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This is awesome. The main story line is so cool. And I love how the H/Hr/R/D triangle is forming. I gave you an eight for spelling and grammer mistakes. But I loved it! ~ The Love of Lily
I didn't like your story when I first read it. I still don't like the over all story but I'm beginning to like it and it's growing on me. Your an amazing writer and I really like your style. I'm sorry but there is this one thing that is making me go crazy. You keep spelling realizing as realising. I'm sorry to bug you about it. Um...I think that rupertfan is being nasty and you should do something about it. I'm giving you an 8 out of 10. Okay? Um...You rock Dawn!
I think you have a good plot and story line. I like your way of writing, it really captivates the reader. Just please update! ~ The Love of Lily
I feel so left out. Everyone is saying 'I hope she isn't going to do what I think she is going to do.' and 'OMG SHE'S GOING TO DO THAT!' and I'm sitting here, fuming, bc you left me with a cliffhanger and I have no clue as to what is going to happen and what the chapter was about. I'm completely confused. But other than that, that was an awesome chapter. You are an awesome writer. I'm so impressed. Wow. Wow. Wow.
Wow! Amazing plot line. I could not have thought up a story better than that. You are a very good writer to. Keep writing and up-date. ~ The Love of Lily
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I'm trying to update the story every chance I get. Course, I have to update it when I'm at school...Anyways, keep R & R when you see more chapters up!
Wow! That was very, very impressive. I could feel his pain, anger, sadness, fear. It was amazing. I don't know what to say except that it was amazing. Wow.
Your cliffies are quite um...interesting... yeah. well I think the person she sees is... CROOKSHANKS!! Yeah, that's it. Yeah...um...are you scared of me now? haha...
Author's Response: Umm I do't know whether to say that I think you saying that they are interesting because it it good or bad. Hmm that sentence didn't make much sence... oh well. No it takes a lot for me to get scared... I am just like that... except maybe worse haha!! The next chapter is written but I haven't had time to type it yet, with all this school and stuff!!! Those high school teachers pack it on, ya know?
I thought your story was quit strange (like I can talk, look at my story) But the ending was really creative and cute. I loved it! Yeah, well...
Author's Response: well, yeah, i was in a strange mood? haha. Thanks for revewing!
Wow. Good start. I loved the tone of it. It had a sort of rythm, you know. Keep working at it~ The Love of Lily
Author's Response: Thanks.