By Suzie (crazy_purple_hp_freak)
Made by nysuperstarz
Hey, I love this series, its great! And a totally unexpected ending... 10/10 ~ Lisa xxx
Lily and James: Their Story of Love by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 3878]
Summary:
"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
OMG IM SO VERY SORRY YOU DID GET YOUR FACTS RIGHT!! james is a seeker and im very sorry! sorrysorrysorry! anyway, gd story lisa xxx
im really liking this story but there is just 1 thing that i hate 2 say but i have 2 because im a perfectionist, this is that james was infact a chaser not a seeker anpart fom that FANTASTIC START!!
Ginny's Gift by Ashwinder
Rated: [Reviews - 361]
Summary: Ginny gives Harry a special birthday present, but the consequences are unexpected. Written pre-OOP.
I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Through the Glass Darkly by Ashwinder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]
Summary: Ginny observes Harry after the events at the Department of Mysteries. A missing moment from the end of OOP.
aww that was so...wow. That was heartwarming and sweet and just....awwww! You can really see how Ginny is so understanding, but knows there is nothing she can do to help Harry. So...amazing.
That has to be my favourite one-shot on here...10/10
Lisa xxx
The Long Road Home by Ashwinder
Rated: [Reviews - 334]
Summary: Sequel to Ginny's Gift. Read that story first. Harry must deal with the aftermath of Voldemort's defeat. Written pre-OOP.
oh my god. you had me scared then. seriously. lol
Wow. That was really amazing. I have spent the last few days reading Ginnys Gift and this, and you are really a fantastic writer. I absolutely love your writing style, its as if you can see a little bit of the Author in ever description or whatever you wrote, it was very personal, and you can see in your writing how much hard work, determination and faith you put into producing this story, and making to work so well.
You can tell you planned this story carefully, and took everyones charecter into account when writing descriptions and diologue. You made it clear the Harry is not just hot headed, Ginny is not just a fierce temper, Hermione is not just a book worm, and Ron is not just proud. You made the charecters real by giving their personalities different layers and showing what influences, scares, humours and embarreses them. Your original charecters are so real and natural, and some truely hysterical (Mrs Mutt) and yet, they seem like REAL people.You are the Charecter builder i wish i could be.
I agree with you when you say it makes the story more real and believeable, when you had Harry never getting his powers back. It shows he made true and peminant sacrifices.
Usually in fan fics, i have a strage annoyance with people who change points of view, but, in this story, you made the change overs so natural and well placed, it didnt matter. It made the story a whole lot more interesting with the Weasleys back story and showing how deep Ginnys love for Harry is.
You also made the love in this story so natural. It made the reader believe it. Somthing that some writers find hard, and it just shows your writing talents to what they really are.
Your "out takes" where great. I especially loved "The Reaction". I think it was written by
(continued form my last review, it spontaniously cut its self off)
Maid Marian, who seriously had me worried that Mrs Weasley had either thrown Ginny out, or murdered her and Harry, and when it turned out to be a joke, i swear i nearly died laughing.
There are so many different thing i loved about this story. I'll just limit it to two more things. The first being the revenge on Reater Skeeter. Oh, the "ZAP" thing had me laughing again. All the humour in the story had me laughing.
The final thing is the i dont usually like the Angst scene, and i nearly didnt carry on reading when you said there would be a lot of it in this story, but i carried on reading anyway, and you put everthing in just the right preportions, that you did have an angst scene, but you usually had some sort of humour after, to lighten the mood, so not to depress the readers.
You had me crying from both laughter and sadness through this story, and you could really feel the charecter emotions, and it touches you, because you put these charecters on impossible situaltions, as it tends to happen a lot in fan fiction, and you make the readers really FEEL what the charecters are going through.
My final congratulations to you on this story go to you, and im sorry if i bored you with such a long review. I just wanted to let you know what i felt about this story. 10/10.
Lisa xxx
I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1038]
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.
brilliant as ushual!!! keep it up!!! fluff!!! dont let yr mum stop you!!! i will cry!!! i read yr storys!!! anyhoo, yay! i like it a lot 10/10!! Lisa xxx
you gonna update anytime soon?
omg i just made the ongest review of my life- and then it decides NOT TO BLOODY SEND! ahhh owel it basicly said "wow that was great" and "omg i know ez a snivelly git but remus wont be able to live with hisself if he bites sum1!" n stuff like that so, yeh, great story! 10! Lisa xxx
gah!!! come on mods!!!!
Lisa xxx
Potter's Charm by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 2501]
Summary:
All's fair in love and war
Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP
Omg I was just browsing around the new mnff thingy and I clicked on "the tens" and then on "most reviewd stories" and two of your storys are on it- 1st and 3rd- WOW!! hehe oh yeah, amazing story btw... Lisa xxx
To See You Through The Dark by Narwen3
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 1598]
Summary: PRE-HBP!!! Harry starts out his sixth year in sorrow at the loss of Sirius. Ginny helps him to overcome it, and our heroes learn a lot about life and love. This story has been completed! Special thanks to my mod, Danielle and to my fantastic readers!
gr8 story 10/10- sorry for the short review
Author's Response: No problem, short reviews are far better than no reviews at all!
oh wow i loved it!! my fave bit has to have been when ol' moldy shorts blew up....i mean, how could it not? And you are totally right about harry just kinda. screaming out his pain to the world, coz hes just been through a LOT, you know, killing a murderer here, seeing his headmaster die there...
Author's Response: Exactly. It\'s really the best for for Voldy to go. Just kind of get blasted with a jet of love and, blow up! I\'m glad that you liked it, especially the screaming part which is one of my favorites.
P.S. ROCK ON SPOILERS!!!! and OMG! my last review was your 1000th! WOOT!! go you!
Author's Response: Did you get the 1000th? I was wondering who it would be. Can you believe that I\'ve come that far to getting a thousand reviews??? I sure as heck can\'t!
great story- just 1 thing what happened 2 viktor krums accent?
Author's Response: You know, several people have mentioned that and I could have sworn that I had fixed it. Oh well. I'll go take care of that now. Don't worry, the accent is back later in the story. I don't know what I was thinking. . .
oh wow i loved it!! my fave bit has to have been when ol' moldy shorts blew up....i mean, how could it not? And you are totally right about harry just kinda. screaming out his pain to the world, coz hes just been through a LOT, you know, killing a murderer here, seeing his headmaster die there...
Author's Response: ditto
omg i cant believe there only one more chapter left! The memorial was perfect - exactly what the people that died deserved. UPDATE SOON!
Lisa xxx
Author's Response: I know!!! It doesn\'t seem real to me. Of course, I can\'t believe that somehow it ended up forty-eight chaptes long.
I loved the memorial, even if I am the one who wrote it. It satisfied everything within me that I was craving. I\'ll try to hurry the update.
