"Tell me one last thing," said Harry. "Is this real? Or has this been happening inside my head?"
"Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real?"
That's the way I feel about fanfiction... Sigh. It's my favorite line of DH; I was so happy to hear it in the final movie.
Big, huge, gargantuan, colossal, magnanimous, gigantic, wonderful, squeeze-worthy, giant.... I've run out of adjectives....big thank you to babekitty_92 for the beautiful banner! I nearly was in tears when I saw it. I don't know why I was, because it's so simple, but I love it sooo much! Thank you! *squeeze*
So, I'm no longer in high school, which means my penname is rather outdated. Nevertheless, freshman year will always be a special time for me because that's when I started here at MNFF. ;D I now attend the American Academy of Art in downtown Chicago, and I major in illustration.
I love Harry Potter and decided in freshman year of high school (hence the penname) to start a story. I'm incredibly flattered that the story has been accepted the way it has, and it warms my heart to read the reviews. (And yes- I know that sounded chessy. :D) I also have an account at Fanfiction.com, under the penname: Io.sono.Emilia., on which I've posted this story also. So before you accuse me of stealing a story....
Read the stories; maybe you'll get something about me out of them.
Thanks to all of you for sticking around! Maybe one day in the future I'll start working on a brief epilogue, or even a few sequels and one-shots based on other characters. Life's been a bit hectic, but I'll return to it one day... I had fun while it lasted. :D Thanks again!
That was sooo cute! Ah! I knew something like that was going to happen as soon as Bill and Laura were caught under the mistletoe. That was soo brilliant! I love this story already, and I have seven more chapters to read before the end of what you have posted. I am definetly going to recommend this to one of my friends who I have hooked. I loved it. The Ginny and Harry kiss was so cute. Perfect. I didn't mind that this chapter was long- it was magnificent. Lovely job. Jeez, I really do go on, don't I? :-)
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! No Chris No! *sniffles* No, Ron, you silly fool. *sniffle* Oh, poor Ron. I had a very big suspicion that that was gonna happen, but, darn! Love the story.
Oh, woah. I didn't notice until I reread the last bit (I had finished the chapter rather haphazardly as my sis was standing, reading over my shoulder) that someone saw Hermione and Ron. Whoops. I hope it's Harry, and NOT Chris or Tony. Hmm..That was sweet chapter...hehe
Bella Mia! Nooo! Please let there be more...let there magically be more chapters to read! That last one had me in near tears! I feel soo bad for them but even more for "Ickle Chrissy". THough, I think he has somehting to do with the whole IWP thing, and more then just being a target. That riddle...I have a feeling it has something to do with love, But I'll have to go and check it out! I can't believe that they just did that! Ah! Oh, but it was so good! I had to hold a peice of paper up to the screen just so I wouldn't read ahead and ruin the story! Anyway, that's a lot of exclamation marks! Hehe. Great story, keep it coming!
Well. now that school is out, or should be, maybe you can update sooner? It's a pretty good story so far, but I want to know what's gonna happen. *wants to know* Haha. I noticed a few mistakes, I think, but I can't remember them. Haha. Update!
that was even more sweet! HEhe
that was even more sweet! HEhe
That was cute. I'm not sure if I really liked your lack of "said Fred," or "exclaimed Ron" and that type of thing, but it works. NIce work.
Well, i will let the fact that it took you so like forever to update, so I have to go back over the previous chapters slide and say that this chapter was pretty cool. Two confessions. James's last line was quite funny, but it didn't pass up Lily's line of "James Potter, what have you done to me." Pretty cool. Great job, and I hope you will update soon...er. Sooner I mean...hehe
I forgot to add this in that last comment. For you chapter summary, I think you should stop carrying over the same chapter info. That is, frankly, annoying that I can't figure out what happens in each chapter without actually going through it. I think you should make each chapter's summary be a summary of the chapter...one that makes the reader want to read it. For example, you could use this for this chapter: "After a disaterous night, Sirius wakes up, and Remus makes a confession. Then, Lily makes her own confession to the still unconcious James." Or something of the sort. Yeah, that is what I think.
Dude. Polyjuice rocks! Of course it was James, we shoulda known. Gah. Tricky little writer. *narrows eyes*...*laughs* Good chapter, and I really do think you should do something about your chapters. You can leave the one you have up the same, but then for each chapter after that, change the summary. It doesn't have to be long at all. You can do that, as I am sure you know, in the Edit Story section of your main menu. Suggestion. Great chapter, great story!
it took a while, but it was good. I have always wondered just what happened that night... you portrayed it pretty well! Keep it up, and don't worry, I think everyone hates school work too.
Hehehe. I like it! I just read the whole story tonight, though it took about five hours, with breaks of course! I think i passed it up once before because of the 45 chapters, but that wasn't to smart because I like it alot! Keep updating, and i agree with whoever wanted Lily and James to kiss- they should! :-)
Ooh..I liked that.
"And don’t be afraid to smack around the blonde one back there,” he hadded, jabbing his thumb behind him. “Got a mouth him, he does.” Muahaha. I loved Draco in this one. Great! Very fun story. Gosh, when was the last time I saw Disney's Cinderella? Whoa...Eh whatever. There were quite a few mistakes- wrong spellings, and wrong words, stuff like that. Not too bad, though.
*laughs* That was great. Perfect comic relief. Great job. You're right...that statement you made in the first chapter about boys having limited POVs is definetly true...they only see what's right in front of them....well, not even then. HEhe. Great job!
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes...::~!~::..
"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
Well, I was a bit confused on many points. Why are they taking a train to Hogsmeade? The station is in Hogsmeade. Why in the world was James so angry? Where did James go and why hasn't anyone gone to look by the trees? Why was that one chapter with the griffin nearly completely italicised? Why does everyone think James and Lily are going out? Well, anyway. I don't know if this is honesty one of the best stories I have read, but it's not bad. Be a good author and update for the readers, eh? Hehe.
This is pretty good story so far, and I just finished this chapter. Before I go on, I just want to review to say: "How many titles does this story need?" It starts out as "James and Lily: Hate and Love: Life and Death". Then it goes to "Arrogance and Perfection: Two People, One World", then "James and Lily: Life and Death" then finally "James and Lily: A Series of (Un)Fortunate Events". Oi. It's just seems kinda wierd, that's all. *goes to finish story*
hey, i think it is about time that you updated, eh? :-) While this isn't best story i have read on MNFF, i still want to figure out what is next!
Count on Ron to be completely oblvious. Just-- whoosh-- right over his head. *swipes hand over head quickly* I agree with Harry, Brilliant! I'm adding you to my favorites! hehe