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"Tell me one last thing," said Harry. "Is this real? Or has this been happening inside my head?"
"Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?"

That's the way I feel about fanfiction... Sigh. It's my favorite line of DH; I was so happy to hear it in the final movie.



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Big, huge, gargantuan, colossal, magnanimous, gigantic, wonderful, squeeze-worthy, giant.... I've run out of adjectives....big thank you to babekitty_92 for the beautiful banner! I nearly was in tears when I saw it. I don't know why I was, because it's so simple, but I love it sooo much! Thank you! *squeeze*


So, I'm no longer in high school, which means my penname is rather outdated. Nevertheless, freshman year will always be a special time for me because that's when I started here at MNFF. ;D I now attend the American Academy of Art in downtown Chicago, and I major in illustration.

I love Harry Potter and decided in freshman year of high school (hence the penname) to start a story. I'm incredibly flattered that the story has been accepted the way it has, and it warms my heart to read the reviews. (And yes- I know that sounded chessy. :D) I also have an account at Fanfiction.com, under the penname: Io.sono.Emilia., on which I've posted this story also. So before you accuse me of stealing a story....


Read the stories; maybe you'll get something about me out of them.


Thanks to all of you for sticking around! Maybe one day in the future I'll start working on a brief epilogue, or even a few sequels and one-shots based on other characters. Life's been a bit hectic, but I'll return to it one day... I had fun while it lasted. :D Thanks again!
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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/29/06 Title: None

That was sooo cute! Ah! I knew something like that was going to happen as soon as Bill and Laura were caught under the mistletoe. That was soo brilliant! I love this story already, and I have seven more chapters to read before the end of what you have posted. I am definetly going to recommend this to one of my friends who I have hooked. I loved it. The Ginny and Harry kiss was so cute. Perfect. I didn't mind that this chapter was long- it was magnificent. Lovely job. Jeez, I really do go on, don't I? :-)

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/29/06 Title: None

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! No Chris No! *sniffles* No, Ron, you silly fool. *sniffle* Oh, poor Ron. I had a very big suspicion that that was gonna happen, but, darn! Love the story.

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/31/06 Title: None

Oh, woah. I didn't notice until I reread the last bit (I had finished the chapter rather haphazardly as my sis was standing, reading over my shoulder) that someone saw Hermione and Ron. Whoops. I hope it's Harry, and NOT Chris or Tony. Hmm..That was sweet chapter...hehe

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/30/06 Title: None

Bella Mia! Nooo! Please let there be more...let there magically be more chapters to read! That last one had me in near tears! I feel soo bad for them but even more for "Ickle Chrissy". THough, I think he has somehting to do with the whole IWP thing, and more then just being a target. That riddle...I have a feeling it has something to do with love, But I'll have to go and check it out! I can't believe that they just did that! Ah! Oh, but it was so good! I had to hold a peice of paper up to the screen just so I wouldn't read ahead and ruin the story! Anyway, that's a lot of exclamation marks! Hehe. Great story, keep it coming!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 07/06/06 Title: None

Well. now that school is out, or should be, maybe you can update sooner? It's a pretty good story so far, but I want to know what's gonna happen. *wants to know* Haha. I noticed a few mistakes, I think, but I can't remember them. Haha. Update!

 

Summary:

"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/23/05 Title: Chapter 60: Moving On

It took me a few days, but i was able to read the whole sixty chapters: and I loved it! It was very well written, and I can't really say what bits or people i disliked the most. Venus was pretty bad, but hey? What bad guy isn't? I also don't like the fact that sooner or later, Halle and Katy are gonna have to either die, or have something really bad happen to them. Well, thanks for the enjoyment, and I am off to read "Catch My Fall". And I am sorry that I didn't read this sooner. Absolutely Spiffing!

 

Snow by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: Ron and Hermione enjoy a snowy day at Hogwarts.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1025 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 11/08/04


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 06/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Snow

that was even more sweet! HEhe

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 06/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Snow

that was even more sweet! HEhe

 

Mission Accomplished by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 61]

Summary: When Fred and George decide to help ickle Ronniekins get a girl, much chaos and hilarity ensues.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1739 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/08/04 Updated: 11/08/04


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 06/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mission Accomplished

That was cute. I'm not sure if I really liked your lack of "said Fred," or "exclaimed Ron" and that type of thing, but it works. NIce work.

