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I love Harry Potter!!! Snape is NOT evil and Dumbledore is NOT dead, but then again, I also think Draco and Hermione are destined for each other...yes yes I know it's not possible, but that's why I write! Read my stories if you dare to believe in destiny. =)
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Civility by SecretKeeper
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 341]

Summary: THE LAST CHAPTER IS IN! Read, review and enjoy! The first battle of the second War- Dementors illegally issuing the Kiss on Death Eaters- A murder in the Weasley family- Voldemort's plans- Dumbledore's and Harry's struggle. In the midst of this chaos and hardship, Hermione is left feeling slightly disheartened. When Harry and Ron are temporarily unavailable to befriend her, an ironic and seemingly platonic relationship is born. Will it ease the pain of the War's influence, or will it only create further turmoil for a girl that needs anything but? And in the end, a terrible decision is left to be made; one that no natural person would envy.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 62554 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/24/04 Updated: 04/13/05


Reviewer: Humansitis Signed
Date: 11/24/04 Title: Chapter 2: Dementors' Kiss

That was enjoyable. No, I loved it!!! INCREDIBLE! You definitely have to continue, but why would the dementors kill Death Eaters? Good dialogue by the way, it kept the story flowing nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks again ; ) And you'll soon get further insight into the Dementor/Death Eater issue. I've just finished the chapter where that comes to light. Right now I'm working at a steady pace, and a new chapter should be posted every 2-3 days. Keep the comments coming; good or bad, they always help. : )

 
Reviewer: Humansitis Signed
Date: 11/28/04 Title: Chapter 3: Birth of Irony

*speechless* woweee. hot stuff. Great job, really. wow. See, I knew I shouldn't have read it yet! I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted! IT'S SOO GOOD. PS-while I was writing my story, I used "per say" too, but did you know that it's actually "per se"? *shrugs* just thought you might wanna know. Excellent! I *heart* Malfoy.

Author's Response: Thanks A LOT... for the compliments and most of all, the correction. I really appreciate it. Next chapter should be up tonight... : )

 
Reviewer: Humansitis Signed
Date: 11/24/04 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: In Medias Res

Excellent!! Very well written, your vocabulary is impressive! Full of action and description; definitely in medias res...awesome. Keep it up! But to move the story along faster, sometimes dialogue helps.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It really means a lot; keeps me motivated to continue. I'm nearly ready to post the next chapter, and I only hope it's up to par with the first two. Please continue the feedback, and remember: I never mind some constructive criticism. Thanks again, I truly appreciate the compliments.

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