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There are a few other stories I have written, and these have been removed to put them onto another site. You can read them at http://www.fanfiction.net/u/991894/ My apologies to those who have put those stories in their favourites list - thanks for that by the way!
If you read my stories, please review them, whether that review be good, bad or otherwise. I need feedback! Don't make me beg. It does nothing for my dignity.
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Crossing Over by running_swift
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 93]

Summary: It was everything I ever wanted since it happened; to relish in power, to not be what people wanted me to be... to be different. To be who I wasn't; Hermione Granger, insufferable know-it-all.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15836 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
11/24/05 Updated: 02/19/06


Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Your Prologue piqued my curiousity and the first chapter didn't give too much away. I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you!! You've made me a very happy bunny!! (not in the literal sense...)

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 11/28/05 Title: None

This was so beautiful in it's darkness, it left me breathless and quite speechless. Well done.

 

A Different Road by black_ink
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 497]

Summary: [Year 1: Complete] Harry's a Slytherin and friends with Draco Malfoy. How will his years at Hogwarts turn out, now that he's a Slytherin? Will he turn to the Dark Arts and be a follower of Voldemort? Or will he kill Voldemort, or die trying, after he learns of the prophecy? Will Harry's choices lead him down a different road? Follow and you will see...

"The first step, my son, which one makes in the world, is the one on which depends the rest of our days." -Voltaire

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Violence

Word count: 69340 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/05/05 Updated: 10/09/06


Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 05/04/06 Title: Chapter 14: Taken Away

Hmmm...Me thinks that Dumbledore is very curious about young Harry. You're leading up to a twist, I can feel it! lol
Bring on the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hahaha...You know I like writing twists. But we\'ll see if I can turn this into one. ~Sara

 

From Which There Is No Return by Eilime
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 76]

Summary: It is Harry, Ron, and Hermione’s last year at Hogwarts and with wishes of nice endings to their school careers it is certain that such a thing does not exist. From the very beginning Harry finds himself in danger caused by none other than Draco Malfoy. Adolescent quarrel leads to a dead end for the Gryffindor hero. With an inexplicable connection to a person he had never thought trustworthy, Harry must go through yet more perils. And when love makes an unnecessary appearance for five youngsters, everything gets even more complicated. Now complete!

Harry/Hermione, Ron/Hermione, Draco/Utter and Complete Loneliness, Draco/Ginny, Ginny/Seamus

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 49735 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/08/05 Updated: 10/02/06


Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 12/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: Abduction

I like the way you've started this. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 03/21/06 Title: None

I really like that you've layed the groundwork for a very involved story. Between Ron and Hermione's obvious relationship problems (I'm assuming that they are together), Ginny being lonely and pining for Harry and Harry trying to convince himself that he's in love with Matti all make for a potentially awesome story.
To echo what someone else said in your reviews, a beta might be a good idea. I'm not sure what other beta's do, but mine basically reads my story, edits any spelling and grammatical errors (which we both oftentimes miss!), points out any inconsistancies and helps with the flow of the story and gives me inspiration when I get stuck. The story fubdamentally stays the same, but it's soo much better after Bec has read it! If you need an editor (or beta) I'd be happy to be yours.
Lastly, I went to your profile and I'm am amazed that you're only 14!!! Good god woman, I thought you were so much older than that. You're writing style is so mature. I've read fic from people twice your age that is no where near as interesting and original. I'm very impressed!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks soo much! I'm glad you liked the story, and thanks for all the compliments! Maybe I do need a beta... how do Beta's work? I don't really get it. I mean I know what they do, but how do they read your story? Anyway, thanks for offering ^_^ If you would it would be very helpful. I have problems with my dialogue, or so the moderators tell me ^_^ Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 03/21/06 Title: None

Oohh, I jst so want to sock both Harry and Mathilda in the chops! What a cowardly way to break up with someone and I reckon that Mathilda isn't the real deal, either. I must ammend my last review - Ron and Hermione were together, past tense. I get it now. On to chapter three!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have to say that I reckon Harry's a bit of a jerk. Even in the real books, even though I'm not sure he's THAT much of a jerk in those. Everyone seems to think Matilda is an imposter or something, but she's not! She's actually got a very sad History which comes up in chapter five. My friend, tonks_667, suggests that I kill her off. I guess I'll have to see where the story goes! (It sounds silly, but I'm rooting for Ginny. I know I can make whatever I want to happen happen, but I feel like this story has a mind of its own!) Anyway, thanks for reviewing! ^_^

 
Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 03/21/06 Title: None

...and the plot thickens... :D
Serioulsy, though, I really like your style, and you're concepts are very original. A rogue sorting hat? Who would have thought? One thing though, and that is I cannot see McGonagall blindly following the Ministry on anything, but I'm sure you have your reasons. :)
Well done, and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: ^_^ For once someone didn't say they were confused by it! I'm actually regretting the rogue Sorting hat, because the way it goes rogue doesn't seem realistic to me anymore. Especially since I read something on J.K's site that proves it wrong!

You are right, McGonagall wouldn't do that. I never really thought of that lol, but thanks for pointing it out ^_^ And about that Beta position? If you would, could you be my beta? ^_^ Anyway, thanks for reviewing. I love reviews!

 

White Wedding by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary:

"Aside from blood, he didn't believe there was anything left in the world that was truly pure, but Lucius lifted his glass anyway."

After the betrothal dinner, Malfoy's tete a tete with Narcissa transforms a marital arrangement into something more satisfying.

 



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 2182 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/17/06 Updated: 02/17/06


Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: White Wedding

It's not often that I read fan fiction that portrays the relationship with Lucius and Narcissa as anything other than loveless and controlling. I really liked the 'tete a tete' between them and you gave us a better glimpse of how strong Narcissa can be.
Hehehe...Bellatrix hairless, hehee...

Author's Response: There's an old Brit film called "The Witches" with Anjelica Houston as the best witch- she turns the boy hero into a mouse- and in film witches are all bald, wearing wigs. I got a kick out of thinking of Bella like that. ^_^

 
Reviewer: GBrampton Signed
Date: 02/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: White Wedding

It's not often that I read fan fiction that portrays the relationship with Lucius and Narcissa as anything other than loveless and controlling. I really liked the 'tete a tete' between them and you gave us a better glimpse of how strong Narcissa can be.
Hehehe...Bellatrix hairless, hehee...

Author's Response: Cool, a Matrix review (what I call any second copy- the film said deja vu was just a glitch in the Matrix, heh) so now I can say what I forgot to before....Thanks! ^_^

 
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