 

I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1038]

Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66757 Chapters: 56 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 09/27/11


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/13/06 Title: Chapter 47: Consequences

Well, i will let the fact that it took you so like forever to update, so I have to go back over the previous chapters slide and say that this chapter was pretty cool. Two confessions. James's last line was quite funny, but it didn't pass up Lily's line of "James Potter, what have you done to me." Pretty cool. Great job, and I hope you will update soon...er. Sooner I mean...hehe

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/13/06 Title: Chapter 47: Consequences

I forgot to add this in that last comment. For you chapter summary, I think you should stop carrying over the same chapter info. That is, frankly, annoying that I can't figure out what happens in each chapter without actually going through it. I think you should make each chapter's summary be a summary of the chapter...one that makes the reader want to read it. For example, you could use this for this chapter: "After a disaterous night, Sirius wakes up, and Remus makes a confession. Then, Lily makes her own confession to the still unconcious James." Or something of the sort. Yeah, that is what I think.

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 01/23/06 Title: Chapter 48: Peter's Shining Moment

Dude. Polyjuice rocks! Of course it was James, we shoulda known. Gah. Tricky little writer. *narrows eyes*...*laughs* Good chapter, and I really do think you should do something about your chapters. You can leave the one you have up the same, but then for each chapter after that, change the summary. It doesn't have to be long at all. You can do that, as I am sure you know, in the Edit Story section of your main menu. Suggestion. Great chapter, great story!

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 12/09/05 Title: Chapter 46: Fleeing the Tree

it took a while, but it was good. I have always wondered just what happened that night... you portrayed it pretty well! Keep it up, and don't worry, I think everyone hates school work too.

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/14/05 Title: Chapter 45: Flirting With Danger

Hehehe. I like it! I just read the whole story tonight, though it took about five hours, with breaks of course! I think i passed it up once before because of the 45 chapters, but that wasn't to smart because I like it alot! Keep updating, and i agree with whoever wanted Lily and James to kiss- they should! :-)

 

Time Moves Slowly by GwendolynJames
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: It’s a phenomenon that I will never understand. The one day in a woman’s life when she wants time to fly is the day when it decides to move as slowly as possible.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1156 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/12/04 Updated: 11/12/04


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 06/30/06 Title: Chapter 1: Time Moves Slowly

Ooh..I liked that.

 

Summary:

All's fair in love and war

Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 93408 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/04 Updated: 04/26/05


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 11/28/05 Title: Chapter 50: Good Riddance

I just finished reading this, obviously, and I love it. YOu are a fantastic author, and I wil definetly go off to read No Rain now. Thank's for the great read, and I hope you don't delete your account so I can go back and read your stories for a long time coming. Brilliant!

 

Summary: What if, in the 1300s, Hogwarts was a kingdom? Follow the story of the young Prince of Hogwarts, a fair maiden, and one, not-so-orthodox fairy godmother. (AU)

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 17118 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/04 Updated: 07/03/05


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 07/05/06 Title: Chapter 10: Happily Ever After

"And don’t be afraid to smack around the blonde one back there,” he hadded, jabbing his thumb behind him. “Got a mouth him, he does.” Muahaha. I loved Draco in this one. Great! Very fun story. Gosh, when was the last time I saw Disney's Cinderella? Whoa...Eh whatever. There were quite a few mistakes- wrong spellings, and wrong words, stuff like that. Not too bad, though.

 

Summary: The girls decide to throw a sleep over at number twelve. What happens when the boys show up and Fred and George introduce their lastes invention?

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3378 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/20/04 Updated: 11/27/04


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

*laughs* That was great. Perfect comic relief. Great job. You're right...that statement you made in the first chapter about boys having limited POVs is definetly true...they only see what's right in front of them....well, not even then. HEhe. Great job!

 

Summary:

It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.

But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.

But life is full of mistakes.

..::~!~::..

"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.

“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”

“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.

Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.

Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 40943 Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Published:
11/28/04 Updated: 10/03/05


Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 02/18/06 Title: Chapter 26: Betraying Alarm and Alarming Betrayal

Well, I was a bit confused on many points. Why are they taking a train to Hogsmeade? The station is in Hogsmeade. Why in the world was James so angry? Where did James go and why hasn't anyone gone to look by the trees? Why was that one chapter with the griffin nearly completely italicised? Why does everyone think James and Lily are going out? Well, anyway. I don't know if this is honesty one of the best stories I have read, but it's not bad. Be a good author and update for the readers, eh? Hehe.

 
Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie Signed
Date: 02/18/06 Title: Chapter 17: Professor Madres, Part Two

This is pretty good story so far, and I just finished this chapter. Before I go on, I just want to review to say: "How many titles does this story need?" It starts out as "James and Lily: Hate and Love: Life and Death". Then it goes to "Arrogance and Perfection: Two People, One World", then "James and Lily: Life and Death" then finally "James and Lily: A Series of (Un)Fortunate Events". Oi. It's just seems kinda wierd, that's all. *goes to finish story*

 
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