I love Harry Potter!!! Snape is NOT evil and Dumbledore is NOT dead, but then again, I also think Draco and Hermione are destined for each other...yes yes I know it's not possible, but that's why I write! Read my stories if you dare to believe in destiny. =)
That was enjoyable. No, I loved it!!! INCREDIBLE! You definitely have to continue, but why would the dementors kill Death Eaters? Good dialogue by the way, it kept the story flowing nicely.
Author's Response: Thanks again ; ) And you'll soon get further insight into the Dementor/Death Eater issue. I've just finished the chapter where that comes to light. Right now I'm working at a steady pace, and a new chapter should be posted every 2-3 days. Keep the comments coming; good or bad, they always help. : )
*speechless* woweee. hot stuff. Great job, really. wow. See, I knew I shouldn't have read it yet! I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted! IT'S SOO GOOD. PS-while I was writing my story, I used "per say" too, but did you know that it's actually "per se"? *shrugs* just thought you might wanna know. Excellent! I *heart* Malfoy.
Author's Response: Thanks A LOT... for the compliments and most of all, the correction. I really appreciate it. Next chapter should be up tonight... : )
Excellent!! Very well written, your vocabulary is impressive! Full of action and description; definitely in medias res...awesome. Keep it up! But to move the story along faster, sometimes dialogue helps.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It really means a lot; keeps me motivated to continue. I'm nearly ready to post the next chapter, and I only hope it's up to par with the first two. Please continue the feedback, and remember: I never mind some constructive criticism. Thanks again, I truly appreciate the compliments.