Well...I LOVE Harry Potter books and I can't wait for the GoF movie and Book 7...which is why I'm writing my own. Hope you enjoy.
Disclaimer: JKR created the world of Harry Potter. I'm just using her creation with my storyline. Darn!
Bloody brilliant!!! I read ch.9 on your live journal and I just cannot wait until you update!!!! HURRY!! P.S. I'd love if you'd read my fanfic because I think that you would probably have some wonderful ideas for me!
Definitely update quicker with shorter chapters!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been following your story and I must say that it is excellent. I do feel, however, that this chapter may have deserved an R rating for strong language and sexual insinuations. I have no problem with reading R rated fics because I read fics based on the scenarios in them, not the rating. I just thought that other people may look at the PG-13 and read this chapter without worrying about it. ANYWAY...excellent chapter. Keep up the good work and update soon. 10/10
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I don't believe it deserves an R rating, nor do the mods. I haven't really described anything in a way that would need an R rating, but I will take your advice to heart. If other people believe it deserves that rating, please feel free to tell me because I really wouldn't want to make anyone uncomfortable. Thanks for the great review though!
That was really good and really sad. I like that you didn't have Harry become a murderer. I think that you illustrated him perfectly. Keep it up!