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Date: 10/08/05 Title: None

You are writing about British characters, but you are obviously American. Please research British slang for your dialogues. It's a shame you missed this, because the story has a lot of promise. PLEASE! make Harry and Luna sound English for Chapter 2! With the right English, I'd have given this an 8.