry's wedding will be like, loved it!
Summary: Ginny's been waiting years to tell Harry she loves him. When it slips out unplanned, Harry has to figure out if he should push her away or pull her closer. A continuation of The Deal
Fluff to the extreme :)
My kind of story I think :D
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Yes, indeed! Fluff abounds. But that\'s not a bad thing now and again. :)